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dane balazar
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« Reply #30 on: August 23, 2003, 02:27:22 AM »

3 in the morning! My god you are dedicated! :D    

So, I have detailed about the sword and how his family started using it.


I would like to thank everyone for being patient

In the end, I will fight untill I draw my final breath
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« Reply #31 on: August 23, 2003, 03:50:22 AM »

Height still too tall, a bit more for personality, and I'd love if you could give the length of your sword.

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« Reply #32 on: August 23, 2003, 05:10:22 AM »

*shrugs off Rayne's glare*
I've said/done worse.  Plus lets face it, have a terrible memory and I had just read Terra's post in the OOC thread, so thats all I was really thinking about.

*mutters something about "prickly elves" and how he should dig up that old cooking book*:evil

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In the begining I was weak.  Now I have purpose.  Stay me from my path and the Gods themselves cannot save you.


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dane balazar
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« Reply #33 on: August 23, 2003, 05:18:22 AM »

ok Dane has shrunk, has more detail with the length of his sword, and his personality.

any more Advice?

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Terra Artemos
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« Reply #34 on: August 23, 2003, 01:30:22 PM »

OK, I have said this before, take a GOOD and THOROUGH look at your formatting, and make sure every thing is consistent. Bolding, punctuation, paragraph spacing, capitalization, and hake sure it all consistent.

Its a good character, but I just can't abide giving even a good character a title if it looks like crap. Unfortunately, your does, sorry. :|

In case you are wondering why I am either not saying much or being so harsh, it because I have not been in a good mood as of late. I am Stressed, and as those here can tell you truly, I am not the most civil person to deal with when I am under a lot of stress.


'I am grey. All but those like me see only darkness and light, they do not see the grey between them. In this greyness I dwell. I would not wish this fate on any other.'

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dane balazar
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« Reply #35 on: August 24, 2003, 01:13:22 AM »

I have gone through and looked over and made sure it was consistant.

Anything else?

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« Reply #36 on: August 24, 2003, 02:05:22 AM »

I have no more issues, I don't think. Mortus?

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dane balazar
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« Reply #37 on: August 24, 2003, 01:15:22 AM »

Rayne, is happy with it !!!!!!!!:eek   :

my life is complete |I  

does that mean I am going to be titled?


P.S. Rayne , the web site about you is cool, did you make it yourself?

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   -Dane

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« Reply #38 on: August 24, 2003, 03:28:22 AM »

::b lushes:: Yeah. ^_^;; It hasn't been updated in forever, though.


I'd like to make sure Mortus is happy with the form before I title you.

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« Reply #39 on: August 24, 2003, 10:50:22 AM »

Ah hell, good enough. I am not in the mood to knit pick at one blank line.


'I am grey. All but those like me see only darkness and light, they do not see the grey between them. In this greyness I dwell. I would not wish this fate on any other.'

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dane balazar
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« Reply #40 on: August 25, 2003, 12:50:22 AM »

so what now, I am going to be titled soon, or moved to the approved characters list?

In the end, I will fight untill I draw my final breath
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« Reply #41 on: August 25, 2003, 01:18:22 AM »

I assume (since Rayne and Terra approved you) that you can begin RPing.  You can either begin or try and join an ongoing RPG, or enter Nyermersys, which is DMed (at the moment however, it's a bit slow).  Congratulations on getting approved.

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« Reply #42 on: August 25, 2003, 01:50:22 AM »

Titled

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dane balazar
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« Reply #43 on: August 25, 2003, 01:03:22 AM »

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS thank you thank you :: begin to grovel:: thank Rayne:D  


P.S. how does an elf like you have Aim, Palantire ?

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   -Dane

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« Reply #44 on: August 25, 2003, 03:37:22 AM »

::b links with utter confusion.::

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