Salena Smith/ Centoraurian/ Enthusiastic Swordswoman

[Salena smith]

Ok I'll think of something but Im not sure of what yet so if you have any suggestions let me know.

[hulder]

if she likes to fight, one might be enthusiastic swordswoman
if she doesn't, one might be reluctant warrior.
Mind you, these are just suggestions, don't take them if they aren't what you want.
these are just some things i came up with real quick. sorry if they don't help

[Talas Anthavin]

Hi Salena,

It seems to me that you've addressed a lot of the comments people have given you - sorry, but I didn't track every single item that everyone mentioned.  It looks good to me, though I am not a CD mod, nor do I have a lot of experience with character development as I only have one titled.

I think the main thing to keep in mind is balance strengths and weaknesses, and give only necessary details to describe your personality, appearance, personal effects, etc.

Cheers!   

Ta'las.

[Salena smith]

Thank you for your comments I'll keep those in mind. Thanks again.

[Salena smith]

Thank you everyone who made comments on my CD I went and changed a few things including what everyone has mentioned. Thanks again. Comment if you wish.

[Salena smith]

My CD is open to commenters if  you wish to comment. Thank you.

[Thorgas Ironforge]

Hello, Salena.

As much as people would like to comment on your CD, there is nothing to comment on. They would not post anything of no value in your CD to avoid cluttering it. I know immature people who do things like that. They are worthless, believe me.

I've read your CD and it looks good to me, with the exception of minor grammatical errors and some repetitive words. Nothing big though and it should not be an obstacle towards your approval, which I would say that you deserve to get, seeing that you responded to every comment we gave you.

Kar, Simonne, Mina, do you think she's ready for an approval?

[Salena smith]

Thank you on your comments Thorgas, I shall go back and see what I've miss spelled and such and fix it up. Thank you again, hope you have a nice day or evening.

[Mina]

Well, I don't see any obvious problems with the CD now, so here's your first approval. 

[Salena smith]

Mina thank you very much for my first approval.

[Thorgas Ironforge]

Heh, I knew I have the knack for choosing people ready for approval. I am really good.

Now then, please remove the coloring from your text in preparation for your CD to be moved to the archives, after you have received your second approval and your title.

Have a nice day.

[Salena smith]

Thank you Thorgas I have tooken the color out like you asked I hope it's better now. Thank you again for your comments.

[Vesk Lyricahl]

Everything looks fine to me, so here's the second approval.

[Salena smith]

Thank you so much for my title and second approval.

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