Aroura Roselyn / Centoraurian / Jeweller

[Aroura Roselyn]

Name: Aroura Roselyn

Gender: Female

Age: 21

Race: Human

Tribe: Centoraurian

Occupation: Jeweller

Title: Maiden of the Rose

Appearance-
Height: 1 peds, 2 fore

Weight: 1 pygge, 3 heb, 1 hafeb

Hair colour: Golden blonde

Hair style: Long and curly

Eye colour: Brown

Physical appearance: She is quite tall, but has a small frame. She is physically weak with very long and slender legs and quite a womanly figure. Her hair is long and goes down to her lower back, it is very curly and thick with a lot of life. She has pale skin but her eye's burn a fiery red. She is quite ghostly in appearance. Her eyes are naturally brown but in the right light they almost seem to gleam a fiery red. She has a very small and delicate nose and quite thick lips, with a bit of a pout. 

Clothes: She wears a long red leather cape draped over her shoulders held with a rose shaped, diamond brooch and underneath she wears just a simple black dress down to her ankles with a loose belt round her waist. Her shoes are plain black with flat soles. Her clothes are of a good quality, the black dress is made of cotton and is very soft with a leather belt, she uses to hold her sword and small black leather bag. The cape is made out of leather and so are her shoes. She wears a small gold ring on her little finger engraved with the word "stranger".   

Personality: She is very shy and has no real friends; she has been left as a bit of a loner who likes to keep her feelings to herself. But if she wants to she can be extremely persuasive and can get people to do what she wants, so she can get her own way. When she meets somebody new she can get very defensive, as she does not have very good social skills and is scared to risk getting her feelings hurt if she got close to somebody and opens up her emotions, then that person lets her down.

She likes having time alone to just think and relax; she walks for miles by herself just to hear some of the wonderful sounds in the world. When it is silent she likes just being with her thoughts and does not like being in very noisy places. She likes teaching herself new skills and trying new methods of making her jewelery. When she was 17 she met a stranger who taught her how to use her sword and since then she has been practicing a lot and elaborating on some of the methods he taught her.

She most hates having to stay in one place for too long so tries to move around a lot. She likes meeting new people from different cultures and learning about the history of their culture and how they live.

She is a very complex person, in private she can be very emotional and if she does get a friend, she likes opening up and telling them how she feels. But she is worried about opening up to most people in case they don't like her and criticize her for it. A lot of this is because of her traumatic past. Aroura is not very tactful in choosing her words so she tries not to speak to much to people she does not know, and she can normally tell what other people's personalities are like by the way they, speak walk and move. Aroura can almost always tell if a person is lying, even if it only show's up in their eyes for a split second, she will not miss a thing. 
Strengths:
•Many people take pity on her due to her weak and feeble appearance.
•She has a good sense of direction, and is very adventurous.
•She is very cunning and persuasive so she can make people do what she wants them to do and most of the time she gets what she wants.
•She is a fast learner.

Weaknesses:
•She is very weak and unable to protect herself if she does get attacked.
•When she goes too far away from home she is vulnerable to attack, or getting her supplies stolen.
•She does not have very good social skills.
•She is quite forgetful

Magic: None

History: When she was only 3 days old, her house was broken into by a mysterious stranger, who killed both her parents and stole most of their belongings. In the early morning one of the tribal elders went to visit the house, where she found the dead bodies of both Aroura’s parents. Just as she was about to go back to tell the rest of the tribe, she heard Aroura’s cry, she went over to the cot where she found Aroura lying, covered in the blood of her parents. Also in the cot lying next to Aroura, there was a sword covered in blood, presumed to be the weapon used to kill Aroura's parents. The elder picked Aroura out of the cot and the sword, and then took her to her house.

The elder never told Aroura about her parents and who they were. It was agreed by the tribe leaders that she should have as normal childhood as possible, and when the elder who agreed to raise her dies, then Aroura would be told what happened to her parents. Aroura was a bit of a loner as a child and never had any real friends. She spent a lot of time with the elder who raised her, learning how to make high quality jewelery, when she got older she started to sell her jewelery as a business.

When Aroura was only 15, the elder died leaving her six silverbard coin, the helcrani shortsword engraved with the word "stranger", that she had found in the cot all those years ago, a diamond brooch shaped like a rose that the elder had made especially for Aroura, and a note telling her about her parents and what had happened to them, but it did not tell her who they were. Since that day, Aroura has vowed to find out who her parents where and avenge their death.

After this Aroura became a wonderer. She would walk for miles around, meeting a lot of new people where ever she went. When Aroura was about 17, she met a man on her travels. He never told her his name, but they got on really well, he was the first and only friend she had ever had. He taught her how to use her sword, they spent 3 weeks together. When she woke up one morning he was simply gone, he did not even leave a note, but on the floor where he had been sleeping, she found a gold ring engraved with the word "stranger". The same as on the sword used to kill her parents. 

After she realized, she had possibly come face to face with her parent’s killer, she started to travel all round Santharia looking for him. Every now and again she would stop to ask some people in a nearby village if they knew a man who simply went by the name “stranger”, but who ever she asked it did not get her any closer to the truth.

Weapons: A Helcrani shortsword engraved with the word "stranger”, which is presumed to be the weapon used to kill Aroura's parents. She carries it in her belt and always keeps it with her, because she wants to kill the man who killed her parents with the same sword that he killed her parents with.

Belongings:
A small leather bag where she keeps.
2 silverbard.
Possibly a couple of copperbard.
She normally has at least 10 sans with her to buy the food and drink.
In the bag she also carries 2 necklaces, 1 bracelet, 1 brooch and 2 rings she made to sell to make money.
2 small loaves of Loibl bread.
1 spare plain black dress.
The diamond brooch shaped like a rose, left to her by the elder of the tribe.
A gold ring engraved with the word "stranger", left by the man she suspects to have killed her parents, she thought he was her friend.

[Amarth Edhel]

I know i'm new but ypu need to include more. If you need help ask a Moderator like Mina.
Or look at The Character Creation page.

[Mina]

She hasn't finished her CD yet.  You can tell from the posticon she's using. 

[Prince Erebus]

indeed...

[Alassiel Telrúnya]

And now she is finished. I'll go over your CD soon today, Aroura!

[Drasil Razorfang]

I am sorry Lady Roselyn, but the Crystal of Light and Beads of Youth you describe are considered artifacts, which are temporarily banned.  Unfortunatley, these will have to be removed from your CD.

[Seh'nara Celebrindal]

Just wanna confirm, is it "Lady Roselyn" or "Lady Roselin"?

[Drasil Razorfang]

Oh yeah...your display name has to match your characters name exactly no alternate spellings please.

[Aroura Roselyn]

It is ment to be Lady Roselyn but I do not know how to change my user name.

[Alassiel Telrúnya]

Go to your Profile, and click on Account related settings.

[Aroura Roselyn]

I have changed that now, thankyou for the help.

[Aroura Roselyn]

just wondering if you could tell me, is there anything else wrong with my CD, so I can change it.

[Alassiel Telrúnya]

Well, Seh'nara's currently working on a Uri for you, so I'll be lazy, and not post the same thing. Besides, she's a much better checker. I tend to miss lots of things out.

[Seh'nara Celebrindal]

Hey, Lady Roselyn! My comments will be in green.

Name: Aroura Roselyn

Gender: female

Age: 21

Race: human

Tribe: The Krean men

Occupation: jeweller

Title: Lady Roselyn

Appearance-
Height: 1.75 peds

Wight: 1.3 pygge

Hair colour: golden blonde

Hair style: long and curly

Eye colour: red
(Put everything from appearance onwards between tribe and occupation. As in the top appearance.)

Physical appearance: She is quite tall, but has a small frame. She is physically weak and has very long and slender legs. Her hair is long and goes down to her lower back; she has pale skin but her eyes burn a fiery red. She is very dark, like a ghost and has very small delicate features. (Can a ghost be dark? I thought they were mostly transparent...)

Clothing: She wears a long red cape draped over her shoulders held with a diamond brooch and underneath she wears just a simple black dress down to her ankles.

Shoes: she wears plain black shoes with a flat sole.

Jewellery: she wears a chain round her that has the crystal of light on it and a bracelet that has 6 beads of youth on it.
(You can combine the clothing, shoes and jewellery with physical appearances.)

Personality: she is very shy and has no real friends, most people take an instant dislike to her and she has been left as a bit of a loner who likes to keep herself to herself. But if she wants to she can be extremely persuasive and can get people to do what she wants them to so she can get her own way.

Strengths: many people take pity on her due to her weak and feeble appearance.
Her magic powers could make anybody unable to attach her.(???)
She is good at finding her way round and has a good knowledge of the area around where she lives, very adventurous.
She is very cunning and persuasive so she can make people do what she wants them to do and most of the time she gets what she wants.

Weaknesses: She is very weak and unable to protect herself if she does get attacked.
If she does not see her attack, she would not have time to perform her magic leaving her open for attack.
She has been known to be too adventurous and end up walking miles away from home to a place she is not familiar with.
She does not have very good social skills and some people take an instant dislike to her.
(Please put bullets. Easier for us.  )

Magic: She has the voice of an angel and when she sings it makes everybody around her loose all their energy and can make them fall into a temporary sleep like state making them unable to attack. (I'm not sure if your type of magic is allowed, cos magic is generally very rare. You'll have to wait for the mods to say something.)

History: when she was only 3 days old her house was broken into by a mysterious stranger, who killed both her parents and stole most of their belongings. In the early morning one of the tribal elders went to visit the house, where she found the dead bodies of both Aroura’s parents. Just as she was about to go back to tell the rest of the tribe she heard Aroura’s cry, she went over to the cot where she found Aroura lying covered in the blood of her parents, her eyes burning a fiery red. Also in the cot lying next to Aroura there was a sword covered in blood, presumed to be the weapon used to kill Aroura's parents. The elder picked Aroura out of the cot and the sword then took her to her house. She raised Aroura as her own but she always knew Aroura was very different from all the other children and it was said her eyes were stained red with the death and blood of her parents.
When Aroura was only 15 the elder died leaving her with nothing but the sword she had found in the cot all those years ago, a diamond broach the elder had made especially for Aroura and a note telling her about her parents and why she was different from the other children. Since that day, Aroura has vowed to avenge the death of her parents. (What did she do during her 15 years? Hobbies? Any training? Any particular friend? How did the others treat her? Was her history kept a secret from her?)

Weapons: A sword that is presumed to be the weapon used to kill Aroura's parents. (Elaborate. How does it look like? Is it heavy? Did you learn to how use it? What colour is it?)

Belongings: The diamond brooch left to her by the elder of the tribe. (How does it look like? Is it in the shape of any particular thing?)


Okay, that was a rough check, but those are the thing that you need to put in. Hope we get approved soon!

Cheers,
Seh'nara

[Aroura Roselyn]

Thank you, I have taken most of your advise and I hope it is better.

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