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Thorgas Ironforge
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« Reply #30 on: July 01, 2007, 08:27:49 PM »

The great Pyromancer hath sent you his reply. LOL
Don't worry, your reason for leave the caverns is valid enough. I was being a bit nitpicky about the supplies there, probably due to being stressed out from taking care of 7 newborn puppies. *pats both dogs on the head* Good girl and boy. Pet
I think medicine would be a good idea, since they aren't easy to find.
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« Reply #31 on: July 02, 2007, 03:17:54 AM »

PUPPY!!look and see if they looka t computer when you open this lolthey might hear me lol
well i put in medecine idea anything else i left out?
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« Reply #32 on: July 02, 2007, 09:51:51 PM »

Just minor spelling errors.
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« Reply #33 on: July 03, 2007, 12:24:36 AM »

yea couldnt spell check last night had to get off right after i posted ill do that now
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« Reply #34 on: July 03, 2007, 07:04:02 AM »

hmm im deciding weather or not to have Hejek come along.I might then make a CD for him and have him go a different way somewhere in roleplaying.like to searhc for something else or such things as that.what do you guys think?
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« Reply #35 on: July 05, 2007, 12:02:48 AM »

i am not a mod or anything, just saying, i think that your brother might be a good companion so if you wanted, you could, but if so, give a reason as to why he is with you. Is he helping you search for your wife, or something else?
By all means dont take my advice if you dont want to, i am just throwing out suggestions. Trust me
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« Reply #36 on: July 05, 2007, 06:32:28 AM »

i was thinking he would help search fro Lumen but then in one of the cities he sees something or hears something to make him go off in search of something else.
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« Reply #37 on: July 06, 2007, 07:45:26 AM »

You've done a great job accounting for all of my comments. So I only have one final comment to make. Since the search for his wife is the reason Ganinon left his tribe, I would like to see some mention of how he feels about her in the personality section. Maybe he longs for her, is angry at her for abandoning him, or anything else your imagination can create.
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« Reply #38 on: July 06, 2007, 11:47:43 AM »

there you go Vesk.Anything else or do you think my CD is good.lol i know im not done.Just would like to have someones approval even if its not a mods  grin
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« Reply #39 on: July 06, 2007, 12:01:33 PM »

Your CD does seem fine to me, but there is one thing I don't think I noticed before. In the history you mention that his brother left with him, yet the brother isn't mentioned anywhere else as Ganinon's companion. I'm actually unsure how it would work if he had his brother as a companion, simply because I've never seen anyone actually have another person as a familiar. It is possible I think, I just have no experience with it.
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« Reply #40 on: July 06, 2007, 12:06:37 PM »

you can control NPCs to a certain extent like soemone coming with you.like a wife or brother.and the reason you didnt see it before is because i just put i in 
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« Reply #41 on: July 06, 2007, 12:10:50 PM »

I honestly don't know the policy for that these days. Once upon a time, you had to have a CD for each character to have such a pairing. But things have changed I guess, so just wait for a mod to comment on that. I'm so outdated. Huh?
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« Reply #42 on: July 06, 2007, 07:19:47 PM »

Hello, Vesk and Ganinon.
It is possible to have people to accompany you as an NPC, not as a familiar. :)
I've seen a character with a dozen men at arms and a few maids accompany her on her journey.
Have a nice day.
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« Reply #43 on: July 11, 2007, 11:05:58 AM »

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« Reply #44 on: July 11, 2007, 11:11:55 AM »

I have read through the personality and a few other sections on the cd, and i have no complaints. But i will state to help the writing of it that it seem pretty gruff on the personality, and there are too many periods which take away the natural flow that writing must have to be a good read for people.
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