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Title: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on August 10, 2007, 09:36:53 AM
Name
Inkear

Gender
Male

Age
1 year

Race
Cat

Breed
Barn/Wilderon Cat

Occupation
Huh? Wassat? Oh! Job? Rat Catcher.

Title
Tís áel (elven ear)
 
Character Portrait
(http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/8052/catportraitcopyge9.th.png)

 Overview
Hey look! Paper… Hmm. but what to write about? ME! Let’s see… Cat. I think that’s it. Oh wait; I know! I like catching rats! And I like being near twowalkers and other cats. Okay! Now that's it!
Appearance

Height
Oh, what’s that strange measurement those twowalkers have… 2 and a half palmspans. I don’t know how many paws that is… let's see: One, two, get that back paw up there, OW! That hurt!

Weight
Let’s see… not took heavy, not too light… One halfeb and two ods.

Hair Fur Colour
Hmm… my fur is… let’s see here, stupid tail get out of the way… Brown. And there are stripes! And they are black! Or are the stripes brown and the rest black… I don't know!
   
Eye Colour
Hmm… well the right one there is green, and the left one there is blue. It looks neat!


Physical Appearance
Let’s see I’ve got fur… yeah fur, it’s kind of longish, sometimes it gets caught on things. It’s nice and warm though, and it keeps me from getting wet. What colour is it? Hmm. Is that grey? Brown? Greybrown?  Oh wait. No. Hmm. Let's see. Fur is brown. Face is white. Sort of. Oh stripes! I have stripes! They look fast! I mean... black. Oh, and my tail, it is black at the end. I’ve got…. One, no, two ears, hey, that one is black! And my eyes are… what’s that? Is that blue? And green! I like that one! Let’s see there’s a tail here somewhere, it’s got fur on it too. And it’s nice and long and it does help me keep my balance. Nice big paws, great for walking on things, and catching stuff. And claws, nice sharp claws.

Clothing
Huh? Wassat?

Personality
Hmmm… This is hard, how do those twowalkers that live here write all this stuff? I like to jump around and move! Yes moving is very good. And chasing things. Catching things is better though. Like spiders! Spiders! Yes lots of energy all the time. Except after drinking milk. Milk makes me tired… *Yawn*
 
What else, I like twowalkers, they’re funny for things that don’t have tails, and they write things! Oh and they pet me! Especially the pointy-ears. Yes! Petting is good! Pointy-ears are nice! Except when the twowalkers don't pet me and chase me with those sticks. With more sticks on the end. Um.. BROOMS! Ah! Brooms! But they don’t let me near the big books or papers, no they yell at me if I go in the really big room with all the books, or especially near them while they’re working. But if I don’t bother them they give me treats! Or is that the other way around? I’m confused…

Strengths and Weaknesses

Strengths
Twowalkers like me. They like to pet me, and give me food, and sometimes yarn! But then I get stuck in the yarn, and it’s not nice. I’m really really good at catching things. Like mice, and then those rats. Rats aren’t like mice; they’re bigger! And they try to bite my tail! It’s my tail, not rats’ tail; they have their own bald little tails. And the twowalkers pet me when I catch the rats! So I catch the rats anyways. Mice are more fun ; they’re faster, and smaller, and much harder to get. I see really well in the dark. Twowalkers don’t, they stumble and bumble around trying to find the sticks they light on fire so they can see, and sometimes they step on my tail.

Weaknesses
Hmmm… weaknesses. But I shouldn’t tell anyone my weaknesses, what if the rats found out! Oh well. I can’t hear so well in one ear, and it throws me off balan- *Whoah!* Almost fell off there, when I’m up high. Huh? Wassat? I can’t hear you! Speak up! I can’t climb too well because I can’t hear; I think, and being up too high makes me dizzy. I like my tail, but it can get stepped on, or grabbed or chewed by rats. My poor tail!

History
Let’s see... I lived in a big big twowalker place, with lots of big buildings made of rocks. I lived near a big twowalker building where they write stuff. Lot’s of different kinds of twowalkers come and go from the place. There are even some with pointy ears like me. But none of them have fur. The really big ones scare me, and so does the place near the stairs. When I go by there, there’s always something making a boom; and then the twowalkers walk out and there is black smoke that follows them it doesn’t smell nice; I wonder what those twowalkers are doing in there.

I lived near the place they make food though; it is nice and warm there. There are lots of rats and mice near there, and the twowalkers like it when I catch them. The twowalkers there have other cats like me. But some of them don’t catch rats. They sit around all day doing nothing. The other catcher-cats like to laugh at them, but some of them are nice.

The twowalkers’ outside is scary, there are lots of twowalkers walking on the stones, and sometimes they step on my tail. Some of them try to pick me up, but I don’t like getting picked up! Put me down! MROWR!

My parents were both catcher-cats. They were really good! Yaya! Mama had long fur it was grey, I think, I don't remember well. And Papa had short hair, and he was BIG! Was he orange? I don't remember! A little while ago, before the snow but not before the leaves started falling, I left the twowalker place, hiding in a fourwalker's bag. I was following a rat and it ran into the fourwalker place (fourwalker are what you twowalkers call horses.) It tried to climb but us cats are good climbers. I almost got him too! He tried to run and he jumped onto the fourwalker! I tried to follow him but the fourwalker jumped back. I got caught on it's back and fell into one of the big bags. It hurt. I fell and I hit my head, and then everything was black.

I woke up and the bag was closed, or at least I think it was closed. It was kind of dizzy, but I wanted to be outside the outside of the twowalker place. The cats say there is lots of green grass, and mice to catch…

I took a nap in the bag. It wasn't fun! There wasn't anything soft in the bag. Except my tail. Twowalkers need more soft things. When the fourwalker stopped, at least I think it stopped, the bag opened and I ran! Ran ran ran! Bags are not fun. I ran and I ran and then I ran into a twowalker. He had fur on his face! He petted me! Nice fur-face.

He walked funny though. I think his leg was hurt, so he carried a stick. Stick is not for scratching! He picked me up which is not fun! but then he put me in a bag, and there were soft things in the bag and we went walking! Walking is fun! The Fur-Face twowalker has little books that he writes in. He does that alot. I think he should stop writing and pet me... Are we there yet?

Weapons
I have teeth! And claws! And my amazing cat looks! But the twowalkers have big sticks, with pointy bits. Can I get one?

Belongings
I have a bag, that goes around my neck that the twowalkers gave me. It is shiny, but I can’t get it off. The twowalkers say it has my name and the name of the twowalkers’ place on it if I get lost. I don’t know I can’t read twowalker’s writing. It is nice and shiny though… Oooh shiny… Oh! And it makes noise! Noise! Pretty noise! Oh! And a twowalker! He is mine! Mine! He has fur on his face!

Oh, I should have brought the paper down… this beam is too high. Now where was that ladder? AHH! It’s gone! I can’t get down! Help…


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on August 10, 2007, 09:55:16 AM
Please put up the correct message icon.


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on August 10, 2007, 09:56:56 AM
Ooops! Silly cat, forgetting something like that...  :buck:


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Thorgas Ironforge on August 10, 2007, 10:13:35 AM
Here kitty kitty...
Commenting in the fiery color of red.

Name
Inkear

Gender
Male

Age
1 year

Race
Cat

Tribe Breed
Barn/Wilderon Cat

Occupation
Huh? Wassat? Oh! Job? Rat Catcher.

Title
Tís áel (elven ear)
 
Character Portrait


 Overview
Hey look! Paper…. Hmm… but what to write about? ME! Let’s see… Cat. I think that’s it.(It would be nicer if you could write a paragraph for his overview. Yes, we know he's a cat, but tell us more about him.)

Appearance

Height
Oh, what’s that strange measurement those twowalkers have… 2 and a half palmspans. I don’t know how many paws that is… let's see: One, two, get that back paw up there, OW! That hurt!

Weight
Let’s see… not took heavy, not too light… One halfeb and two ods.

Hair Fur Colour
Hmm… my fur is… let’s see here, stupid tail get out of the way… Gray. And there are stripes, and they are black. Or are the stripes gray and the rest black… Oh hey, and I’ve got little orangey patches too. Now where’d those come from?
·   
Eye Colour
Hmm… well the left one there is orange, and the right one there is blue. It looks neat!


Physical Appearance
Let’s see I’ve got fur… yeah fur, it’s kind of longish, sometimes it gets caught on things. It’s nice and warm though, and it keeps me from getting wet. I’ve got…. One, no, two ears, hey, that one is black… And my eyes are… what’s that? Is that blue? And orangey. I like that one! Let’s see there’s a tail here somewhere, it’s got fur on it too. And it’s nice and long and it does help me keep my balance. Nice big paws, great for walking on things, and catching stuff. And claws, nice sharp claws.

Clothing
Huh? Wassat?

Personality
Hmmm… This is hard, how do those twowalkers that live here write all this stuff! I like to jump around and move! Yes moving is very good. And chase things! Yes lots of energy all the time. Except after drinking milk. Milk makes me tired… *Yawn* What else, I like twowalkers, they’re funny for things that don’t have tails, and they write things! Yeah but they don’t let me near the big books or papers, no they yell at me if I go in the really big room with all the books, or especially near them while they’re working. But if I don’t bother them they give me treats! Or is that the other way around? I’m confused…

Strengths and Weaknesses

Strengths
Twowalkers like me. They like to pet me, and give me food, and sometimes yarn! But then I get stuck in the yarn, and it’s not nice. I’m really really good at catching things. Like mice, and then those rats. Rats aren’t like mice; they’re bigger! And they try to bite my tail! It’s my tail, not rats’ tail; they have their own bald little tails. And the twowalkers pet me when I catch the rats! So I catch the rats anyways. Mice are more fun ; they’re faster, and smaller, and much harder to get. I see really well in the dark. Twowalkers don’t, they stumble and bumble around trying to find the sticks they light on fire so they can see, and sometimes they step on my tail.

Weaknesses
Hmmm… weaknesses. But I shouldn’t tell anyone my weaknesses, what if the rats found out! Oh well. I can’t hear so well in one ear, and it throws me off balan- *Whoah!* Almost fell off there, when I’m up high. Huh? Wassat? I can’t hear you! Speak up! I can’t climb too well because I can’t hear I think, and being up too high makes me dizzy. I like my tail, but it can get stepped on, or grabbed or chewed by rats. My poor tail!

·History
Let’s see I lived in a big big twowalker place, with lots of big buildings made of rocks. I lived near a big twowalker building where they write stuff. Lot’s of different kinds of twowalkers come and go from the place. There are even some with pointy ears like me. But none of them have fur. The really big ones scare me, and so does the place near the stairs. When I go by there there’s always something making a boom; and then the twowalkers walk out and there is black smoke that follows them it doesn’t smell nice; I wonder what those twowalkers are doing in there. I live near the place they make food though; it is nice and warm there. There are lots of rats and mice near there, and the twowalkers like it when I catch them. The twowalkers there have other cats like me. But some of them don’t catch rats. They sit around all day doing nothing. The other catcher-cats like to laugh at them, but some of them are nice. The twowalkers’ outside is scary, there are lots of twowalkers walking on the stones, and sometimes they step on my tail. Some of them try to pick me up, but I don’t like getting picked up! Put me down! MROWR! A little while ago, before the snow but not before the leaves started falling I left the twowalker place, hiding in a horse bag. It was kind of dizzy, but I wanted to be outside the outside of the twowalker place. The cats say there is lots of green grass, and mice to catch… Am I there yet?(Thorgas' tim for the day: Your history is nicely done, but I think you can add more, being a veteran player and all that. How about his birth, his parents, how did he et inside the horsebag, etc.)
·Weapons
I have teeth! And claws! And my amazing cat looks! But the twowalkers have big sticks, with pointy bits. Can I get one?
· Belongings
I have a bag, that goes around my neck that the twowalkers gave me. It is shiny, but I can’t get it off. The twowalkers say it has my name and the name of the twowalkers’ place on it if I get lost. I don’t know I can’t read twowalker’s writing. It is nice and shiny though… Oooh shiny….

Oh, I should have brought the paper down… this beam is too high. Now where was that ladder? AHH! It’s gone! I can’t get down! Help…

And there you go. Beautifully done in first person perspective.


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on August 10, 2007, 10:20:51 AM
Mrow! Thank you! The overview was hard for this cat to write... There isn't that much to say really. Oh that darned history. You twowalkers are crazy about old things! I don't know why... I'll fix it though!


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on August 10, 2007, 11:03:52 AM
Okay. I fixed the history mister Shortwalker!  :rolling: Mrow it's nice and red now. I don't think I like red.


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Buri on August 10, 2007, 11:16:18 AM
Purrr-fect! *Oink* I still think you ought to add a few more sentences in your overview. Mine has three. :P

Wait for the biggie-mods to check this CD.


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on August 10, 2007, 11:23:19 AM
Mrow! Big big thing! Run! *scurries away promptly behind a rock* Thank you!


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on August 10, 2007, 11:26:43 PM
Mrow? No more comments?


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Kalína Dalá'isyrás on August 11, 2007, 03:12:00 AM
Looks ok to me. Still a bit messy, but I believe that can be overlooked at this time.


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on August 11, 2007, 06:05:59 AM
(I'd like to fix that before getting titled, but shift that aside.)

Mrow! :grin: Thank you Kalina!


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Lorek Bearfist on August 12, 2007, 03:12:12 PM
Bump. I don't want this CD to fall away from the boards as it is WONDERFUL! I hope to RP with you in the near future, Inkear.


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: lukecash on August 12, 2007, 05:17:58 PM
First of all, are you on crack? And second of all, are you even allowed to rp as an animal? All of the races in santharia are more like creatures and people than animals...


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: lukecash on August 12, 2007, 05:20:00 PM
what if it were a man or elf or dwarf that was insane and thought he/she was a cat?(Sounds pretty witty to me...)


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Niccoli Faust on August 12, 2007, 09:14:29 PM
Secondly, because I find the first question in bad taste and rather annoying, Yes you are allowed to play an animal. ASSUMING YOU HAVE ENOUGH SKILL TO DO SO. This is all. I will thank you to not go posting stupidities like this in CDs


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Mina on August 12, 2007, 10:38:09 PM
An amusing CD.  I see no problems with it.  You are titled.   :)


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Kalína Dalá'isyrás on August 12, 2007, 10:43:12 PM
Just remove the color from the CD and I will move it to the archives!


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on August 13, 2007, 12:35:00 AM
Aww... and the colour looked nice too... Mrow...


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Altario Shialt-eck-Gorrin on July 10, 2009, 10:59:20 PM
Brought up as requested.


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on July 10, 2009, 11:43:17 PM
Whah! Fixed! I finally got down from the ladder!


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on July 12, 2009, 12:18:01 PM
That is to say, I've finished what I wanted to change. It's in red should anything need to be looked over.


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Cyradin Lawabel on July 12, 2009, 05:58:42 PM
Well, the changes look pretty purrfect to me, Inkear.

:D


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Kalína Dalá'isyrás on July 13, 2009, 02:05:21 PM
Ok, I went ahead and gave you my approval, but under the condition that what I mark is fixed (which shouldn't be a problem).

Quote
Name
Inkear

Gender
Male

Age
1 year

Race
Cat

Tribe Breed Just use Breed and remove the striked "tribe".
Barn/Wilderon Cat

Occupation
Huh? Wassat? Oh! Job? Rat Catcher.

Title
Tís áel (elven ear) You may wish to put the meaning in your signature. Just a thought.
 
Character Portrait
(http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/8052/catportraitcopyge9.th.png)

 Overview
Hey look! Paper… Hmm. but what to write about? ME! Let’s see… Cat. I think that’s it. Oh wait; I know! I like catching rats yeah! And I like being near twowalkers and other cats. Okay! Now that's it!
Appearance

Height
Oh, what’s that strange measurement those twowalkers have… two and a half palmspans. I don’t know how many paws that is… let's see: One, two, get that back paw up there, OW! That hurt!

Weight
Let’s see… not took heavy, not too light… One halfeb and two ods.

Hair Fur Colour
Hmm… my fur is… let’s see here, stupid tail get out of the way… Brown. And there are stripes! And they are black! Or are the stripes brown and the rest black… I don't know!
   
Eye Colour
Hmm… well the right one there is green, and the left one there is blue. It looks neat!


Physical Appearance
Let’s see I’ve got fur… yeah fur, it’s kind of longish, sometimes it gets caught on things. It’s nice and warm though, and it keeps me from getting wet. What colour is it? Hmm. Is that grey? Brown? Greybrown?  Oh wait. No. Hmm. Let's see. Fur is brown. Face is white. Sort of. Oh stripes! I have stripes! They look fast! I mean... black. Oh, and my tail, it is black at the end. I’ve got…. One, no, two ears, hey, that one is black! And my eyes are… what’s that? Is that blue? And green! I like that one! Let’s see there’s a tail here somewhere, it’s got fur on it too. And it’s nice and long and it does help me keep my balance. Nice big paws, great for walking on things, and catching stuff. And claws, nice sharp claws.

Clothing
Huh? Wassat?

Personality
Hmmm… This is hard, how do those twowalkers that live here write all this stuff? I like to jump around and move! Yes moving is very good. And chasing things. Catching things is better though. Like spiders! Spiders! Yes lots of energy all the time. Except after drinking milk. Milk makes me tired… *Yawn*
(space)
What else, I like twowalkers, they’re funny for things that don’t have tails, and they write things! Oh and they pet me! Especially the pointy-ears. Yes! Petting is good! Pointy-ears are nice! Except when the twowalkers don't pet me and chase me with those sticks. With more sticks on the end. Um.. BROOMS! Ah! Brooms! But they don’t let me near the big books or papers, no they yell at me if I go in the really big room with all the books, or especially near them while they’re working. But if I don’t bother them they give me treats! Or is that the other way around? I’m confused…

Strengths and Weaknesses

Strengths
Twowalkers like me. They like to pet me, and give me food, and sometimes yarn! But then I get stuck in the yarn, and it’s not nice. I’m really really good at catching things. Like mice, and then those rats. Rats aren’t like mice; they’re bigger! And they try to bite my tail! It’s my tail, not rats’ tail; they have their own bald little tails. And the twowalkers pet me when I catch the rats! So I catch the rats anyways. Mice are more fun ; they’re faster, and smaller, and much harder to get. I see really well in the dark. Twowalkers don’t, they stumble and bumble around trying to find the sticks they light on fire so they can see, and sometimes they step on my tail.

Weaknesses
Hmmm… weaknesses. But I shouldn’t tell anyone my weaknesses, what if the rats found out! Oh well. I can’t hear so well in one ear, and it throws me off balan- *Whoah!* Almost fell off there, when I’m up high. Huh? Wassat? I can’t hear you! Speak up! I can’t climb too well because I can’t hear; I think, and being up too high makes me dizzy. I like my tail, but it can get stepped on, or grabbed or chewed by rats. My poor tail!

History
Let’s see... I lived in a big big twowalker place, with lots of big buildings made of rocks. I lived near a big twowalker building where they write stuff. Lot’s of different kinds of twowalkers come and go from the place. There are even some with pointy ears like me. But none of them have fur. The really big ones scare me, and so does the place near the stairs. When I go by there<comma> there’s always something making a boom; and then the twowalkers walk out and there is black smoke that follows them it doesn’t smell nice; I wonder what those twowalkers are doing in there.

 I lived near the place they make food though; it is nice and warm there. There are lots of rats and mice near there, and the twowalkers like it when I catch them. The twowalkers there have other cats like me. But some of them don’t catch rats. They sit around all day doing nothing. The other catcher-cats like to laugh at them, but some of them are nice.

The twowalkers’ outside is scary, there are lots of twowalkers walking on the stones, and sometimes they step on my tail. Some of them try to pick me up, but I don’t like getting picked up! Put me down! MROWR!

My parents were both catcher-cats. They were really good! Yaya! Mama had long fur it was grey, I think, I don't remember well. And Papa had short hair, and he was BIG! Was he orange? I don't remember! A little while ago, before the snow but not before the leaves started falling<comma> I left the twowalker place, hiding in a fourwalker's bag. I was following a rat and it ran into the fourwalker place (fourwalker are what you twowalkers call horses.) It tried to climb but us cats are good climbers. I almost got him too! He tried to run and he jumped onto the fourwalker! I tried to follow him but the fourwalker jumped back. I got caught on it's back and fell into one of the big bags. It hurt. I fell and I hit my head, and then everything was black.

I woke up and the bag was closed, or at least I think it was closed. It was kind of dizzy, but I wanted to be outside the outside of the twowalker place. The cats say there is lots of green grass, and mice to catch…

I took a nap in the bag. It wasn't fun! There wasn't anything soft in the bag. Except my tail. Twowalkers need more soft things. When the fourwalker stopped, at least I think it stopped, the bag opened and I ran! Ran ran ran! Bags are not fun. I ran and I ran and then I ran into a twowalker. He had fur on his face! He petted me! Nice fur-face.

He walked funny though. I think his leg was hurt, so he carried a stick. Stick is not for scratching! He picked me up which is not fun! but then he put me in a bag, and there were soft things in the bag and we went walking! Walking is fun! The Fur-Face twowalker has little books that he writes in. He does that alot. I think he should stop writing and pet me... Are we there yet?

Weapons
I have teeth! And claws! And my amazing cat looks! But the twowalkers have big sticks, with pointy bits. Can I get one?

Belongings
I have a bag, that goes around my neck that the twowalkers gave me. It is shiny, but I can’t get it off. The twowalkers say it has my name and the name of the twowalkers’ place on it if I get lost. I don’t know I can’t read twowalker’s writing. It is nice and shiny though… Oooh shiny… Oh! And it makes noise! Noise! Pretty noise! Oh! And a twowalker! He is mine! Mine! He has fur on his face!

Oh, I should have brought the paper down… this beam is too high. Now where was that ladder? AHH! It’s gone! I can’t get down! Help…

That should do it.


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Inkear on July 14, 2009, 02:47:15 AM
Okay! S'all done!  :pet:


Title: Re: Inkear/Wilderon/Barn Cat/ Rat Catcher
Post by: Altario Shialt-eck-Gorrin on July 15, 2009, 05:46:39 AM
Second Approval :D