Welcome
Guest
. Please
login
or
register
.
Did you miss your
activation email?
1 Hour
1 Day
1 Week
1 Month
Forever
Newbies, read these!
Adventures of Caelereth
 
Forum
 
Archives
 
Approved Characters Archive II
 
Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
Pages:
1
2
[
3
]
4
Go Down
Author
Topic: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith (Read 21447 times)
0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.
Thorgas Ironforge
Ironforge Pyromancer
Offline
Gender:
Posts: 1540
Dwarf, Mitharim
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #30 on:
July 01, 2007, 08:27:49 PM »
The great Pyromancer hath sent you his reply.
Don't worry, your reason for leave the caverns is valid enough. I was being a bit nitpicky about the supplies there, probably due to being stressed out from taking care of 7 newborn puppies. *pats both dogs on the head* Good girl and boy.
I think medicine would be a good idea, since they aren't easy to find.
Logged
A weak mind is a deadly foe.
Thorgas Ironforge
Buri
Thorgas' theme song
Ganinon
Smithing Warrior
Approved Character
Offline
Posts: 366
Dwarf, Mitharim
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #31 on:
July 02, 2007, 03:17:54 AM »
PUPPY!!look and see if they looka t computer when you open this lolthey might hear me lol
well i put in medecine idea anything else i left out?
Logged
Thorgas Ironforge
Ironforge Pyromancer
Offline
Gender:
Posts: 1540
Dwarf, Mitharim
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #32 on:
July 02, 2007, 09:51:51 PM »
Just minor spelling errors.
Logged
A weak mind is a deadly foe.
Thorgas Ironforge
Buri
Thorgas' theme song
Ganinon
Smithing Warrior
Approved Character
Offline
Posts: 366
Dwarf, Mitharim
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #33 on:
July 03, 2007, 12:24:36 AM »
yea couldnt spell check last night had to get off right after i posted ill do that now
Logged
Ganinon
Smithing Warrior
Approved Character
Offline
Posts: 366
Dwarf, Mitharim
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #34 on:
July 03, 2007, 07:04:02 AM »
hmm im deciding weather or not to have Hejek come along.I might then make a CD for him and have him go a different way somewhere in roleplaying.like to searhc for something else or such things as that.what do you guys think?
Logged
hulder
New Santharian
Offline
Gender:
Posts: 47
Me big. Really big. Who dare fight me?
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #35 on:
July 05, 2007, 12:02:48 AM »
i am not a mod or anything, just saying, i think that your brother might be a good companion so if you wanted, you could, but if so, give a reason as to why he is with you. Is he helping you search for your wife, or something else?
By all means dont take my advice if you dont want to, i am just throwing out suggestions.
Logged
To those who dare to defie those of better skill, intellect, strength, or speed, remember to hide.
Ganinon
Smithing Warrior
Approved Character
Offline
Posts: 366
Dwarf, Mitharim
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #36 on:
July 05, 2007, 06:32:28 AM »
i was thinking he would help search fro Lumen but then in one of the cities he sees something or hears something to make him go off in search of something else.
Logged
Vesk Lyricahl
Woeful Rover
Approved Character
Offline
Gender:
Posts: 1454
Human, Eyelian
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #37 on:
July 06, 2007, 07:45:26 AM »
You've done a great job accounting for all of my comments. So I only have one final comment to make. Since the search for his wife is the reason Ganinon left his tribe, I would like to see some mention of how he feels about her in the personality section. Maybe he longs for her, is angry at her for abandoning him, or anything else your imagination can create.
«
Last Edit: July 06, 2007, 07:46:08 AM by Vesk Lyricahl
»
Logged
Not all who wander are lost. - J.R.R. Tolkien
Ganinon
Smithing Warrior
Approved Character
Offline
Posts: 366
Dwarf, Mitharim
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #38 on:
July 06, 2007, 11:47:43 AM »
there you go Vesk.Anything else or do you think my CD is good.lol i know im not done.Just would like to have someones approval even if its not a mods
Logged
Vesk Lyricahl
Woeful Rover
Approved Character
Offline
Gender:
Posts: 1454
Human, Eyelian
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #39 on:
July 06, 2007, 12:01:33 PM »
Your CD does seem fine to me, but there is one thing I don't think I noticed before. In the history you mention that his brother left with him, yet the brother isn't mentioned anywhere else as Ganinon's companion. I'm actually unsure how it would work if he had his brother as a companion, simply because I've never seen anyone actually have another person as a familiar. It is possible I think, I just have no experience with it.
Logged
Not all who wander are lost. - J.R.R. Tolkien
Ganinon
Smithing Warrior
Approved Character
Offline
Posts: 366
Dwarf, Mitharim
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #40 on:
July 06, 2007, 12:06:37 PM »
you can control NPCs to a certain extent like soemone coming with you.like a wife or brother.and the reason you didnt see it before is because i just put i in
«
Last Edit: July 11, 2007, 11:05:12 AM by Ganinon
»
Logged
Vesk Lyricahl
Woeful Rover
Approved Character
Offline
Gender:
Posts: 1454
Human, Eyelian
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #41 on:
July 06, 2007, 12:10:50 PM »
I honestly don't know the policy for that these days. Once upon a time, you had to have a CD for each character to have such a pairing. But things have changed I guess, so just wait for a mod to comment on that. I'm so outdated.
Logged
Not all who wander are lost. - J.R.R. Tolkien
Thorgas Ironforge
Ironforge Pyromancer
Offline
Gender:
Posts: 1540
Dwarf, Mitharim
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #42 on:
July 06, 2007, 07:19:47 PM »
Hello, Vesk and Ganinon.
It is possible to have people to accompany you as an NPC, not as a familiar.
I've seen a character with a dozen men at arms and a few maids accompany her on her journey.
Have a nice day.
«
Last Edit: July 07, 2007, 10:50:53 AM by Thorgas Ironforge
»
Logged
A weak mind is a deadly foe.
Thorgas Ironforge
Buri
Thorgas' theme song
Ganinon
Smithing Warrior
Approved Character
Offline
Posts: 366
Dwarf, Mitharim
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #43 on:
July 11, 2007, 11:05:58 AM »
bump
Logged
lukecash
Guest
Re: Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
«
Reply #44 on:
July 11, 2007, 11:11:55 AM »
I have read through the personality and a few other sections on the cd, and i have no complaints. But i will state to help the writing of it that it seem pretty gruff on the personality, and there are too many periods which take away the natural flow that writing must have to be a good read for people.
Logged
Pages:
1
2
[
3
]
4
Go Up
Adventures of Caelereth
 
Forum
 
Archives
 
Approved Characters Archive II
 
Ganinon/Mitharim Clan/Smith
Jump to:
Please select a destination:
-----------------------------
Help Boards
-----------------------------
=> RPG Guide
=> Roleplaying Tutorial
=> General Questions and Answers
=> Administrative Questions and Announcements
-----------------------------
Character and Story Creation
-----------------------------
=> Character Descriptions
=> Roleplay Questions and Story Creation
-----------------------------
Main Out Of Character Area
-----------------------------
=> Player Lounge
=> General Out of Character Discussions
===> 2012 Santharian Awards
=> Santharian Association of Artisans
-----------------------------
Active Stories
-----------------------------
=> Home Sweet Home
===> Home Forums
=====> Urimpaar, Family Estate of the Shialt-eck-Gorrins
=====> Foraste's House
=====> Ohénmár's Treehouse
=====> Diti Cloths and Keepsakes
=====> Scriabin's Manor of Music
=====> The last song of High Queen Mseríá (Azalahn's Inn)
=====> The Manticore's Herbarium
=====> Three Arcs Keep (The Mallister's Manse)
=====> Deklitch's Black Butterfly Rover Camp
=====> Deklitch's Home Among the Arthyrón
=====> The Regal Rusik
===> Home Creation Forum
=> The Thirsty Herald
=> One on One
=> SW IV- God, Wars and Heroes
===> SW IV: The Fourth Sarvonian War
=> Destiny
-----------------------------
Archived Spotlight
-----------------------------
=> The Dead Gods Book
-----------------------------
Create the Moment
-----------------------------
=> Create the Moment
-----------------------------
Archives
-----------------------------
=> Approved Characters Archive
===> Approved Characters 2002
===> Approved Characters 2003
===> Approved Characters 2004
===> Approved Characters 2005
===> Approved Characters 2006
===> Approved Characters 2007
===> Approved Characters 2008
===> Approved Characters 2009
===> Approved Characters 2010
===> Approved Characters 2011
===> Approved Characters 2012
===> Approved Characters 2013
===> Approved Characters 2014
===> Approved Characters 2015
=> Approved Characters Archive II
===> 2005 Character Archives
=> RPG Story Archive
===> The Palace
===> Frozen Darkness
===> The City of Voldar
===> Twilight
===> Dawn of War
===> Shadows at Midnight
===> The Tale of Nalaere
===> Entrapped Elements
===> The Journey
===> In The Eyes of Her Son
===> The World Beyond
===> Search for the Fire Gem
===> War of the Fallen
===> Redemption
===> Awaking in Helente
===> Old RPG Stories Archive
===> Nyermersys Archive
=====> Nyermersys, the City of Death
===> Bardavos Archive
===> Death's Invitation
===> The Ulvur's Cry
===> In Search of a Druid
===> The Kann Kemruhnt
===> Thalambath's Heart
===> Jovloff's Gold
===> Sins of the Ancestor
===> An Adventure in Black
===> Ghosts of Strata
===> Bardavos, the City of Artists
=> Tavern Archives
===> The Fifty-Five Word Challenge
=====> Fifty-Five Challenge Winners
===> The Sarvonian Chronicle
Search
Advanced search
Recent Posts
New here!!
by
abigailjordan
[February 10, 2022, 09:09:05 PM]
Magic question.
by
abigailjordan
[February 10, 2022, 09:07:54 PM]
Who are all here and wish to role play with me?
by
Carilinaa
[July 30, 2021, 06:03:43 PM]
Little Red Riding Hood
by
Carilinaa
[July 30, 2021, 06:03:25 PM]
The Dragon's Quest
by
Carilinaa
[July 30, 2021, 06:01:01 PM]
A rabbit hole like no other.
by
Mallorix Volinkov
[February 12, 2021, 07:16:33 AM]
Enian Piper / Caltharian / Flautist
by
JarvisDashiell
[December 13, 2020, 12:16:51 AM]
I am the new member
by
JarvisDashiell
[December 13, 2020, 12:16:21 AM]
What are you listening to?
by
Jillvalen
[October 05, 2020, 02:58:40 PM]
There are ghostwriters behind the success of many famous books,
by
karla12
[March 19, 2020, 03:47:44 AM]
Stats
Members
Total Members: 2849
Latest:
abigailjordan
Stats
Total Posts: 214569
Total Topics: 8052
Online Today: 82
Online Ever: 216
(November 30, 2006, 09:08:03 AM)
Users Online
Users: 0
Guests: 27
Total: 27