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« Reply #45 on: July 11, 2007, 11:17:28 AM »

I have fixed that thank you for pointing it out. Any other comments?
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« Reply #46 on: July 11, 2007, 10:31:55 PM »

I would suggest doing a grammar and spelling check on the entire thing. For the most part, your sentences just don't have spaces between them. But that's minor and easily fixed, so you have your first approval. :)
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« Reply #47 on: July 11, 2007, 10:46:19 PM »

Congratulations, an approval! grin
One more to go. I DO have the knack for recognizing a good CD!  :)
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« Reply #48 on: July 12, 2007, 02:22:48 AM »

THx so much ill get to work on spacing and then ill read thorugh for grammer.Thx again grin
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« Reply #49 on: July 12, 2007, 02:43:08 AM »

ok went through and spaced. Made some changes to make it sound better and for grammer. If you see anything i missed please point it out. thank you.
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« Reply #50 on: July 13, 2007, 08:59:50 AM »

Ha! you spell grammar wrong, although saying this was pointless, it was worth it to say that to someone who said they just corrected the spelling. I'm just evil, aren't I? evil devilish guilty devilish
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« Reply #51 on: July 13, 2007, 11:20:16 AM »

And the point of that comment was? Avash, you said it yourself, it was pointless, and I concur. If you have nothing to say about the CD itself, then please don't post.
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« Reply #52 on: July 15, 2007, 04:48:17 AM »

is grammar even in my CD? i don't remember saying grammar in the CD a all.
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« Reply #53 on: July 15, 2007, 09:56:07 AM »

I think your ready for a second approval and If I could give it to you I would. Good luck.
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« Reply #54 on: July 15, 2007, 10:13:30 AM »

Don't worry; I've already notified the mods about your CD, as well as two others who needs to have a second approval.

Have a nice day.
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« Reply #55 on: July 15, 2007, 12:43:26 PM »

its heaps good  :Dhttp://[tt][/tt]
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« Reply #56 on: July 15, 2007, 01:23:40 PM »

Please do not post uneccessary things in a person's CD. They only clutter the CDs.

Have a nice day.
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« Reply #57 on: July 18, 2007, 10:18:33 AM »

You are missing a few commas here and there. But overall, it looks good.

I am going to go ahead and give you your title, but please remove the color in your CD before it is moved. Thank You.
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« Reply #58 on: July 18, 2007, 11:01:20 AM »

Thanks so much. Ill go remove the colors now.Thanks again.

Do i move my CD to the archives or does a admin or mod?jw
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