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Author Topic: Mithiras Wolfe, Centoraurian Child  (Read 6949 times)
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Simonne Miller
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« Reply #15 on: July 02, 2007, 06:04:48 PM »

Ow, I'm sorry Thorgas. I was a little too quick in deleting the argument in the thread, and I accidentally deleted the one about listing hair, eye, weight and height. I do apologise.

Ras: all right, I think it's largely uncluttered, wouldn't you say? Anything else I can do?
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« Reply #16 on: July 03, 2007, 12:41:25 AM »

Thank you Simmonne. grin I can't think of anything else you can do for me. Unless of course you know how to transform yourself into Mina or Kar and give the second approval. Pet
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« Reply #17 on: July 05, 2007, 06:51:25 AM »

Hello Ras, that is really a nice CD! I just wonder how a small boy like you can be so elaborate! ;)

I wonder how you survived after you had left the horse fair. From what do you actually live?
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« Reply #18 on: July 06, 2007, 06:39:58 AM »

I en't that elabotate. I jus know a word or two. :P

But that is a very good question. To be honest, I would prefer to role play that aspect of his history out rather than just add another paragraph to the history. At the point that the history ends now, Ras hasn't yet faced the consequences of his rash actions, and I would like to play out his reaction to those. He's not going to be happy... ;)
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« Reply #19 on: July 07, 2007, 02:16:19 PM »

This does look pretty good.  Here's your second approval. 
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« Reply #20 on: July 08, 2007, 01:19:14 AM »

Thanks Mina! Pet

I guess there's no need to test the title anymore, but it looks lovely all the same.
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« Reply #21 on: December 07, 2012, 01:54:11 AM »

Bringing this up as requested :)
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« Reply #22 on: December 07, 2012, 06:06:44 AM »

And I've made my edits.

I admittedly did more than change one word. Sentences were rewritten here and there without changing their underlying meaning. I did make one change to the CD that's worth noting. The word "frail" to describe Ras felt like too strong of a word. So, Ras has been tweaked to still be skinny and weak but without using "frail" to describe him.
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« Reply #23 on: December 07, 2012, 07:06:05 AM »

And down we go again :)
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