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Simonne Miller

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Re: Seh'nara Celebrindal

« Reply #60 on: April 04, 2007, 12:16:41 AM »

There are two things I'd still remark on before giving you the second approval:

1) Did you write the story of the tattoo in her history? If so, I seem to have missed it, but I think it's an important enough event to mention, don't you?

2) 19 is still quite old for a wolf. They reach an age of 16 on average. If he is still in his prime, I'd make him something of 10 to 12 years old.

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Drasil Razorfang

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« Reply #61 on: April 04, 2007, 05:59:19 AM »

Just wanted to step in and give you a Congradulations Seh'nara, seeing as you will be approved shortly. Despite the long hours you spent waiting for comments, you rarely got testy and were an extremely good person to work with as you integrated comments almost instantaneously and weren't afraid to ask questions. Can't wait to see you in the Herald for further instruction =P


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Seh'nara Celebrindal

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« Reply #62 on: April 04, 2007, 05:48:58 PM »

Thanks soo much everyone! grin

Thanks!


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« Reply #63 on: April 04, 2007, 06:38:45 PM »

Alright, I did the edits. At least, the parts that I could, which was only point 1. I'm confused about the wolf's age. Cos Drasil said:

Quote from: Drasil Razorfang on March 23, 2007, 02:16:17 AM

I don't think its very likely that an Ashmarian wolf would have been so far down. In addition, the wolf would have to be old or dead by now as generally wolves don't live for 65 years.

But you say that they reach 16 years old. So, I'm not sure, and the Ashmarian Wolf entry didn't have anything bout the age. That's about it.

Thanks again for my approval! grin


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« Reply #64 on: April 04, 2007, 11:09:32 PM »

I believe Drasil's comment wasn't saying that they *sometimes* reach the age of 65, which is kinda absurd actually. Simonne was going off how long wolves live on Earth (which should be the basis for most beasts in Santharia if lifespan is not written and there is a similar animal on earth.

19 is old for a wolf, so unless you wish him to be so old he/she can barely move, then it is up to you.


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« Reply #65 on: April 04, 2007, 11:12:16 PM »

Ok, I get it. He shall be only 5 years old! Thanks.


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Simonne Miller

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Re: Seh'nara Celebrindal

« Reply #66 on: April 05, 2007, 02:52:21 AM »

There you go, second approval.


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Alassiel Telrúnya

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Re: Seh'nara Celebrindal

« Reply #67 on: April 05, 2007, 02:54:19 AM »

*Squeals* I can't wait to RP with you, Seh'nara!


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Re: Seh'nara Celebrindal

« Reply #68 on: April 05, 2007, 03:56:51 AM »

...You all misunderstood my comment. Shame on you! = P

I calculated the age of her wolf the way she had it and at that point in time it would have been sixty five years old, which I said was impossible. I said she needed to make her wolf younger because they would not live that long.