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Author Topic: Petros Greenvale/ Aellenrhim/ Musician-Wind Mage  (Read 15219 times)
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Vesk Lyricahl
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« Reply #30 on: July 22, 2007, 11:34:39 AM »

A thirty four year old elf is perfectly fine. We have eight year old humans, so why not youngsters of the elven race? But Thorgas is right in that the CD should reflect the age of the character, particularly in the skills he possesses. From what I remember of the chart about levels in regards to age, seventeen would be old enough for a human to reach level two, so its fine for the elf equivalent of a seventeen year old human to reach it as well. But I do question the elf's skill in music, considering that an elf would probably only consider himself highly skilled after practicing for centuries.
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« Reply #31 on: July 22, 2007, 01:49:25 PM »

The Weaver entry probably isn't a very good reference in this case.  I think the Elven aging stuff was done much later. 
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Petros Greenvale
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« Reply #32 on: July 22, 2007, 09:15:12 PM »

Well about the music thing it really just depends on how you adapt to your instrument and how much you practice. For instance i achieved Grade 8 (highest grade) in clarinet in about 4 years...but they were 4 years of practice and working hard basically. so if i could do it in 4 im sure an elf could do it in 22 ( If he put in alot of effort that is!!). :D
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Petros Greenvale
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« Reply #33 on: July 25, 2007, 10:04:54 PM »

*sighs* "ill never be approved at this rate!!" *sits down and grabs himself a bottle of ale, and begins to sing out of tune"...Crazy,Crazy for feellin so lonely...Crazy,Crazy for feelin so blue!!
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« Reply #34 on: July 25, 2007, 10:45:01 PM »

When you said that he is a wind mage, I assumed that he really is one. I still find parts of your history about life magic, life magi and such. Please look at everything that we checked on that needs to be edited, or explain why you haven't do so.
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Petros Greenvale
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« Reply #35 on: July 25, 2007, 11:10:30 PM »

Sorry, i dont see a part where it says that he is a life mage, His brownie father was one though. :)
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« Reply #36 on: July 25, 2007, 11:21:05 PM »

Hello. This is Thorgas in his Pig costume, and I found this in your history.

Petros did not have a very happy childhood and was described by his teacher as being:"too reserved and solemn for his own good". One day petros's father was watching him from a window,being harassed by some other children he walked home from school one day. He noticed that the more agitated and sad Petros felt a nearby flower bed would wilt more and more. Because of his expertise on the matter he knew that Petros had natural ability with life magic and it would be a crime to let it go to waste. So the next day His father withdrew him from school (he had already outranked all his peers academically by now anyway), and started to train him in the way of life magic.

I have not read the entire CD because I feel that you are still not finished. I will check it after you have edited them.
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« Reply #37 on: July 26, 2007, 02:07:07 AM »

It would be better if only the mother was a redbark, and the life mage.  I'm not sure if male redbark exist; certain entries suggest that they don't. 
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Kalína Dalá'isyrás
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« Reply #38 on: July 26, 2007, 08:54:21 AM »

Capitalization is your friend.  fish
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« Reply #39 on: July 26, 2007, 09:39:26 AM »

Will edit tomorrow!! grin

Kalina i dont get it.. (im a bit simple you see! ;)) Capitalization as in Capital systems, or the Global Philosophy of economical strength?
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« Reply #40 on: July 26, 2007, 11:41:17 PM »

Grammatically. Beginning each sentence with the proper case of a letter.

"I will meet you at 6" instead of "i will meet you at 6"

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« Reply #41 on: July 28, 2007, 11:23:37 PM »

The capitalization is looking cleaner! Keep it up!  Pet
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Petros Greenvale
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« Reply #42 on: August 02, 2007, 06:50:36 AM »

Right sorry everyone, im really going to get my finger out on this and hopefully get it finished some time soon!! fish
ive just been a bit busy in R.L and the dev board but im going to butcher my C.D until it fis in with the comments you made...remember the more the merrier*hint,hint!* ;)
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« Reply #43 on: August 04, 2007, 01:44:23 AM »

Please make the few changes which were suggested by Thorgas, Mina, and Myself, and you should have your first approval.
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« Reply #44 on: August 05, 2007, 11:20:37 PM »

Cool.....Voila!! i have made the changes that Mina,Thorgas and your goodself have commented about!! and i brushed up on the grammar a wee bit too! heart grin
i was wondering...is it a wee bit too long? Huh?
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