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« on: July 26, 2007, 06:30:22 PM »



Name: Rainier
Gender: Male
Age: 131
Race: Elf
Tribe: Tiraelhon/Eophyrhim
Occupation: Ranger
Title: Shadow Ranger

Height: 1.9 peds
Weight: 1 pygge,3 Hebs, 1 Ods, 5 Mut
Hair color: White
Eye color: Deep Blue

Overview: Orphaned at birth, Rainier knows nothing of his family except what was told to him by his surrogate father, the ranger formally known as Illicted. He was told his father was an Eophyrhim elf that his mother had met him while on their travels together. He has been told of his mothers beauty and kindness for which he takes after.

Appearance: Being darker than most, he takes after his Tiraelhon heritage in most aspects of his appearance. When it comes to his skin color, he is a very dark brown from being in the sun all the time. Iif he isn't in the sun a lot, he becomes pale, taking after his Eophyrhim heritage. When he does finally get back into the sun, it takes him awhile to darken up again. He has long, free flowing, white hair and all of these aspects are tied together by his deep blue eyes.

                   Standing true at 1.9 peds and weighing 1 pygge, 3 hebs, 1 0ds, and 5 mut, he is well built and very toned. His face is slender, giving him an elegant look. Taking after the Tiraelhon, his ears are pointed on both the top and the bottom, but the bottom is not that long. He has only his left ear pierced, but it is pierced all the way around. On his chest he has a pair of antlers tattooed on as a tribute to his chosen deity, Arvins. Upon his abdomen he has four diagonal scars. Even though he is 131 years old, he looks that of a 23 year old human and has the knowledge and training of a 26 year old human.

                    If you were to ever see him he is always dressed in leather armor making it easy for him to move around since his chosen weapon is the night claw blades which was given to him by Illicted who received them as payment for a job he had done. He also carries around a long bow and hidden away from sight four straight zarathian daggers. He is always seen with his kor' och fey mologh and on some occasions his pet myrddin falcon which he uses to search surrounding areas.

Personality: Rainier is a very quiet person but very friendly. He loves nature and everything that comes with it but is not afraid to fight for what he feels is right and or just. He is a very trusting person and tries to befriend any and all that will talk to him which isn't very many due to the fact that he closely resembles a dark elf. When it comes to loyalty his first and foremost goes to Arvins after that it goes to his friends and he counts his horse and falcon as his friends for they are his main family since he is a ranger. When he does have other friends that wish to travel with him he takes their well being into his own hands believing it is his job to make sure that they are taken care of and safe even if they are well accomplished fighters. He believes that his friends lives are more important than his.

                             When it comes to his family which consist mainly of his familiars he treats them better than himself.  Whenever there is danger around he ask them if they wish to continue on and takes their reactions as their answer. Their reactions are either both of them acting a little wild for a second to show that they are saying no or staying calm to show they say yes, and if they say no he will put them into a safe place and go on ahead by himself so that he can make it a safe path for them.  No matter how much food there is he always makes sure that they get fed first and have as much as they want even if it is all of the food.  He tries his hardest to keep their appearance in pristine condition always wanting them to look beautiful, he does this by washing them at least once a week.

Strengths and Weaknesses:

Strengths:
          Very talented with his Night Claw Blade (he was trained for 37 years almost every day by Illicted until he died)
          Good at tracking during both day and night,thanks to his Eophyrhim heritage and he is able to spot small details that most miss and on occasion he uses his myrddn falcon to help him.
          Excellent at understanding and befriending animals because he knows to treat them all with respect and since he does this he is respected by the animals.

Weaknesses:
          Can be to trusting since it is hard for him to make friends he tries hard to be accepted.
          Overly cautious of his friends safety so he puts himself in harms way a lot.
          Not able to communicate well because it is hard for him to approach people
          He is afraid of large civilizations since he feels there is a high possibility that he might be killed for his dark elf appearance, due to this fear he can become very ill because of undernourishment, but when he does enter a city its at the dead of night so that he has a better chance of not being recognized.

History: Rainier's mother was of Tiraelhon descent and was out on a fishing and salt gathering expedition on the Theranian Sea with her family when they were caught in a storm and taken out to the Burning Sea. When she awoke she found herself on a merchant vessel headed towards the province of Enthronia, in Santharia.
               
                   Upon arriving in Enthronia she met a human ranger by the name of Illicted who offered to help her in any way that he could due to the fact that he was entranced by her beauty. She graciously accepted and was then taken along for all of Illicted's travels. During their travels Illicted was taken by the Paelelon forest home of the Eophyrhim Dark Elves. He was in as good a standing as you could be with the dark elves since he had once bought one of their hunting hounds. He had formed a rare but life lasting friendship with the Eophyrhim elf he bought the hound from. He was therefore invited by this friend to stay for the night but only the night since outsiders weren't welcomed by the Eophyrhim.

                 This is where Rainier's mother met his father. He was also like Illicted entranced by her beauty for he had never met an elf from Aeruillin in his life nor had anyone else of his race. It was on this one night that in a moment of passion they both set upon each other. Not knowing of the pregnancy Illicted and Rainier's mother left the forest heading north for the Province of Nermeran. Days after entering Nermeran his mother gave birth to Rainier and died. Illicted knowing who the father was decided that it was best that he took care of Rainier instead of giving him to the Eophyrim thinking that they would not accept him since he was born to an outsider.

                 Rainier than grew up traveling all over of Santharia with Illicted learning the ways of the ranger. He was first and foremost taught how to use a long bow by Illicted. He was than taught from the age of 13 in the use of Illicted's Night Claw Blades in which he focused most of his attention rather than on the long bow in which he is sufficient with but not an expert.

                During his travels he was involved in many quarrels with rogues and bandits due to the fact that these were the jobs that him and Illicted would take on to earn their money. He has also survived many encounters with wild animals but one horrific account with a bear left him with four diagonal scars on his abdomen. After Illicted died while sleeping at the age of 87 Rainier had been told that when Illicted did die that he was to bury him only in his armor and that he was to take the Night Claw Blades as his own.

               Rainier then kept traveling and doing various jobs hunting down thieves and rogues for money. He than came upon the City of Jernais in the Vardynn Province where he met Arnel. Arnel was the daughter of a fairly wealthy merchant. She was at the age of 24 and Rainier was that of 100. She was not afraid of his appearance which instantly attracted him to her. He than Stayed in Jernais for around 22 years working with Arnels father more or so as a guard to protect his shop from thieves. Her father specialized in the selling of foreign creatures and weapons which brought him a steady and reasonably well income.

              Rainier seeing no need to spend his money that he was paid on anything other than food since he was permitted to stay with Arnel and her father saved his money. After turning 122 Rainier felt that he had overstayed his welcome. He than said his farewell but to his surprise Arnel came with him. Before he left he realized he needed to use a fair amount of his money for he had accumulated far to much to be taken with him on his travels so he decided to buy a Kor' och fey Mologh and a Myrddin Falcon. As a gift from Arnels father for protecting his shop all those years and added security for his daughter Rainier was given 4 straight Zarathian Daggers.

               After leaving Jernais, Rainier and Arnel headed north into Nermeran. Both of them being in love for some time now took this opportunity to get closer. On their journey together they both found out each others deepest secrets. Rainier confessed to her that for all the years that she has known him he has never seemed like an emotional person because he felt that showing emotions made him seem week.  He than told her of all the pain that he felt since losing Illicted, how hadn't wanted to live anymore but was to afraid to take his own life. She than found out that on that eventful day they met she changed his life forever, she had given him another person to love. This story sounded all to familiar to her for she had been going through the same thing after losing her mother. All of this brought them even closer.  After hearing all of this Arnel felt that she was finally able to tell Rainier that she loved him, and no much to her surprise he confessed his love for her.  From than on out they took every opportunity they had to show their love in one way or another. One day however they traveled to far in Nermeran and wound up in the Tandala Highlands. That night Rainier went out on a scouting expedition to find food and see where they were, while he was gone Arnel was attacked and killed by a group of Gob-ocs.  Rainier arrived to late to even injure one of them but soon enough to be given three of Arnell's earing's, and her mother's ring.  On her death bed she told him again that she loved him and that she wouldn't trade anything to take back her death and their adventures.  

Weapons: A pair of Night Claw Blades which he was trained with by Illicted and is his primary weapon and is the one he is most skilled at using, a Long bow which he was trained with but never mastered it so he is only moderately good with it, and his 4 Zarathian daggers that are hidden on the inside of his boots, and he has no formal training in them. 

Familiars: A Kor' och fey Mologh named Night breeze due to the fact that it is all black except for a white blotch on its forehead, and a Myrddin Falcon named Stargaze,it was meant to be sold to a wealthier citizen of Jernais as a show bird and a hunting bird so it had already been trained to listen to commands.

Belongings: His leather armor, his 12 earring's 3 of which he got from Arnel, Arnel's mothers silver ring, his Night Claw Blade's, long bow, and four Zarathian daggers. Finally Night breeze his Kor' och fey Mologh and Stargaze his Myrddin Falcon.
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« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2007, 03:47:01 AM »

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Name: Rainier
Gender: Male
Age: 131
Race: Elf
Tribe: Tiraelhon/Eophyrhim You'll have to explain this crossing in the history section, since his parent tribes hail from two different continents.
Occupation: Ranger
Title: Night Ranger

Height: 1.9 peds
Weight: One pygge
Hair color: White
Eye color: Deep Blue/Purple

Overview: Orphaned at birth Rainier knows nothing of his family except that which was told to him by his surrogate father, the ranger formally known as Illicted. Keep in mind that while your character may not know anything of his family, as the author you do. He was told that his father was an Eophyrhim elf that had met his mother while on a rare visit to the Tiraelhon's.  This won't work. First, Eophyrhim elves rarely leave their forest. Second, that would mean traveling to a different continent, no easy feat. Both of his parent tribes rarely leave their home territories, and they live on separate continents, so I doubt you'll be able to pull off this cross. Even though his mother was Tiraelhon she felt an outcast so she left and met up and than traveled with Illicted until she died giving birth to Rainier. A Tiraelhon elf that leaves the Sands of Maechalan is a rarity, and you'll have to explain why she was an outcast in the history section. He was than raised by Illicted in the ways of a ranger.

Appearance: Looking more like a shadow he has pitch black skin taking after his Eophyrhim heritage Eophyrhim elves have pale skin, so this doesn't work. but as he is mixed when it comes to his hair he takes after his Tiraelhon heritage with white hair, and to bring all of this together he has deep penetrating blue purplish eyes.

                   Standing true at 1.9 peds and weighing 1 pygge he is well built and very toned. It seems strange to call him well built with that weight. He would be more gaunt than anything else. Elves are supposed to be slender, not anorexic. I would suggest adding a little weight.  His face is very slender giving him and elegant look. Taking after the Tiraelhon in him his ears are pointed on both the top and the bottom but the bottom is not that long. He has only his left ear pierced but it is pierced all the way around. On his chest he has a pair of antlers tattoed on as a tribute to his chosen dietie Arvins. Even though he is 131 years old he looks that of a 23 year old human and has the knowledge and training of a 26 year old human.

                    If you were to ever see him he is always dressed in leather armor making it easy for him to move around since his chosen weapon is the Night Claw Blades which he was givien by Illicted who recieved them as payment for a job he had done. He also carries around a long bow and hidden away from sight 4 straight Zarathian Daggers. He is always seen with his Kor' och fey Mologh and on some occasions his pet Myrddin Falcon which he uses to search surrounding areas. I hope your history describes how he obtained these two familiars.

Personality: Rainier is a very quiet person but very friendly. He loves nature and everything that comes with it but is not afraid to fight for what he feels is right and or just. He is a very trusting person and try's to befriend any and all that will talk to him wich isnt very many due to the fact that he closely resembles a dark elf. When it comes to loyalty his first and foremost goes to Arvins after that it goes to his friends and he counts his horse and falcon as his friends for they are his main family since he is a ranger. When he does have other friends that whish to travel with him he takes their well being into his own hands believing it is his job to make sure that they are taken care of and safe even if they are well accomplished fighters. He believes that his friends lifes are more important than his.

Strenghts and Weaknesses:

Strengths:
          Very talented with his Night Claw Blade
          An excelent marksman with both his long bow and Zarathian Daggers First, his skill with the longbow and with the daggers are two separate strengths. Second, he is far too young to be so skilled with all three weapons. At his age, young for an elf, he'll be lucky to be skilled with only one weapon. If you want to keep him skilled with all three, you'll have to age him quite a bit.
          Good at tracking
          Excelent at understanding and befrending animals

Weaknesses:
          Can be to trusting since it is hard for him to make friends he try's hard to be accepted.
          Overly cautious of his friends safety so he puts himself in harms way alot.
           Not able to communicate well
          Knows no magic Not knowing magic is not a weakness as the average person does not possess any knowledge of magic. Also, as your strengths and weaknesses stand now, your character is too strong. I would suggest either toning down those weapon skills or adding another weakness or two.

History: Rainier was orphaned as a young child due to the fact that his mother died giving birth to him. He knows absoulutely nothing of his father other than the fact that he was an Eophyrim elf. Again, as the author you know your character's past and the past of his parents. This explanation does not suffice for this crossing, as I mentioned in greater detail earlier on. I really would suggest choosing two parent tribes that hail from the same continent. He was raised by a ranger by the name of Illicted. With Illicted as his father he was taught the ways of the ranger. He has been through many battles with many races and with many animals but only when the need arises for it. There have not been any wars in centuries, so there are no battles for either your character or his adopted father to experience. Think skirmishes instead. Also, it doesn't really make sense to say he's been in battles with animals, they don't wage wars, so it would make more sense to say that he's survived encounters with them. Or something to that effect. His child hood was a hard one since he didnt have a home or a mother. He was often shunned by villagers due to the nature of his skin color which made him resemble a dark elf, he grew to accept this but always tried to befirend any and all that were willing to approch him and he was very good at it to since he is a very caring person. He has loved only one person in his lifetime and it was a human girl by the name of Arnel. She traveled with him after the death of Illicted. As time came though he realised that she would be forever lost to him since she couldnt come close to living as long as he could but that meant nothing to him for he cherished every moment he had with her. She met a tragic end howerver sooner than he would have liked as she was killed an orc by their travels. I would like to see a lot more detail in the history. It's incredibly short for someone that has lived for over a century. Also, in the history you should describe what training he received. Its not enough to say that he was trained as a ranger, that in and of itself is too vague. In particular I would like to see some mention of his training with his various weapons. Also, I don't know which continent his history is taking place on, you never say. I assume Aeruillin since his mother likely gave birth to him there. If that is the case, then you'll need to describe in the history how he came to Santharia, since all of the stories take place there.

Weapons: A pair of Night Claw Blades, a long bow, and 4 Zarathian Daggers

Familiars: A Kor' och fey Mologh, and a Myrddin Falcon I want you to describe how he obtained both of these in the history. First, the Mologh is usually found in Northern Sarvonia, though they may be purchased in Santharia as of late. A trained Myrrdin Falcon could also be bought in Santharia. Or he could raise and tame a wild one, but it would take years and is no easy feat.
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« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2007, 04:40:49 AM »

Thank you for the help ill make those changes as soon as i can and any more criticism's are greatly appreciated.

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« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2007, 10:07:53 AM »

I have added on the things that i thought you would like to see and i have completely revamped my history section its all in red.

Hopefully you like it but any critisims would be reall helpfull and greatly appreciated.
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« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2007, 01:43:23 PM »

Could you separate your history into paragraphs? I'm having a hard time reading it.
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« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2007, 01:45:39 PM »

sorry about that i was a little worried about that ill do that reall fast.
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« Reply #6 on: July 27, 2007, 11:52:58 PM »

Hello Rainier. I'm back as promised. Oh, and welcome to Santharia.
I'll be checking your CD, in the fiery color of red.


Name: Rainier
Gender: Male
Age: 131
Race: Elf
Tribe: Tiraelhon/Eophyrhim
Occupation: Ranger
Title: Night Ranger

Height: 1.9 peds
Weight: 1 pygge,3 Hebs, 1 Ods, 5 Mut
Hair color: White
Eye color: Deep Blue/Purple(Does this mean your eye color is a mixture of two different colors?)

Overview: Orphaned at birth Rainier knows nothing of his family except that which was told to him by his surrogate father, the ranger formally known as Illicted. He was told that his father was an Eophyrhim elf that his mother had met while in their travels together. He has been told of his mothers beauty and kindness for which he takes after.

Appearance: Looking more like a shadow he has pitch black skin taking after his Eophyrhim heritage but as he is mixed when it comes to his hair he takes after his Tiraelhon heritage with white hair, and to bring all of this together he has deep penetrating blue purplish eyes.

                   Standing true at 1.9 peds and weighing 1 pygge, 3 Hebs, 1 Ods, and 5 Mut he is well built and very toned. His face is very slender giving him and elegant look. Taking after the Tiraelhon in him his ears are pointed on both the top and the bottom but the bottom is not that long. He has only his left ear pierced but it is pierced all the way around. On his chest he has a pair of antlers tattoed on as a tribute to his chosen dietie()deity Arvins. Upon his abdamon(abdomen) he has 4 diagonal scars. Even though he is 131 years old he looks that of a 23 year old human and has the knowledge and training of a 26 year old human.

                    If you were to ever see him he is always dressed in leather armor making it easy for him to move around since his chosen weapon is the Night Claw Blades which he was givien by Illicted(which was given to him by Illicted) who recieved(received) them as payment for a job he had done. He also carries around a long bow and hidden away from sight 4 straight Zarathian Daggers. He is always seen with his Kor' och fey Mologh and on some occasions his pet Myrddin Falcon which he uses to search surrounding areas.

Personality: Rainier is a very quiet person but very friendly. He loves nature and everything that comes with it but is not afraid to fight for what he feels is right and/ or just. He is a very trusting person and try's(tries) to befriend any and all that will talk to him wich isnt very many due to the fact that he closely resembles a dark elf. When it comes to loyalty his first and foremost goes to Arvins after that it goes to his friends and he counts his horse and falcon as his friends for they are his main family since he is a ranger. When he does have other friends that whish(wishes) to travel with him he takes their well being into his own hands believing it is his job to make sure that they are taken care of and safe even if they are well accomplished fighters. He believes that his friends lifes(lives) are more important than his.(It is very strange for an Eophyrhim to act in a very noble way. Usually they act like that when with their friends; those who haven't earned their trusts will be received coldly.)

Strenghts and Weaknesses:

Strengths:
          Very talented with his Night Claw Blade
          Good at tracking
          Excelent at understanding and befrending animals

Weaknesses:
          Can be to trusting since it is hard for him to make friends he try's hard to be accepted.
          Overly cautious of his friends safety so he puts himself in harms way alot.
          Not able to communicate well
(We require people to explain their S&W's. Writing one sentence for each attribute does not make a cleary explanation for that particular strength or weakness. Also, you are a bit unbalanced.)
         

(I still can't understand most of your history, as most of the sentences there are poorly written. Please try rewording those which are hard to understand.)

Weapons: A pair of Night Claw Blades which he was trained in(remove 'in', put 'with') by Illicted and is his primary weapon and is the one he is most skilled at using, a Long bow which he was trained in(remove 'in', put 'with') but never mastered it so he is only moderately good with it, and his 4 Zarathian daggers in which he has no training but he keeps them as extra protection just in case he is ever captured because they are on the inside of his boots they are hidden.

Familiars: A Kor' och fey Mologh named Night breeze due to the fact that it is all black except for a white blotch on its forehead, and a Myrddin Falcon named Stargaze, it was trained when he bought it and Night breeze from Arnels father.

Belongings: His leather armor, his 12 earings 3 of which he got from Arnel, Arnel's mothers silver ring, his Night Claw Blade's, long bow, and 4 Zarathian daggers. Finnaly Night breeze his Kor' och fey Mologh and Stargaze his Myrddin Falcon.

And there you go. You're biggest problem is the history, and that is the most important aspect in a CD. Very good though, at least you have read the entry about both tribes. Tell us when you have finished editing and we'll check it again for you.

Have a nice day.
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« Reply #7 on: July 28, 2007, 04:10:02 AM »

Thank you for all of your help. I have made all the changes that you suggested but it would be greatly appreciated if you could look over my history section and tell me what you think is wrong with it or could be approved on.
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« Reply #8 on: July 28, 2007, 09:16:45 AM »

I just saw your comment on my history ill try to fix that. Thank you again.
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« Reply #9 on: July 28, 2007, 09:32:31 AM »

I tried to fix the history the best i could but since i was the one that wrote i could only find small things but thats because it sounds good to me in my head at least lol.

Hopefully i fixed it to your liking but it would be greatly appreciated if you could reread it and give man your opinon anyone else too.
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« Reply #10 on: July 28, 2007, 10:57:19 AM »

Better.
Much better. Oink.

History: Rainiers mother was of Tiraelhon descent and was out on a fishing and salt gathering expedition on the Theranian Sea with her family when they were caught in a storm and taken out to the Burning Sea. When she awoke she found herself on a merchant vessel headed towards the province of Enthronia, in Santharia.
               
                   Upon ariving in Enthronia she met a human ranger by the name of Illicted who offered to help her in any way that he could due to the fact that he was entranced by her beauty. She graciously accepted and was then taken along for all of Illicted's travels. During their travels Illicted was taken by the Paelelon forest home of the Eophyrhim Dark Elves. He was in as good a standing as you could be with the dark elves since he had once bought one of their hunting hounds. He had formed a rare but life lasting friendship with the Eophyrhim elf he bought the hound from. He was therefore invited by this friend to stay for the night but only the night since outsiders weren't welcomed by the Eophyrhim(Illicted was an Eophyrhim, yet they did not welcome him?).

                 This is where Rainiers mother met his father. He was also like Illicted intranced by her beauty for he had never met an elf from Aeruillin in his life nor had anyone else of his race. It was on this one night that in a moment of passion they both set upon eachother. Not knowing of the pregnancy Illicted and Rainiers mother left the forest heading north for the Province of Nermeran. Days after entering Nermeran his mother gave birth to Rainier and died. Illicted knowing who the father was decided that it was best that he took care of Rainier instead of giving him to the Eophyrim thinking that they would not accept him since he was born to an outsider.

                 Rainier than grew up traveling all over of Santharia with Illicted learning the ways of the ranger. He was first and foremost taught how to use a long bow by Illicted. He was than taught from the age of 13(Very young for an elf to learn this.) in the use of Illicted's Night Claw Blades in which he focused most of his attention rather than on the long bow in which he is suffeciant(sufficient) with but not an expert.

                During his travels he was involved in many quarells(quarrels) with rouges(rogues) and bandits due to the fact that these were the jobs that him and Illicted would take on to earn their money. He has also survived many encounters with wild animals but one horrific account with a bear left him with 4 diaganol scars on his abdamon(abdomen). After Illicted died while sleeping at the age of 87(He died at only 87 years old? That's short. Elves can live up to hundreds of years.) Rainier had been told that when Illicted did die that he was to bury him only in his armor and that he was to take the Night Claw Blades as his own.

               Rainier than(then) kept traveling and doing various jobs hunting down theives(thieves) and rouges(rogues) for money. He than came upon the City of Jernais in the Vardynn Province where he met Arnel. Arnel was the daughter of a fairly wealthy merchant. She was at the age of 24 and Rainier was that of 100. She was not afraid of his apperance which instantly attracted him to her. He than Stayed in Jernais for around 25 years working with Arnel's father more or so as a guard to protect his shop from thieves. Her father specialized in the selling of foreign creatures and weapons which brought him a steady and reasonably well income.

              Rainier seeing no need to spend his money that he was paid on anything other than food since he was permitted to stay with Arnel and her father saved his money. After reaching 125 Rainier felt that he had overstayed his welcome. He than said his farewell's(farewell) but to his suprise Arnel came with him. Before he left he realized he needed to use a fair amount of his money for he had accumulated far to much to be taken with him on his travel's so he decided to buy a Kor' och fey Mologh and a Myrddin Falcon. As a gift from Arnels father for protecting his shop all those years and added security for his daughter Rainier was given 4 straight Zarathian Daggers.

               After leaving Jernais, Rainier and Arnel headed north into Nermeran but unnoticed to them they had traveled to far and ended up in the Tandalas Mountians where Arnel was tragicaly killed by a Gob-Oc. In her dying moments she told him that she loved him and gave him her 3 earings and the silver ring that her mother had given her to remember her by.

And there you go. You spelled abdomen wrong in your appearance section, by the way.
Have a nice day.
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« Reply #11 on: July 28, 2007, 11:06:49 AM »

I have made those spelling corrections and thank you again you have been so much help.

You kept talking about Illicted and all the abnormalities because you thought he was an Eophyrhim elf but he was a human sorry if that was confusing.
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« Reply #12 on: July 28, 2007, 11:11:58 AM »

Hmm... I see. That is why I wanted you to clarify some of your sentences.

Anyway, I'm only a Mini-mod, so wait for a Biggie-mod to check your CD.
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« Reply #13 on: July 28, 2007, 11:33:23 AM »

See thats one of the things i couldnt see since i had written it but thank alot you were so much help.
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« Reply #14 on: July 30, 2007, 11:27:44 PM »

Hello Rainier. I saw your post in the thread "Character Descriptions in Waiting"

All lot of our Character Creation Moderators are very busy with RL. The only administrators in the RPG board as of now is Mina and Kalina, and I assume that both are busy with RL too. I'm the only one with time to comment on people's CD, though all I can do is check them. I'm only a mini-mod, and thus have no authority when it comes to giving approvals to new CDs.

Pleasbe be patient until one of them finds the time to look at your CD and give you an approval, if they are satisfied with your character. Meanwhile, try spellchecking your CD in case there are some words that you have missed. Vesk will be back after a few weeks and will be checking once again. If you want, you could PM him to look at you CD.
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