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Author Topic: Jeréth Ancalídormis, Hunter/Healer (Old)  (Read 18058 times)
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« Reply #60 on: March 10, 2007, 12:42:35 AM »

-.-

Ok...since you didn't really understand what I was saying, I will do it for you.

Also, I am going to be editing your CD as there are many capitalization errors and basic grammatical errors as well. (No factual content will be changed)
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« Reply #61 on: March 11, 2007, 07:12:04 AM »

thank you!
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« Reply #62 on: March 14, 2007, 05:41:45 AM »

bumped!
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« Reply #63 on: March 14, 2007, 02:32:35 PM »

While doing the read through, I thought of a couple things to give my 2 sans on.   

---Strengths---

---Battle hardened:
Due to his extensive combat training, He has gained nerves of steel and a mind as sharp as iron as well as a powerful physique. In combat, He is precise and calculated, making measured attacks calmly.

---Scythes:
He trained from the age 7 to use staves and holds a near timeless knowledge of their strengths, weaknesses, combat styles, etc.

---Hunting/Tracking:
Raised in a nomadic tribe and later the life of a wanderer, has given him a near limitless ability to track and hunt, both animals and higher races alike.

---Herb-lore:
His mother was the main healer in his tribe. She taught him about plants and their uses at a young age. When she died, he trained further and took up the position of healer in her place. He traveled later in life and learned about everything there is to know about plants and other objects used in healing.


      ---Weaknesses---

Blackouts:
He suffers from blackouts when under extreme stress or pressure. When he becomes conscious, he is unaware of what happened and can’t remember where he is.

Looks:
Because of his beauty, he cannot blend in very well with his surroundings, making it hard for him to hide from others. It also attracts women to him, which can lead to drunken orgies and/or Very angry fathers. Ok. For one, beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and in thus cannot be judged on anything else but a case by case basis making this invalid. Yes, a man can be good looking, but each and every single woman out there has a different taste in men. I really don't see how being "good-looking" is really a disadvantage to anyone, especially if they know how to carry themselves properly. Each and every person is in control of their own body. And drunken orgies would most likely be in taverns, where the father's of these "women" could care less about their daughters, hence why they are "selling" themselves in the first place. And "orgies" is a fairly modern terminology ^.~

Great Sorrow:
Due to the loss of his first love, he often seems distant and sad. The sadness his body seems to give off tends to spread to others around him. How does this put him at a disadvantage other than feeling sorry for himself most of the time? Just because someone suffers from depression doesn't mean they are at any sort of disadvantage when dealing with the world, they just choose to be thought of as if they are at a disadvantage.
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« Reply #64 on: March 15, 2007, 05:13:06 AM »

okay then i'll add this into account.
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« Reply #65 on: March 15, 2007, 05:15:48 AM »

Well one thing not related to your CD, but account wise, you need to shorten your signature. If you read up in newbies section or somewhere, you can only have so much signature, which mine is about over it, but yours is too long sorry.
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« Reply #66 on: March 15, 2007, 07:22:18 AM »

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« Reply #67 on: March 17, 2007, 07:49:47 AM »

Haha! Sweet guy! Totally reminds me of mine! (My format, I mean)
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« Reply #68 on: March 18, 2007, 01:41:28 PM »

Just checking up on your CD and haven't seen any updates.

Your S&W are the only things I am questioning at this point so, the sooner we get them straightened out...
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« Reply #69 on: March 19, 2007, 11:56:13 AM »

im sorry Jiro? are you accusing me of something? I can't tell. no offence if your not.
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« Reply #70 on: March 19, 2007, 10:33:12 PM »

He wasn't Jereth.

Still waiting for updates and making sure you know I haven't forgotten about the CD.
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« Reply #71 on: March 23, 2007, 06:25:21 AM »

i'm going to work on part now.



Thursday march 22, 2007 at 5:25pm eastern time.
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« Reply #72 on: March 23, 2007, 06:35:33 AM »

completed the weakness portion of my CD.


Thursday march 22, 2007 at 5:37pm eastern time.
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« Reply #73 on: March 23, 2007, 11:48:27 AM »

Okies,

Thanks for fixing those up quickly ^.~ They look much more realistic now.

First approval! Thumb up
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« Reply #74 on: March 25, 2007, 10:55:52 PM »

thank you!
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