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Title: Mithral Murder (Majorly edited!!!!!)
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on May 20, 2006, 11:50:23 PM
new update.

The storyline:


The storyline is about an Eophyrhim elf and how his mother has died. People have been hearing of a murdering cult of a necromancer and wind mage taking victims and doing illegal tests of dark wind magic. A group of dwarves, elves, and humans have met up with each other. They talk about the cult when another human and an Eophyrhim elf enter and tell the story of how his mother was a victim.

They search around the world for the cult, and fight them twice. The wind mage then turnes up and makes his choice on whether he wants to flee or fight. The group sets out to find the cave, and goes through Paelelon forest, where many people insult the group and wish to fight them, a few who actually do. The group sets out and finds the cave where the cult lies. They fight there, where a people get injured, and the cult flees, except for the wind mage, who is captured and forced to help them.

The fight is not over yet, however, for the enemy still lives. He has fleed to a hidden part of the shining forest, unknown to most people. The group is lead there by The new wind mage, who eventually gets caught and switches sides. He leads them to the enemy, who is now more powerful then ever. He has plenty of lackeys now, and the fight goes on for seemingly forever. They finally beat the boss, who has fled to the corner of Santharia, never to be seen again.

The people rejoice. They have destroyed the cult that has been killing people in Santharia for years. They have made a great difference. Now they think they are heroes.

-Co Mods-

I have decided to have two Co Mods. The two are Thorgas Ironforge and So Orril Mesiefer. However, I will not except them if they are not willing to take the job. I have also decided that Thorgas and I will be the main ones to talk to when having problems. especially grammar or something. Orril shall still have the task of looking over the CD requests, Thorgas and I will do that, too, and Tell people if they are doing things wrong.

~Starting Players~

We have made a lot of friends, and thus, our players are these people.

Xun Darkwoe (Of course)
So Orril Miesefer (Another Mod)
Thorgas Ironforge (Another Mod)
Cronah S. Achran
Drasil Razorfang
Gamaliel Ironforge (Throgas' brother)

Reservations:
These are people who have not yet been titled, but have joined the little club we have created. They are these people.

The Black Hunter
Huma Mager
Yalari Maelea

I do not think that is all of them, but my other friends will inform me if i have missed somebody.

People I would like to join, but hasn't either heard about this or made their mind.

Aztira Bisir
Tythle Fi Thea
Malavon Despana
Twen Arearwen

How to incorperate new players.
This can be done pretty easily to this storyline. If you are a good person, then you can be seen with something to do with the cult, or have seen the group and has disliked the cult. You can then join with the group.

If you are a bad guy, you can either be found by the enemies and be spared, if to be a lackey, or another lackey of the cult. You can then join.

How to join: You can join by requesting to join, basically. We have not made our whole groups yet, so we need not to make a new group. If you have a unique CD or you are invited to the story, we will look through your posts to see your deatils and if we like it, you may join.

Events in the story:
The brothers errand: Gamaliel, Drasil and Thorgas in a tavern. The Dwarves talk to Drasil and propose to go into an errand.

The Ximax meeting: Cronah, and Yalari meet near Ximax, Yalari talk to Cronah that searches his way out of the city.

Exiled party meeting: Xun and Huma meet close to a forest, after a fight they are forced to join by an attack of a pack of wolfs.

Murdering cult: Anyone that wishes to change to this party is welcome, ruled by the wind mage elf Orril (sub boss) and a very powerful Necromancer (boss), this party takes innocent persons for experiments in Necromancy and Dark wind magic.

The Groups Have Met: Brothers group and Wizards group moves to Shivering Woods, there they join into a group and decide to travel to the Eophyrhim forest, to do some research about a mysterious murdering guild that has a minimal apparition in the history of the groups.

The Wanderers: The new group meets the Exiled group, they fight because the first group attacked the Exiled group, but then join to fight VS the murdering scouts.

Meeting the sub boss: The group wins VS the scouts, but the sub Boss appears to make things hard, with other three elemental mages this group fight the good party. Making the good party flee.

Reaching Paelelon: Xun and the group reaches Paelelon, there the father of Xun explain about the hidden Guild and Xun’s mother conflicts with this guild, there the Sub boss and the other three elemental mage cause a massive disaster, the good party fights and makes them flee.

Catching the sub boss: Xun and the Group meet the sub boss again, and after a fight where the other three elemental mages fall or flee, the sub boss is caught, the party now wants information; from here two possible events.

A) The sub boss gives info and changes from side.
B) The sub boss doesn’t give info and flees again.

Final A: The boss and the group fight, and the Boss manage to escape, disappearing from Caelereth forever.

Final B: the party finds the lair of the murder team, and fights its way to the boss and sub boss, this two makes the lair blow when the fight seems lost, if they survived or not… that’s other story.

The time is around 1666 a.S.

Main Event are:
The groups have met: this allows all the players to finally interact with everybody. Also everyone has met and the main story can begin.

Meeting the sub boss: this allows the players to see what is really happening, and the deep conflict they’re entering in.

Catching the Sub boss: this is the prelude for the possible finals, depending on the actions, the Sub boss will decide to join or to flee.

Parties:
Warriors party: Gamaliel, Drasil and Thorgas (anyone that wants to join this party can if is a warrior)

Ximax party: Cronah and Yalari . (Anyone can join this party if is a magic user, or something else)

Exiled Party: Huma and Xun (Anyone can join this party if in its personality is said to be lonesome.)


AI unit: Sorin Hellscrom. (this is the AI unit for the boss, unless somebody else, like Twen, joins.)

Foe’s party: So Orril Miés'efér (Wind mage) Necromancer (Will be added any player that wishes to do this role, suggested: Twen Araerwen) Three elemental mage (can be NPC’s while we get Real players) Tons of NPC’s serving both the Necromancer and the wind mage. (Anyone can join this party if is an assassin, thief, or mage with dark inclinations, or a lost warrior looking for something to do, or mercenary.

Contact: Contact either one of us Mods.
Okay, our email is these.

Xun's email address: The_demon_of_darkness1213@yahoo.com  

So Orril's Email address: Rayquaza3@hotmail.com

Thorgas' email address: Unknown...right now.

You can also EZmail us, but that should be only for small cases.j

the trees are my life, the forest my soul. Whomever takes that away will not be tolerated Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns

Edited by: Xun Darkwoe at: 11/19/06 8:26


Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on May 21, 2006, 01:23:23 AM
First, Where am I?  Second, you can't decide who is in your story.  It needs to be open for everyone.  Finally, you need to be titled for 3 months before you become a mod.

Drasil Razorfang CD



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Kalína Dalá'isyrás on January 01, 1970, 09:00:00 AM
You need to be actively in a story for at least 4 months until you can become a mod. After that 4 months, it is really up to the admins if we feel you are capable enough to carry such a burden.

Modding is NOT easy - ask anyone who has been one at any point in time.



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Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Kalan Darkwoe on May 21, 2006, 03:09:23 AM
ok guys, um, gotta start logging out and in my different accounts. i will hold back. Oh and Drasil, it is open to everyone, that's the invitations to my friends who are going to join. if somebody else wants to join, they can.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 21, 2006, 02:28:23 PM
... Let me add some things, if not this story can be VERY short. Expect 'em for tomorrow.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 22, 2006, 11:08:23 AM
Ok, my version.


Events in the story:
Warriors Party meeting: Gamaliel, Drasil and Yalair in a tavern. The Dwarfs talk to Xun, being brave, and they figure out that Xun is a friendly Eophyrhim, and just a poor lad who has lost his mother. they tell them they would help him find the murderer.

Wizards Party meeting: Cronah, and Thorgas meet near Ximax, Thorgas talk to Cornah that search his way out of the city.

Exiled party meeting: Xun and Huma meets close to a forest, after a fight they are forced to join by an attack of… a bear or something like that…

Murdering Party: Anyone that wishes to change to this party is welcome, ruled by the  wind mage elf Orril (sub boss) and a very powerful Necromancer (boss), this party takes innocent persons for experiments in Necromancy and Dark wind magic.

The Groups Have Met: Wizard group and Warrior group moves to Shivering Woods, there they join into a group and decide to travel to the Eophyrhim forest, to do some research about a mysterious murdering guild that has a minimal apparition in the history of the groups.

The Wanderer: The new group meets the Exiled group, they fight because the seconds attacked the first group, but then join to fight VS the murdering scouts.

Meeting the sub boss: The group wins VS the scouts, but the sub Boss appears to make things hard, with other three elemental mages this group fight the good party. Making them flee.

Reaching Paelelon: Xun and the group reaches Paelelon, there the father of Xun explain about the hidden Guild and Xun’s mother conflicts with this group, there the Sub boss and the other three elemental mage cause a massive disaster, the good party fights and makes them flee.

Catching the sub boss: Xun and the Group meet the Murderer again, and after a fight where the other three elemental mages fall, the sub boss is catches, the party now wants information; from here two possible events.

A) The sub boss gives info and changes from side.
B) The sub boss doesn’t give info and flees again.

Final A: The boss and the group fight, and the Boss manages to escape, diapearing from Caelereth forever.

Final B: the party finds the lair of the murder team, and fights its way to the boss and sub boss, this two makes the lair blow when the fight seems lost, if they survived or not… that’s other story.

The time is around 900 b.c.

Main Event are:
The groups have met: this allows all the players to finally interact with everybody. Also everyone has met and the main story can begin.

Meeting the sub boss: this allows the players to see what is really happening, and the deep conflict they’re entering in.

Catching the Sub boss: this is the prelude for the possible finals, depending on the actions, the Sub boss will decide to join or to flee.

Parties:
Warriors party: Gamaliel, Drasil and Yalair (anyone that wants to join this party can if is a warrior)
Wizard party: Cronah, and Thorgas. (Anyone can join this party if is a magic user, or something else)
Exiled Party: Huma and Xun (Anyone can join this party if in its personality is said to be lonesome.)


AI unit: Sorin Hellscrom.

Foe’s party: So Orril Miés'efér (Wind mage) Necromancer (Will be added any player that wishes to do this role, suggested: Twen Araerwing) Three elemental mage (can be NPC’s while we get Real players) Tons of NPC’s serving both the Necromancer and the wind mage. (Anyone can join this party if is an assassin, thief, or mage with dark inclinations)

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on May 23, 2006, 12:39:23 AM
i see one problem, you said that the dwarfs talk to Xun at the top, however, your version also says that 3 eents over, they finally meet. how does that work?

other then that, i think it is pretty good, and i like that we have a human, (not human in the game, in RL, and not AI) in the bad guys team.:b  

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on May 23, 2006, 01:06:23 AM
Hmm... I personally like the idea of Xun meeting the Ironforge brothers in a tavern (drinking, as always), as dwarves are known to have closely knit family ties, and I wouldn't want to be far from my bro.
And about the boss thing, a boss would not be a boss without a gang. So how about making a blood eye cult boss with his gang of bandits?
And about my proposal (again), I say before we help Xun find his mother's butcher, he needs to do some "Quests" for us first, to help him prove his loyalty. As you know, he is an Eophyrhim, and it will make the story long and exciting.

Oink. :thumbup  

Behold... Admire... Fear... and Wonder. Witness the fire burning in me... Burning... To Avenge.

The Ironforge Pyromancer



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 23, 2006, 02:59:23 AM
Ups... didn't noted that problem, will correct it. then yes, sounds more credible that the two dwarves are in the same party...  

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 23, 2006, 03:16:23 AM
Up date


Events in the story:
Brothers Party meeting: Gamaliel, Drasil and Thorgas in a tavern. The Dwarves talk to Drasil and propose to go into an errand.

Wizards Party meeting: Cronah, and Yalair meet near Ximax, Yalair  talk to Cornah that searches his way out of the city.

Exiled party meeting: Xun and Huma meets close to a forest, after a fight they are forced to join by an attack of… a bear or something like that…

Murdering Party: Anyone that wishes to change to this party is welcome, ruled by the wind mage elf Orril (sub boss) and a very powerful Necromancer (boss), this party takes innocent persons for experiments in Necromancy and Dark wind magic.

The Groups Have Met: Brothers group and Wizards group moves to Shivering Woods, there they join into a group and decide to travel to the Eophyrhim forest, to do some research about a mysterious murdering guild that has a minimal apparition in the history of the groups.

The Wanderer: The new group meets the Exiled group, they fight because the first group attacked the Exiled group, but then join to fight VS the murdering scouts.

Meeting the sub boss: The group wins VS the scouts, but the sub Boss appears to make things hard, with other three elemental mages this group fight the good party. Making the good party flee.

Reaching Paelelon: Xun and the group reaches Paelelon, there the father of Xun explain about the hidden Guild and Xun’s mother conflicts with this guild, there the Sub boss and the other three elemental mage cause a massive disaster, the good party fights and makes them flee.

Catching the sub boss: Xun and the Group meet the sub boss again, and after a fight where the other three elemental mages fall or flee, the sub boss is caught, the party now wants information; from here two possible events.

A) The sub boss gives info and changes from side.
B) The sub boss doesn’t give info and flees again.

Final A: The boss and the group fight, and the Boss manage to escape, disappearing from Caelereth forever.

Final B: the party finds the lair of the murder team, and fights its way to the boss and sub boss, this two makes the lair blow when the fight seems lost, if they survived or not… that’s other story.

The time is around 900 b.c.

Main Event are:
The groups have met: this allows all the players to finally interact with everybody. Also everyone has met and the main story can begin.

Meeting the sub boss: this allows the players to see what is really happening, and the deep conflict they’re entering in.

Catching the Sub boss: this is the prelude for the possible finals, depending on the actions, the Sub boss will decide to join or to flee.

Parties:
Warriors party: Gamaliel, Drasil and Thorgas (anyone that wants to join this party can if is a warrior)
Wizard party: Cronah, and Yalair. (Anyone can join this party if is a magic user, or something else)
Exiled Party: Huma and Xun (Anyone can join this party if in its personality is said to be lonesome.)


AI unit: Sorin Hellscrom.

Foe’s party: So Orril Miés'efér (Wind mage) Necromancer (Will be added any player that wishes to do this role, suggested: Twen Araerwing) Three elemental mage (can be NPC’s while we get Real players) Tons of NPC’s serving both the Necromancer and the wind mage. (Anyone can join this party if is an assassin, thief, or mage with dark inclinations)

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on May 23, 2006, 08:42:23 AM
hmmm... i think this is good, i will change it to your update, and have you as another of my story MODs, after all, you did do a lot of work.

I just want to make the event names different names and in bold letters. :b  

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 23, 2006, 09:06:23 AM
go, I'll be waiting

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on May 23, 2006, 12:34:23 PM
Hmm... Xun, about the event "The Brothers Meet", I think it would not be possible, because I am with my brother at the beggining of the story, at least that is what I understood. You might want to replace the event name.

Behold... Admire... Fear... and Wonder. Witness the fire burning in me... Burning... To Avenge.

The Ironforge Pyromancer



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on May 23, 2006, 12:38:23 PM
yeah true, we should change that. How about, the the brothers errand, because you guys and drasil decide to do an errand.

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 23, 2006, 12:44:23 PM
Dunno, but the second groups name doesn't make sense anymore, since there's no mage there.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on May 23, 2006, 12:54:23 PM
Yeah, true, so what should we name it? i don't have a clue of a good name.

BTW: i just EZmailed Twen asking her if she could look at our story and see if she would join.

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 23, 2006, 01:22:23 PM
Ok, I have few seconds of life before Twen arrives...

Change it to... Ximax party... or something like that.

then... pray for the Goddes of Undeath be in good mood or I will be fried for daring to suggest she to be bad...

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on May 23, 2006, 01:33:23 PM
Twen, please... if you do not like this idea, please don't summon your minions on us.

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on May 23, 2006, 07:04:23 PM
Ahem... I would just like to remind all of you that we can't kill other Santharians. ;)
Oink.
And how can I fit in the "warriors" group? as you can see, I'm no fighter. :)  

Behold... Admire... Fear... and Wonder. Witness the fire burning in me... Burning... To Avenge.

The Ironforge Pyromancer



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 24, 2006, 01:37:23 AM
well... Santharians no, but NPC's yes, so if we don't get other three elemental mage they fall, if we get 'em... they will have to play.

Fire magic is battle magic, that's my answer.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on May 25, 2006, 12:26:23 AM
Well... I don't think Lady Araerwen would be glad to be the Bad Guys.... or Gals, of the story. :noidea
Battle Magic IS still Magic. That's my reply. I think there is a lot of difference between Warriors and Wizards, other than the spelling. :nod  

Behold... Admire... Fear... and Wonder. Witness the fire burning in me... Burning... To Avenge.

The Ironforge Pyromancer



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on May 25, 2006, 12:39:23 AM
hmmm... I would really like Twen to come here and join. maybe we could change it around, so she wouldn't have to be a bad guy? maybe the boss isn't another mage like his lakeys, and maybe he is a powerful warrior?

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 25, 2006, 01:09:23 AM
very unlikely, a powerful warrior VS a mage has minium chances to survive.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on May 25, 2006, 02:13:23 AM
then what would be the point of all our warriors fighting the clan of mages?

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 25, 2006, 02:22:23 AM
balance the things, count, four mages VS one mage and more than five warriors...

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on May 25, 2006, 03:14:23 AM
but i would think the mages would win. think of it, if a mage could kill a warrior, and there were 4 mages, one a very powerful necromancer, and the other team has 5 warriors and 1 mage, one mage kills a warrior, s that would lower to 1 warrior 1 mage VS 4 mages. the chances are very VERY unlikely that we would win.

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on May 25, 2006, 04:27:23 AM
Suggestion:  If I ever finish writing Modhal, We can stick him in the "evil" party.  An excuse would not be hard as he would find Xun as a pure source of evil and would have good reasons to hate him and those who associate themselves with him.

Drasil Razorfang CD



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 25, 2006, 04:49:23 AM
That's why in the first battle you flee, the second we flee. I wanted that Drasil, if you finish your CD in less than four months he will be in my team.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on May 25, 2006, 06:58:23 AM
Ok.  Might I suggest that since Twen can't make it, that we move Orril up to migh boss and Modhal to sub-boss?

Drasil Razorfang CD

Edited by: Drasil Razorfang at: 5/24/06 23:00


Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on May 25, 2006, 01:03:23 PM
Ok, as you want, but believe me, if you make me angry you'll suffer.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 04, 2006, 07:42:23 AM
hmm... we might not be able to make a story. Nobody has commented for a month or so.

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on June 04, 2006, 08:12:23 AM
Xun, you exaderate so much.  The last comment is from 6 days ago.

Drasil Razorfang CD



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on June 04, 2006, 11:51:23 AM
Erm... even if people coment, we can't make the story rightnow... save it in a word document, and in five months or six we will post it up (If it sink in the forum...)

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 04, 2006, 03:05:23 PM
Why not, Why can't we make the story?

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on June 05, 2006, 05:53:23 AM
Because we don't have six moths titled and playing...

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 05, 2006, 11:30:23 AM
ah, right. Okay, i'll save it.

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on June 06, 2006, 01:06:23 AM
Better learn from the Herald the proper ethics of roleplaying and story modding, before jumping to creating the story itself.
Oink...
Right.. let's eat.

Behold... Admire... Fear... and Wonder. Witness the fire burning in me... Burning... To Avenge.

The Ironforge Pyromancer



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 06, 2006, 05:25:23 AM
Hey! I'm the one in a real story!

The man who dares attack me, shall have pain and suffering beneath my blade. A man who touches me shall know what a beast I can be. Xun Darkwoe, Hunter of Thorns.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on June 10, 2006, 02:04:23 PM
you are in a real story??? I didn't understood that...

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on June 11, 2006, 07:58:23 PM
I'm very sorry. I didn't know that it was a true story.
Squeal.

Behold... Admire... Fear... and Wonder. Witness the fire burning in me... Burning... To Avenge.

The Ironforge Pyromancer



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on June 12, 2006, 01:40:23 AM
...Xun, I am sure that Thorgas could easily get into WOTF if he tried as it accepts almost anyone.  Not to be offensive, but you were put off for a while because of your posting and Vesk did say that he would have rejected you from Twilight if he was still the mod.  Just because you were brazen and persistant enough to get into a single story does not mean that you are better than the others.  IMHo, Thorgas posts much better than you do, not that you cannot improve.

Drasil Razorfang CD



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on June 13, 2006, 10:14:23 AM
Drasil... not to insult you, but you're become the kind of person that say "I know All" but proof nothing and doesn't even try... What happened to the Drasil I knew in the magic forum? the one that didn't critiziced everyone and accepted what others had to say, the one that wanted knowledge and asked for it... Drasil, please return.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on June 15, 2006, 12:49:23 AM
Ok... What did I miss, Drasil?...
Everybody, please stop ganging up on a single person. Let him say his own side of the story first, I'm sure everybody will listen, before we jump into any nasty descisions.
And Drasil, what did Xun said that made you post that? Could you give me the link, as I don't know where Xun had posted it.
Thank you very much, and have a nice day.
:fish  

Behold... Admire... Fear... and Wonder. Witness the fire burning in me... Burning... To Avenge.

The Ironforge Pyromancer



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on June 15, 2006, 01:53:23 AM
Thank you Thorgas, but Orril is right.  WHile I do have an excuse its not really valid seeing as I should be able to control my opinions.  Also, I expected no less from Kalina as I read frequent posts in which she insults me from varying directions.  I sahll however, be posting an apology thready-thingy eventually to those people who I am sorry to.  Its quite hard to pick out all the times I was rude to someone as it seems there are many.  Also, to answer your question, if you look on the above page you will find the answer to your question.  I shall paraphrase however.

Thorgas:  Xun, you should learn proper posting ethics before you move into modding

Xun:  I an the one in a real story.

Orril and Thorgas:  Oh sorry I didn't know.

IMHO, he used it to put himself above you two.

Drasil Razorfang CD



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on June 15, 2006, 10:33:23 AM
Drasil:
Hmm... I see what you're trying to point out, and I appreciate that. Thank you very much.
Not to be rude nor offensive, but...
The problem is that you absolutely love to:
1. Meddle with everybody's business.
2. Show others that your knowledge is far more superior than theirs.
3. Deny that you've been wrong.
4. Think you're always right.
5. Rough and unfriendly in giving opinions.
6. Think you know everything.
Those are the characteristics in you that you need to change in order to avoid heated conflict. I may be wrong in those things I said, but those are the things that I observed in you.

Everybody:
Please give him a chance to mend all his wrong doings and set things straight, as I believe and see him as a nice person, only full of the wrong sort of character.
No offense intended for the above post, and have a nice day.
:fish  

Behold... Admire... Fear... and Wonder. Witness the fire burning in me... Burning... To Avenge.

The Ironforge Pyromancer



Title: Re: Mithral Murder
Post by: so orril miesefer on June 15, 2006, 11:28:23 AM
... Thorgas, will do a bit of comenting practice on your statement above:

1. Meddle with everybody's business. Actually he meddle when he feels someone else is being offended or he can proof he is superior...
2. Show others that your knowledge is far more superior than theirs. Many persons arround do this, though it isn't ok, I miself do it in many ocations (specially in magic). I'm starting to think this is a common thing to the huaman behavior.
3. Deny that you've been wrong.
4. Think you're always right. This is the same as the 3, just with other way to say it...
5. Rough and unfriendly in giving opinions. Depends on what matter, he haven't been so rough since a weak ago...
6. Think you know everything I think is the same as the number 4 and 3

Anyways Drasil, a thread to ask forgivness isn't nesesary, everyone can make mistakes, and I don't hold grudges over no one, no matter how mean it has been with me... But I think you should use this chance and ask forgivness to those that won't forget so easy.

@ Anyone that claims to be Catholic or Cristian: The least is to forgive him... so I expect no problems arround.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Hmph.
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on June 15, 2006, 09:18:23 PM
Thank you very much, Lady Merenwen.

Hmph. OK, Master Miesefer, since I assume that you've been wanting an answer for the post above, I'll be providing one for you and everybody who will "comment" on the post above. Note that the post above is My Own Humble Thoughts.

Those are the things that I saw in Drasil that makes him quite disagreeable to everybody. I just posted those words for the sole purpose of helping him to become a nicer person than he is for now. Now I'm not saying that he change his personality completely, because his personality is what makes him unique and special, but it never hurts to have an improvement every now and then.

About my number two, which you said applies to you as well, is the personality that I hated most. It is also one of the most important because everybody has their own strengths and weaknesses, so we must be open to other's suggestions. And I think that it doesn't need comments, as that is My Own Humble Thoughts. If you feel like posting your opinions here, then please do.

I never did say that I'm angry with Drasil. If I'm angry with anyone, I won't be talking to that particular person forever, even if I forgave him. Just little information about my unusual behavior.

Have a 'Nice' Day, coz I didn't.

Edited by: Thorgas Ironforge at: 6/15/06 13:20


Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: Ta'lia of the Seven Jewels on June 16, 2006, 12:25:23 AM
I fully back Thorgas here, but let me say some to these points as well, in respond to Orril, for I‘m just in the mood to do it. :)

1. Agree, and your comment is not true, Orril, for Drasil needed to point out things which didn‘t have to do with somebody being offended.

2.Orril, just because it is a human behaviour, it is not rectified to do something. As Kalina pointed out, we have some more knowledge in many things, and it is our task to do it. However, I‘m near to do a thread about this: Many who have just a few posts here and have not even arrived properly, just about to do their first steps regarding their own CD think they have to act towards bloody newbies as if they have all the knowledge of the world - (and often their comments are wrong).
What I really dislike, is if:
- somebody writes: Good start, you are near your approval, if the char has just about five sentences!
- If a char is praised as if it is the best written and half the history doesn‘t work
- if not titled chars comment and say: I would like to see - as if they  have any right to ask something . Even I try to avoid this phrase, if possible, though bad habit often is hard to abolish, and sometimes it is needed, but ONLY mods should use it.
Don't misunderstand me, comments on CDs are appreciated from everbody, but they have to be correct!

3.-
4.-
5. Maybe this is a bit Drasil‘s way, but he is improving!
6. Well, he will learn.

A general note: I think, Drasil has improved a lot since he is here , at least what I have seen. And my rants and Thorgas‘ comments might have helped him to find a better way to talk to others.

And he will surely try to improve further (right, Drasil?)
*looks at Drasil with a hopeful smile on her face*

***Astropic of the day***
"For me there is only the traveling on paths that have heart, on any path   that may have heart. There I travel, and the only worthwhile challenge is to traverse its full length. And there I travel looking, looking, breathlessly. ~Don Juan"



Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on June 16, 2006, 01:19:23 AM
I have been trying Talia.  Orril, I know you are trying to be a good friend, however Thorgas is right.  As Kalina once said "I like to bite into something and refuse to let go until I turn blue and die"(well actually she didn't say that exactly but whatever)  I have been rather, pushy, obnoxious ect and his post helps me to adress those things.  Also, Talia, thanks for the encouragement.  I was beginning to wonder if I was just getting worse.

Drasil Razorfang CD



Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 16, 2006, 02:29:23 AM
Wha? uh? huh? whadawhat?

let's make it simple. Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?

all i said is that i was in another story besides the thisty herald. and Drasil, though i do not say that thorgas is bad at posting, he is excellent indeed, i do not even say i'm better, but if you look at my posts in the war of the fall, you will see large paragraphs and excruciating details. I do think that Thorgas and I put up quite the match on who is the best at posting.

oh, and apology accepted, just dn't do it again. this too DRASIL.

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Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on June 16, 2006, 02:45:23 AM
Xun, please don't do this.  You just made my temper flare again.  The manner in which you spoke came off as very offensive.  Also, IMHO, posting ability has nothing to do with nice long paragraphs.  Its the way in which your right and your ability to follow the rules.  It is not necessary to have page long posts for them to be good, and just because a post is lengthy does not make it good, IMHO.

Drasil Razorfang CD



Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: Ta'lia of the Seven Jewels on June 16, 2006, 02:50:23 AM
What about just stopping the arguments now and here? It is leading to nothing anymore.

***Astropic of the day***
"For me there is only the traveling on paths that have heart, on any path   that may have heart. There I travel, and the only worthwhile challenge is to traverse its full length. And there I travel looking, looking, breathlessly. ~Don Juan"



Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 16, 2006, 01:37:23 PM
true, let us stop. We should set aside our differences. and Drasil, if there was any way I have annoyed you in a bad manner, you have my most humbliest apologies.  

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Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 18, 2006, 11:48:23 AM
I hae edited the story much now, and would appreciate comments on it. hopefully get it approved ~Crosses fingers~  /.\

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Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: so orril miesefer on June 18, 2006, 12:43:23 PM
Ok...

@ Thorgas: I don't mean to offend you, you should know that you're ammong the people I count as friends and best friends, and thus added some lines of my own opinion to yours. Please forgive me if I offended you.

@ Talia: I didn't said it was right if it was a common behavior, I just pointed that is a common error human beings do, and as error it must be corrected, I try to correct it in my own person cause I believe that you must start in yourself if you want a change.

@ Drasil: "Act slow and think fast" is the best thing you can do (exept if you have amnesia...) What I mean with this is that you (as me too) must think twice what will be said, and we must take our time to think about reactions it will rise, every action has a reaction and we must think about this.

@ Xun: Far better, thanks for improving it, now it will be larger. If you want, I can find ways to add people to teams, I have some expirence doing that as storyteller in RL and RPG's like Werewolf and Changeling. My email is Rayquaza3@hotmail.com or Shadow_rush_rules@yahoo.com.mx (I use more offten the hotmail mail...)

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.

Edited by: so orril miesefer  at: 6/18/06 4:50


Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 18, 2006, 02:50:23 PM
OKAY EVERYONE STOP!!!

we are fighting because Drasil said a simple little thing. it might have been rude, yes, but he has apoligized. We are not in real life. this is text. it might sound rude, but it is text. it would feel a lor worse if someone said it to you right now in RL. This is a thread for a story idea, not an arguament for a little post, so everyone STOP!!!

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Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: Ta'lia of the Seven Jewels on June 19, 2006, 08:10:23 AM
Xun, I looked shortly over your story and can only say, it needs a lot more work. How can you look after spelling and grammar , if you don't master it in your submission of the story itself?

Apart from that, there is a rule:

Quote:
1. Experience It is a general rule of thumb that story mods should have at least four months or more of continuous Santharia RPG board experience.


You are titled just a month, so there is enough room to improve your story, expand on it and bring it in a more readable form.

***Astropic of the day***
"For me there is only the traveling on paths that have heart, on any path   that may have heart. There I travel, and the only worthwhile challenge is to traverse its full length. And there I travel looking, looking, breathlessly. ~Don Juan"



Title: Re: Hmph.
Post by: so orril miesefer on June 19, 2006, 01:12:23 PM
Yes we do know that Talia... We will imporve this as we reach the five months.  

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 20, 2006, 08:20:23 AM
pretty much... we are going to improve. and you have to admit, it is a lot better then when we started...

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Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Ta'lia of the Seven Jewels on June 20, 2006, 06:41:23 PM
Yes we do know that Talia... we will improve this as we reach the five months.

pretty much... we are going to improve {no comma nor other sign} and you have to admit, it is a lot better now  than when we started...

You are lucky, that I am no Bard Judy or Kalina and won‘t find bad structured sentences!

***Astropic of the day***
"For me there is only the traveling on paths that have heart, on any path   that may have heart. There I travel, and the only worthwhile challenge is to traverse its full length. And there I travel looking, looking, breathlessly. ~Don Juan"



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 21, 2006, 11:14:23 AM
Talia, we do not have to have critics on our spelling on OOC posts. What we need is people telling us mistakes on our stories or characters. We do not need people critiscizing on our normal posts, as you said when I did it to Drasil!

If you insist on that, here.

You are lucky (no comma or any other symbol.) that I am no Bard Judy or Kalina and won't find bad structured sentences!

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Edited by: Xun Darkwoe at: 6/21/06 3:17


Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Argon Glasstar on June 21, 2006, 01:42:23 PM
You know, considering that Talia's native language is German, she writes rather well in English.

Why am I constantly haunted by these ghosts?



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Kareesh Valendar on June 21, 2006, 01:57:23 PM
Ok, I'm going to step in and be the mother figure here. So, if I step on anyone's toes, deal with it.

Lately, all I've seen on the boards is fighting. Guys, this is suppose to be fun, not a place where you can vent all your "Oh woe is me, the world hates me, I wanna get back at it". If you're going to do that, then I suggest you better leave, 'cause I personally don't wanna hear it.

Now, I haven't read what is going on, but I can tell that there are arguements....again....I know some of us are older then the rest. So what? You encounter that in real life.

But I say to the younger ones, don't be a nuisance. I'm glad that you're excited to be a part of this and I'm happy for your enthusiasim, but don't take it too far. Slow down, enjoy your time here. Just be here to have fun.

To the older ones (both in experience and age-wise) Don't be too hard on them. The harder you are, the more they're going to fight back. Yes, crack down on them if they are breaking the rules, but don't crack down on them if they just wanna help. If they're being annoying, tell them that. Don't just sigh and get mad or sigh and keep it in till the boiling point.

Remember, we are all real people here. Real people with real emotions living real lives. This place is suppose to be a place where you can have fun and, perhaps, get away from RL for a bit. Don't abuse it. Don't just come in here thinking that you know it all from the beginning. Trust me, you don't. Sure you may know the world, but it takes quite a while to learn about all the people. Heck, I'm still learning and I've been here for quite a while.

Now, I don't care if you respond to this or not. I don't care if you pick through it trying to find grammar and spelling mistakes. Be my guest, I don't care. I just had to get this out of my system because I hate seeing us fight amongst ourselves....especially since the Dream is held together by all of us. So please, be more respectful of each other. And remember, that words, whether in person or online, they really do hurt more then sticks and stones.

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Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 21, 2006, 02:27:23 PM
I have been trying to settle everyone one down, as you can see on one of my latest posts, but I do not like it when some people insult me or critisize me when they do not need to!

Now, I will say again.

EVERYONE SETLLE DOWN!!

We do not need to fight, we do not need to argue, what we need is some people who will kindly do the thiing that this thread is meant to be about!

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Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on June 21, 2006, 11:16:23 PM
To piggy back of of Kalina, just because you attempt to settle down everyone doesn't mean tht you are.  If you look back the majority of the arguments that you "terminate" were either started or played an active role in by you(that sounds kinda wierd)  Your latest post disgust me as you are just being hypocritical.  Talia was pointing out some reasons why you need to wait and you disect her every statement.  Unlinke you, Talia does not speak English as a native language, and grankly, she still posts better than you for the most part, be it in OOC or IC.  You have no right to go through her posts when your own spelling and grammar are horrible, especially considering that you speak English as a first language and claim to be rather old.

Now, Kalina, about the whole Bard Judith thing, she had issued a formal challenge in which she stated that whoever could find a typo in one of her posts recieved a free picture.  As I read through some of her entries, I fell in love with her work and searched for her name on site.  While reading through the dwarven entry(largely put together by her) I caught a mistake, not on Bard's part, but about her work.  The dwarven sex section had not been udated to reflect her alatest discoveries in the field.  When I brought this up on the dev forum under the title of "contradiction," everyone jumped at me thinking that I was attempting to publically broadcast one of her mistakes, when in reality IMHO, it was not her mistake at all.  I can see why everyone assumed this because of my former nit-pickiness of her works, however I would prefer that you didn't use that example. :p   Thanks :hug  

Drasil Razorfang CD



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Ta'lia of the Seven Jewels on June 22, 2006, 01:10:23 AM
Sorry for the  &#8216;, don't know, why it appears here .


Thanks for defending me :)

Let us really settle down now - must be the heat that we jump at others !

I didn&#8216;t mind Xun correcting me - BUT that shows me, Xun, that you KNOW how to write correctly! Please do it! But setting the commas right in English requires a lot of discipline for me to not to fall in German-language habits

What I wanted to point out and which obviously didn&#8216;t get  across is that, if I have (slight or bigger) problems with the language I should be correct in every post I do, for there are most times a lot of errors which occur anyway which you don&#8216;t even notice.  Judy and Kalina and many of the other native speakers, even those like Irid who is not one of them, won&#8216;t do many mistakes, but we who are not so firm have to be cautious. It is just unfriendly to throw a few badly formulated half-sentences at somebody - would you talk to your friends like that in RL? Rarely, if not your friends have the same habit.

When you want to join a story, the proper use of language is required, otherwise you will annoy the other players and soon be asked to leave. Or not even accepted. If you don&#8216;t use automatically a good language during normal chatting as well, it will be noticed and fall back on you as well. We are not in IRC where all goes so quickly - there you can&#8216;t do a spell check or correct a mistyped word. And even there people apologise for a mistyped word!

If you think now, it is a bit overdrawn to call this behaviour unfriendly and impolite, then let me again explain, why it is so annoying for me. It has to do with me not being a native speaker: I can read fluently over a correctly written text, even if there are words which I don&#8216;t know. But if I encounter a spelling error or similar, my brain works like a computer which I can&#8216;t switch of - it checks, if this word is correct, send so to say a request back - and that stops the flux of reading  and that is what lets me stumble over badly written posts, be it submissions or quick answers on the board.  

***Astropic of the day***
"For me there is only the traveling on paths that have heart, on any path   that may have heart. There I travel, and the only worthwhile challenge is to traverse its full length. And there I travel looking, looking, breathlessly. ~Don Juan"



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: so orril miesefer on June 22, 2006, 04:43:23 AM
To correct that Talia, click with the right button of your mouse and go to "Codification >", then click on "automatical selection". That should correct that problem, if it doesn't works, I suggest to ask Silfer.


I know what's Talia talking about, my problem is that I'm used to read typos so I figure out what means, but it doesn't help me correct my mistakes. Talia, I humbly ask your forgivness, I missed many things and think I'm very bad for english, so I don't blame you to get angry with my bad writen posts.

Spellcheckers onlyne are very bad, almost as Word spell check, so the only way I can really learn is reading your posts, and as I've said if I find a typo I try to figure out what it means as if it where a real word.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on June 22, 2006, 04:52:23 AM
Word will pick up most typos that you have Orril(not to be offensive)  Usually your mistakes are with words that are all screwy and make wierd sounds.

Drasil Razorfang CD



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Marvin Cerambit on June 22, 2006, 05:30:23 AM
Quote:
Spellcheckers onlyne are very bad, almost as Word spell check, so the only way I can really learn is reading your posts, and as I've said if I find a typo I try to figure out what it means as if it where a real word.

The one that's in my sig found four mistakes in your previous post anyway. Personally I used to spellcheck all my post. Even if it was just a single line. I stopped doing so after about half a year because all the errors that were left were occasional typos. Now I only spellcheck entries, IC posts and occasionally longer posts. Or if I'm uncertain about a word I either spellcheck the whole thing or look up the word. Because of the constant spellchecking my spelling has improved a lot, so why do you never do so? You know your spelling is bad. Goes for anyone btw.

I wise man once said (as a reaction on a semi-flame thread): It's funny how your arguments seem to be so much more convincing if you use capitals and punctuation.

Marvin Cerambit ~ Do not tease my Warg, because you are crunchy and tasteful

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Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Vesk Lyricahl on June 22, 2006, 07:21:23 AM
Word catches most spelling errors, but I don't trust its grammar check. Its good for the simpler grammar errors, but it tries to correct my grammar in sentences where I know I'm right. No program has the right to argue with me!:lol  



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: so orril miesefer on June 22, 2006, 12:25:23 PM
Yes, Word is really bad for grammar in any language, not only english... In spanish you can skip the subject (That's why some of my posts don't have subject) but Word marks it as fragmented, same happens in english, f.e when I use templates.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on June 22, 2006, 01:02:23 PM
Just a little reminder, Xun.
The admins made the rules about posting right? So that means that they have the full authority in checking your posts for errors and such. They also said we should have proper spelling and grammar, even in OOC posts.

Well, seems that almost every thread is turning into a Santharian Supreme Court; this is due largely to the fact that everyone thinks their opinion is the correct one. We could prevent this if we learn how to listen to others, not just on our own suggestion. Remember, for the dream to survive, we need to work with each other, not against each one.

Behold... Admire... Fear... and Wonder. Witness the fire burning in me... Burning... To Avenge.

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Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 22, 2006, 02:55:23 PM
True, very true... I should keep on checking my posts to find grammar or spelling problems...

I would like everyone to settle down. There is no need to argue or anything here. We are all friends, right? Well, kind of... we shouldn't argue, okay? so can we just calm down and not argue with each other? I really actually do not like to argue. :confused

Now, I am not saying that we can't explain to each other something on how we don't agree with something or such, but we should not full on fight! We are all friendly people here, and can have fun on this website. That was what it was meant to do, right?

Now, to settle everything down, I admit, I am basically the one that started this, and I'm sorry. I have also started to spell-checking my posts, so I am working on it. So, can everyone settle down, please?

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Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Phyth Glenfield on June 22, 2006, 02:58:23 PM
Oh, I think everyone has...

If not I'll start singing...

"What the world...needs now...Is love, sweet love..."

Yeah, you don't want me singing.

"No matter where you go, there you are..."
Buckaroo Banzai


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Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 22, 2006, 03:18:23 PM
:lol

I don't think you hae a good enough voice. Now, if I could just find a way to broadcast Eurythmics...

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Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: so orril miesefer on June 23, 2006, 05:46:23 AM
hmmm... You can enter in the Academy, if you don't have voice but have a good body you become singer.

I think that we never fought actually... I mean, a fight with adims would be a painful one, Kalina would start picking our errors on posts and pointing them, Talia provably would do the same.

What's my magic? My treasure. What's my God? My freedom. My law? the strength and the wind. My mother country the sky So Orril Miés'éfer, Sky master.



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on June 23, 2006, 09:41:23 PM
What a voice! You nearly collapsed my mine! :rollin  

Behold... Admire... Fear... and Wonder. Witness the fire burning in me... Burning... To Avenge.

The Ironforge Pyromancer



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 24, 2006, 02:46:23 AM
"Sweet dreams are made of these ~cough cough~ who am I to dis ~cough hack~ -agree... I travel ~hack~ the world and the ~squack~ seven sees... everybody's looking ~hack~ for... Oh I quit!

~> Enemies shall die, attackers shall have no mercy. Enemies shall live, and be slaves for eternity.<~
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Character help



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on June 30, 2006, 10:08:23 AM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

I'm checking to see if there is any other things that I might catch. It will probably be 3 or four months 'till we get this finished and accepted...

~>Enemies shall die, attackers shall have no mercy. Enemies shall live, and be slaves for eternity.<~
Xun Darkwoe



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on July 17, 2006, 11:08:23 AM
ZzZzZzZz *Grunt* comments? ohh what-- ZzZzZzZzZzZz |I  

~>Enemies shall die, attackers shall have no mercy. Enemies shall live, and be slaves for eternity.<~
Xun Darkwoe



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Ta'lia of the Seven Jewels on July 17, 2006, 07:25:23 PM
Quote:
The time is around 900 b.c.


Xun, all stories are happening currently, otherwise you need to create new chars for it.

Your story needs still more flesh, reorganise it a bit, so that your future members are at the end and the story line can be seen in one place.
You doesn't know, how your mother died, (through whom), so the beginning doesn't work either.

***Astropic of the day***
"For me there is only the traveling on paths that have heart, on any path   that may have heart. There I travel, and the only worthwhile challenge is to traverse its full length. And there I travel looking, looking, breathlessly. ~Don Juan"



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on November 18, 2006, 04:45:23 PM
Talia, if you red the first paragraph, it says that Xun basically overhears a Eophyrhim talking about how the blood cult killed his mother.

I changed the time to 5 years later, is that enought, to much, anything?

~>Enemies shall die, attackers shall have no mercy. Enemies shall live, and be slaves for eternity.<~
Xun Darkwoe



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on November 19, 2006, 08:42:23 AM
sorry, I was actuall waiting for when I had been playing enough to become a story mod. By the way, what exactly is the current time? I can't seem to find it on the site.

~>Enemies shall die, attackers shall have no mercy. Enemies shall live, and be slaves for eternity.<~
Xun Darkwoe



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Mina on November 19, 2006, 02:02:23 PM
1666 a.S




Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Xun Darkwoe on November 19, 2006, 04:23:23 PM
are you sure it's a.s? I going with that right now, but tell me if it's actually a.d. and you made an error.

~>Enemies shall die, attackers shall have no mercy. Enemies shall live, and be slaves for eternity.<~
Xun Darkwoe



Title: Re: working, working, working...
Post by: Mina on November 19, 2006, 04:59:23 PM
It's a.S.  As in, "after Santhros".