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Kalína Dalá'isyrás

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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter and Tanner

« Reply #45 on: February 22, 2007, 08:50:28 AM »

You cannot prevent anyone from commenting on your CD. If you would just prefer the Moderating Team, that is fine. But when we are so shorthanded on actual moderator's, it isn't fair to actual moderators to have to do all the work.


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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter and Tanner

« Reply #46 on: February 22, 2007, 12:27:09 PM »

no i just prefer as you said but i'd wish that others wouldn't... sorry if i came across rude or mean but that wasn't my reason for typing that...


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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter and Tanner

« Reply #47 on: February 23, 2007, 10:04:47 AM »

It didn't come across as rude or mean...more of snobbish and semi-self absorbed. Not to be offensive, but you are in no position to be mandating orders, despite the fact this is your CD. While us Mini-moderators, Cd Moderators and Admins are considered to be the "higher" commenters, if you will, I can list plenty of non-Moderating folk whose knowledge far exceeds my own, and that of most of the Cd team.


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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter and Tanner

« Reply #48 on: February 23, 2007, 01:40:46 PM »

indeed... i entended it to be less... forceful... i meant to say that i'd prefer if it was from a moderator, but it wouldn't be any quarrel if another posted.


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Kalína Dalá'isyrás

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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter and Tanner

« Reply #49 on: February 23, 2007, 02:49:08 PM »

Send me a PM when you are done with the edits Jereth.


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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter and Tanner

« Reply #50 on: February 23, 2007, 07:48:21 PM »

i'll make a note of that... Madame Mërénwèn.


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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter/Healer

« Reply #51 on: February 25, 2007, 11:30:09 AM »

I completed my CD history and the like... comments welcome.


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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter/Healer

« Reply #52 on: March 03, 2007, 11:24:22 AM »

bumped up!


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Simonne Miller

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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter/Healer

« Reply #53 on: March 05, 2007, 06:10:51 AM »

Hello, Jereth!

I read through your CD. I noticed that here and there you have a small spelling error. I'd suggest you read through it again, if you don't find them tell me so and I'll look them up again (I didn't copy them now, so I don't remember where I saw them

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One thing I noticed in your history was the attack of the bear. A bear, and especially an angered mother-bear, is a VERY fast animal, which can keep up with a driving jeep. You might be able to dodge her claw, but I doubt that afterwards he'd have time to pick up another spear and throw it. I'd say that the first spear should have hit her, or Jeleth wouldn't have survived.

With kind regard,
Simonne


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Prince Erebus

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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter/Healer

« Reply #54 on: March 05, 2007, 01:07:55 PM »

I didn't notice any spelling errors... could you find them for me? I've changed the bear story.


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Kalína Dalá'isyrás

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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter/Healer

« Reply #55 on: March 05, 2007, 04:03:09 PM »

I went through your CD and fixed the basic spelling mistakes and such.

I would suggest though, to double check you Santharian spellings. (Use the search function on the Main Site. If it can find the word, then you are good. If not, you might need to look it up to double check the proper spelling).


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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter/Healer

« Reply #56 on: March 07, 2007, 10:15:58 AM »

I used a software on my computer and there is no spelling mistakes as it or I can tell. If you spot one please tell me where. thanks.


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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter/Healer

« Reply #57 on: March 07, 2007, 10:16:36 AM »

I could use a review please...


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Kalína Dalá'isyrás

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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter/Healer

« Reply #58 on: March 07, 2007, 10:46:04 AM »

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I used a software on my computer and there is no spelling mistakes as it or I can tell. If you spot one please tell me where. thanks.

A spelling software will not catch Santharian spellings, and I had already did a spelling check for you dispite the fact.

I will give an actual review shortly.


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Re: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter/Healer

« Reply #59 on: March 08, 2007, 05:07:29 AM »

that is a problem...