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Author Topic: Fenmarel Leislasa  (Read 16407 times)
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« Reply #30 on: March 18, 2007, 08:45:20 AM »

Oh i know, i can't ever hope to be as wise and wrinkly as simmone  evil
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« Reply #31 on: March 18, 2007, 05:48:56 PM »

I wash my hands of you.

And please don't insult people on my CD.
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« Reply #32 on: March 21, 2007, 04:48:38 PM »

Bump.

I've done some work on the history, Simonne! grin
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« Reply #33 on: March 21, 2007, 10:47:38 PM »

Yay, it looks already like a little more than 'they met and fell in love' story, although that's basically what it is :D (or isn't it? we'll have to wait...)

So yea, the only thing I can think of is that you might mention that maybe the cat didn't attack you because you were far enough away from its cubs? You don't have to, but the reason that animals attack people is usually that they form a threat to their young.

Oh, I was curious how my previous post was a dead give-away. I only talked to Fenmarel, I didn't mention any names.

And I wasn't offended by Jiro's comment, just so you know. I'm not offended very easily (not anymore, at least)
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« Reply #34 on: March 22, 2007, 12:54:25 AM »

I did mention it. Take a look at the 2nd paragraph of my history; it says
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However, whatever the reason, once Brook was a good distance away from the cubs and their mother, who had not taken part in the wild chase, he abandoned her and went back to his family.
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Your post was a giveaway, because you were replying to both me and Fenmarel in one post, and you didn't change names. Usually, you say 'Fenmarel,.....' then 'Alassiel,....'. However, this time, you talked as if you were talking to one person. It's not much of a giveaway, but observant people would probably notice it.
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« Reply #35 on: March 22, 2007, 01:12:55 AM »

Argh! *Tears hair out* My document has vanished again! I will never trust my school computers ever again.
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« Reply #36 on: March 22, 2007, 01:18:01 AM »

I was only talking to Fenmarel, you know...

Yes, but it's also stated that Fenmarel doesn't know why the beast doesn't go after her anymore. Or maybe I just misinterpreted that ;)
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« Reply #37 on: March 22, 2007, 01:21:54 AM »

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He's right *grins*
I don't have time right now to read everything, I just wanted to let you know I know who you are now. Well, thanks to your hint, of course, but still *grins*

That was in response to Jiro's reply, which was in response to mine.

Then you told Fenmarel you knew who she was.

But anyway, I don't want to debate, I want to finish off my history!!!

By the way, you're right about the Pard thing. I think I contradicted myself. grin
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« Reply #38 on: March 22, 2007, 05:23:19 AM »

ATTENTION!!! I have finished my CD, and would like feedback ASAP. :D
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« Reply #39 on: March 22, 2007, 05:35:22 AM »

Please don't be so demanding. We have our lives too you know, even though you wouldn't say it from the amount of time I spend here *grins*

Quickly what I noticed: The Eyelian talent does not mean that they can talk to every animal. The language of the animal has to be learned just as a normal language, it's not like you spend two days with an animal and then can talk its language. If you look at my Eyelian character, Naya, she spent about 25 five years (approximately, don't take me up on that number) to learn 3 animal languages. I don't know if you've ever learned a new language, but it's not very easy. I'm learning Czech and after three years, it's still far from perfect. If you live with a language daily and can't do anything but express yourself with that language, then it's easy, you have to. That's why it's believable that she is fluent at Ylfferhim and Eyelian, and not believable that she can talk with all the animals.

You also might want to mention those animal friends of hers in your history. If you already wrote about them, I seem to have missed them :)

That's it for now...
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« Reply #40 on: March 22, 2007, 05:55:40 AM »

Edited! Would you like to do a Uri-check, Simonne (I'm not being demanding here grin)?
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« Reply #41 on: March 22, 2007, 06:41:14 AM »

Comments are welcomed! grin
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« Reply #42 on: March 22, 2007, 06:44:06 AM »

Please wait at least 3 days before updating again saying you want comments. Just give them time as they arent always there and might be busy. Just be a little patient.
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« Reply #43 on: March 22, 2007, 06:45:43 AM »

I just finished my history, after working on it for a few days. So I guess I could say I did wait a few days. grin
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« Reply #44 on: March 23, 2007, 03:17:06 AM »

Let's see if this takes a longer or shorter time to get approved than my last character. But I shouldn't be surprised if I have to wait a few months; my first character only took 3 weeks to get approved.

I like creating characters. It improves my writing style. :D
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I can write better than anybody who can write faster, and I can write faster than anybody who can write better. ~ Fenmarel Leislasa
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