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Author Topic: Petros Greenvale/ Aellenrhim/ Musician-Wind Mage  (Read 15235 times)
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Zack Ramsey
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« Reply #15 on: July 15, 2007, 09:52:12 AM »

I was going to go through your CD but my number one rule is if you want comments, respond to, in some fashion, comments already made on your CD. You don’t HAVE  to change your CD, though considering they are Mods who commented on your CD it would be very smart, but at least state why you don’t make the changes.
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« Reply #16 on: July 16, 2007, 03:10:22 AM »

I do make all the changes!!
i spent 3 hours last night going through all the comments that Mr.lychrial put in and i changed all of them. and dont see why you keep going on about the tower of life magic thing because i changed that ok!
im not just being ignorant you know, i do make an effort!!! :(
(ive just not got the hang of it yet!! grin)
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« Reply #17 on: July 16, 2007, 06:09:30 AM »

Im really sorry if i have caused anyone any trouble or have offended anyone in anyway cry. i have decide to make a fresh start to my C.D and will make sure i will change anything that anybody comments on. i will make sure i research more thoroughly on the topics of my C.D. I know first impressions are every thing and i hope that i can have a fresh start!!

sorry for my naievity!!!!! :)
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« Reply #18 on: July 16, 2007, 08:37:14 AM »

This is the first Character description thing ive read so far, and its really good. I like the way you write so intelligently!!!

Youve filed me with inspiration!!!! :)

Artemis

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Tifara Heike
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« Reply #19 on: July 16, 2007, 05:19:37 PM »

Hi Petros!! Just some comments here, not a URI.

1. Lots of spelling mistakes, so take note!! Use the spell check. :D

2. Please spell Petros with a capital P. There are lots of "Petros" in your CD without a capital P.

3. Please check through your CD for punctuation mistakes. :D

4. Don't colour more than half of your CD dark green!! My eyes hurt!! I'm myopic, sadly. :(

5. Brownie parents? Are you a brownie or an elf? :/

6. Explain why you have ginger-coloured hair as it is a rarity for Aellenrhims. :D

7. Personality
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He will always go out of his way to help someone and is often found giving extra help to his fellow students at the school of tunes in Bardavos, who are struggling with the compicated Santharian musical notation.

8. Personality
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Because of his attractive exterior (exterior?? I should think "appearance" would be better. ;)) he receives quite a lot of attention from the ladies (and some of the gentlemen as[space here]well!!) but because he is (relatively) innocent and timid he just doesn’t know how to act in those kind of situations.

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Well, that's about all. Good luck on your CD!!  grin

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« Reply #20 on: July 17, 2007, 06:50:04 AM »

 Sorry,
i find this really confusing... Tifara tells me that i should mention my ginger hair because it is a rarity for Aellenrhim elves but Vesk says that i shouldnt... what should i take into account? Undecided
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« Reply #21 on: July 17, 2007, 08:02:07 AM »

Red hair was rare for the Aellenrhim elves, before the influx of elves from other tribes. Nowadays though, nearly any feature can be seen in the tribe due to their varied heritage. So its incorrect for Petros to say ginger hair is rare among the Aellenrhim, and no explanation is necessary.
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« Reply #22 on: July 18, 2007, 02:43:10 AM »

Cool...thanks!!!!! grin
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« Reply #23 on: July 18, 2007, 10:16:42 AM »

Petros, are you still editing this CD? If so, you should switch your icon to that of the pencil.
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« Reply #24 on: July 21, 2007, 07:54:24 PM »

sorry to be a pain but....emm,no ones commmented on my C.D for a while, and i would really like to get it finished so i can start r.ping. :D
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« Reply #25 on: July 22, 2007, 10:37:51 AM »

Just one thing before I check your CD. 34 is very young for an elf. They live up to hundreds of years and mature very slowly. I've seen CD's of elves with life spans of up to 400 years.
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« Reply #26 on: July 22, 2007, 10:41:56 AM »

I don't think the age is that bad he would look like and have the knoloedge and training of a 17 year old human. Unless he want a charecter with a lot of skill, or something like that.
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« Reply #27 on: July 22, 2007, 10:50:30 AM »

I don't know what is difficult to understand from the words "they mature very slowly".

That means they grow, develop, learn, and whatever you want to add here in a slow rate. A 34 year old elf would be considered but a child in an elven society.
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« Reply #28 on: July 22, 2007, 11:18:35 AM »

I dug up this articles about weavers (stay with me im going somewhere with this  ;))
see the weaver only accept new human children once they are ten but ...elves when they are 40 sooo, if a 40 year old elf is the same as a 10 year old human then would 47 be a fair compromise? Huh?
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« Reply #29 on: July 22, 2007, 11:22:49 AM »

Sorry if I am wrong about the ages, you can blame the "Elven Aging Calculator" that I used.
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I must sin on and love him more than ever. It is a crime worth going to hell for."


This is quoted from Lady Emma Hamilton in a letter she wrote to Lord Horatio Nelson, her lover, her best friend and the soon to be father of their child.
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