Adventures of Caelereth

Character and Story Creation => Roleplay Questions and Story Creation => Topic started by: SeverineHalo on July 27, 2003, 04:56:22 AM



Title: How's my driving?
Post by: SeverineHalo on July 27, 2003, 04:56:22 AM
Hey all. This is just a thread where all you role playing experts (and even newcomers) can post your thoughts my my story thus far. I'll be doing this like once a week or so. Just say how you like it so far, what adjustments can be made, and any ideas that would be nice. Thank you all for your time. Since I plan on writing more stories, I figure that I could get better with each one.

"Once again, the lone soldier walks off into the sunset..." -Anonymous



Title: Re: How's my driving?
Post by: Gararion on July 27, 2003, 05:58:22 AM
Shouldn't this be in your story?  I mean there isn't many people who keep an eye on stories that they are not involved with.  Though I do see its reason for being here, as it seems you wish t target a larger crowd then just those playing in your story.  :rolleyes  



Title: Re: How's my driving?
Post by: SeverineHalo on July 27, 2003, 06:05:22 AM
ah! you're right! (gotta think more next time...)

K! I'm moving this to my story! heheheh....

"Once again, the lone soldier walks off into the sunset..." -Anonymous