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Erik Throik
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« on: July 27, 2007, 12:13:51 PM »



Name: Erik Throik
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Race: Human
Tribe: Eyelian
Clan: Eagle
Occupation: Tracker/Bounty Hunter/Guide
Title: Naked Hunter

Overview: Erik is a righteous man who’s goal is to fix the world.

Appearance:
                Height:One and a half Peds.
   Hair Color: Brown
   Eye Color: Brown
   Physical Appearance:  Erik is average height for one of his tribe and most of normal people would tower over him at his one and a half peds tall. To contrast his height he is quite broad in the shoulders and has very muscular arms and legs. His hands are rather large and strong but also rough, showing his hard work and life. His skin is tanned and rippled with muscles over his entire body. Erik’s brown hair is kept long and neat and is allowed to hang straight back to just below his shoulders only restrained by a head band which keeps the hair out of his face. His upper lip is covered by a thin brown mustache which only compliments the brown patch on his chin that is surrounded by stubble. His eyes are a light brown color that tell his every secret when gazed into. His eyes tell a story of him being a good, honest and caring person.

Erik’s appearance is one that would be considered rugged and possibly handsome. He appears quite non-threatening partly due to his height but also he just has that look which says I want to be your friend. It is obvious that he prefers the outdoors, but this does not mean that he lacks in the hygiene department. In a normal situation Erik keeps him self very clean, well groomed and he bathes him self in whatever manner he can when he can.

   Clothing: Erik’s clothing is normally kept quite clean and even though he has only one set of clothing he has no problem with stripping naked and washing them right in front of anyone. He wears a brown pair of plain pants which lead to a pair of black dyed leather boots. On his top half he wears a white under shirt that is partly covered by a reddish brown leather armor that provides minimal protection. Across his back he adorns a quiver of arrows which he obviously uses to fire forth from his bow. His hands are protected by a pair of brown leather gloves that come up to just below his elbow.

Personality: Erik is a very noble and righteous person who would stand up for someone in need to the death. He believes very strongly that everyone needs to follow the same moral code as he does and he is far from afraid to tell you what he thinks about your actions. If someone is in danger, or if someone was to harm nature or the creatures in it, he would stand up for them no matter what. Having said that Erik does believe that there is a balance to things, for instance if you must kill to survive then its ok in his eyes. To kill an animal to eat or to kill someone who threatens your well being, is fine to Erik.

Erik is very loyal to his friends and when you are his friend you can count that he well be there for you every single time. He would gladly die for a stranger in need just imagine what he would do for a friend. He expects a lot out of someone he counts as a friend, as he gives much he expects much in return. Erik is quite outgoing with people and always tells them the truth and what he is thinking. He is never intentionally mean, but is not greatly concerned about offending another person with his words.

Erik is a calm person though he is easily excitable about some things. He is not prone to violence but when needed he will call on his bear to thwart a fight from ever happening, as you would have to be a fool to fight a bear double his size.

Love is something that Erik has never had in his life and he currently is seeking it. It is not something that he seeks around every corner but it is something that he is always keeping his eye open for. He has a great respect for women and treats them all in a proper manner as he believes all women should be treated. He is not a pretty boy, but a woman who would fall for Erik would be a woman who enjoys a man in the wilderness, who treats a woman right, stands up for what he believes in and is ruggedly handsome.

Strengths:
- He is an excellent tracker and can track in just about any environment. When in the wilderness he is an expert tracker that no one can hide from.
- Excellent with a bow, as in he can hit just about anything he wants with it from great distances.
- His friend Boris, the bear, is extremely strong and when willing is quite the ally to have in battle.
- His loyalty and righteousness are aspects which allow him the benefit of keeping many friends and helps him with first impressions.
- Women have a tendency to adore Erik because of his rugged looks and how he treats them with the utmost respect.
- Erik has the ability to understand and speak with a many of animals due to learning with his father and many years of practice.

Weaknesses:
- Erik has very little defense against any attacker which would chose to come with in melee distance.
- Boris is some times quite lazy and unwilling to do what is commanded or asked of him which leaves Erik quite defenseless in lots of situations.
- Boris also has a tendency to do exactly what he wants when he wants despite what Erik or anyone else would wish of him. Meaning if he wants your food, he is getting your food and there is not much you can do about it.
- Erik is very uncomfortable with any kind of city situation and in most situations would just soon stay away from any city. Therefore, this limits where Erik’s willing to go and the recourses he has available to him.
-  With Boris around, others have a tendency to react harshly, fearfully and/or refuse to be around at all. This obviously hurts Erik’s social standing and capability of dealing with others.
- Erik feels most comfortable while naked and has absolutely no problem with stripping all of his clothing of at any moment. This is a problem for others who might not agree with his nudist ways and also this keeps him uncomfortable when conforming to the ways of city dwellers.
- His righteousness can cause some people to become cross with him and seek to defy him at every turn.

History: Vezash is a city just south of Santhala and the home of the Throik family. This was where Erik was born, raised and learned most of his training as a Eyelian Beast Master. As does with any warm blooded creature such as Erik, his story started with his parents. His father, Ferlo, was an old fashioned Eyelian Beast Master of the Eagle Clan. Erik’s mother, Clair, was also an old fashioned Eyelian Beast Master of the Eagle Clan. Their meeting was simple enough, they had know each other all their lives and grew up together before they both were invited to become Beast Masters. This was a tradition in the Throik family line and most of the Throik family line had at one point been a Beast Master. Ferlo was a very respected man among his tribe and clan and he was very skilled in many different aspects. He was an excellent negotiator, a pro with the bow and had learned in his long life how to speak with many different kinds of animals. His respect among those of his tribe and clan was also shared with the animals he dealt with, giving him a great deal of persuasion power over all he came in contact with.

Clair had also been asked to join as a Beast Master though her stay was well over thirty years shorter than her husband’s. When she became married and pregnant she removed her self from such an Order and began her life taking care of her first born son. She also gave birth to two other boys and two girls; the second born was around five years after Erik had been born. Clair was a very intelligent lady who spent all of her post child life taking care of, teaching and instilling morals on her five children. She was a very attentive mother and her children, when not angry with her, would have called her the best mother that anyone could have.

Erik’s father, like all others in his tribe, spent a full day in the Lodge of Purification to figure out what his newly born son’s name would be. The spirits spoke the name Erik to him and that was a decision made in the true Eyelian way. This is exactly how Erik was raised, everything he had ever known was the Eyelian way in all its purity. He was taught from a very young age that his job in life was to protect those who need protection, including nature and those of all races. He took part in this from a very young age even in the most simplest way. It was not an uncommon thing to see Erik saving a wounded animal or wandering around policing the wilderness and his home town.

Erik greeted his entrance into manhood with great passion and excitement as this meant freedom and responsibility to him. This was something which he welcomed with open arms. The thought of having the power and freedom to help those who needed it was a great thing to him. He followed tradition to its fullest extent staying in the Lodge of Purification for five days with no meat to eat and only very minuscule amounts of water to sip upon. The dreams during this time where different than he had, ever had and he was sure that they had be altered by the spirits. For three days Erik wandered through the wilderness, that he loved so, with nothing more than a knife for protection and hunting. He slept curled up on the ground and ate what ever he managed to kill or find. Hunger ate at his mind, begging him to return home to disgrace him self, but his will was too strong. The third morning in the wilderness Erik awoke to a sight which excited and relieved him of his burden. As the light broke through the tree tops a shadowy figure, almost appearing to be made of smoke, stood before Erik, tall and muscular, it was a massive bear, his spirit guide. The sight of this magnificent spirit in the form of a bear was the greatest thing Erik had ever seen in his short life. The spirit sat before Erik in the awkward way that bears do and did not move or make any sound but just sat there. Erik acted in the same way watching for any sign as what he was meant to do as he sat and watched the spirit. Throughout most of the morning all they did was sit, but slowly Erik began to understand, what he was understanding and how was beyond him, but he slowly began to comprehend everything this spirit meant for him to. The language of the bear started to become clear to him and he had found, for life, his spirit guide, making him a man.

Before becoming a man Erik spent most of his time with his father learning all that he knew but after becoming a man it became his full time job to learn all his father knew. He began hunting for food with his father, learned to shoot a bow, watched and learned while his father spoke to many different animals and learned the way of tracking. Erik and his father spent most all of their time in the wilderness for one reason or another, but Erik spent all of it learning. As the years went by Erik became exceedingly talented in his father’s ways and he was soon extended an invitation to become a Beast Master as his father and his grandfather before him had. Ferlo had a great deal of pride because of his son and all his accomplishments.

When Erik had reached the age of twenty five he had decided to himself that he not only had learned all he could in the way of tracking and archery, but that he had no way of learning more animal languages from his current place of living. He desired so greatly to roam the world and protect nature and those others in need and with this desire accompanied with his thoughts of learning to speak to animals his father had never seen, Erik left his homeland to find adventure. His father, filled with pride and admiration for his son, gave his son his blessing to seek the knowledge that he desired, and even though his mother was less willing to give her blessing she also ended up agreeing with his choice in the end.

For a year Erik traveled and helped those that he could though he found his limited ability of fighting only with a bow quite a handicap when dealing with those who would wish to cause him harm. He found himself disliking the city but having no choice but to enter it from time to time for work, as a guide or bounty hunter, and supplies and even though he was more than capable of surviving in the wild with out any help from a city dweller it was still quite convenient and more comfortable to purchase some things from these city dwellers. He quickly found his comfort zone to be in the wild and when he found his new companion Boris this became even more true.

During Erik’s travels in the northern regions he managed to come across a very deadly sight. There was a Cartashian Bear standing on his hind legs and he was in the beginning stages of getting ready to kill a group of three men. It was not out of anger or hunger or because of his territory but rather the bear was going to kill them out of sorrow. Erik quickly responded to the scene he approached and he ran up to the bear, speaking in its native tongue he ordered the bear to stop. The bear stopped but only for a moment as he was caught off guard by something much smaller and weaker than him knowing how to speak his language. The bear slowly turned to see Erik and with this movement the three men ran for their lives. The bear turned quickly and dropped to all fours readying to chase after the three and again Erik yelled at the bear in its own tongue telling him to wait and talk to him. Confused and angered the bear turned to Erik and asked him what it was he wanted before and Erik simply told the bear that he was a protector of nature and all others and that he could not have allowed this bear to come to harm or harm others. The bear, who Erik found to be named Boris, fell to the ground and after hours of talk Erik found him self a new friend. Boris had a mate who he had been with only a single year and he had already lost her. He had come back to his cave after a search for his favorite food, honey, to find a bloody mess where he had left his mate. He knew not what had done such a thing but he did smell the distinct smell of human. Erik offered for Boris to come with him and if they were to ever find that smell again they would bring the killer to justice, but every moment before that he had to help Erik on his quest to help those who needed it.

Weapons:
      Long Bow: Erik is very proficient with the long bow and can hit just about anything he wants at great distances with it.
      Dagger: Used mainly for cutting up food and prey he had hunted.

Belongings:  Other than clothing and weapons Erik has nothing other than a small pouch for coins that is nearly empty.

Familiars: Boris is a Cartashian Bear that has become fully grown, at the age of five, at three and a half peds tall. He is in general quite lazy and troublesome to Erik. At times he well do what is requested of him, the other times he wont do anything at all. He has a very strong weakness for honey and would do anything to eat any honey he ever smelled or found. He is very loyal to Erik and trusts him more than anything else, but still has a very strong will of his own. Erik does not own or command him, he is his own bear and does what he wants when he wants and some times he well take Erik’s opinion and react accordingly. Boris gets his feelings hurt quite easily and must be dealt with accordantly. He also has a very short temper and does not like to be picked on or messed with.
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« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2007, 01:31:07 PM »

Waaaw.. I mean, Welcome to the Dream, Erik. The Green Sorcerer will be checking your CD, in the fiery color of red.

Name: Erik Throik
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Race: Human
Tribe: Eyelian
Clan: Eagle
Occupation: Tracker/Bounty Hunter/Guide
Title: Naked Hunter

Overview: Erik is a righteous man who’s goal is to fix the world.

Appearance:
   Height:
   Weight:

   Hair Color: Brown
   Eye Color: Brown
   Physical Appearance:  Erik is average height for one of his tribe and most of normal people would tower over him at his one and a half peds tall. To contrast his height he is quite broad in the shoulders and has very muscular arms and legs. His hands are rather large and strong but also rough, showing his hard work and life. His skin is tanned and rippled with muscles over his entire body. Erik’s brown hair is kept long and neat and is allowed to hang straight back to just below his shoulders only restrained by a head band which keeps the hair out of his face. His upper lip is covered by a thin brown mustache which only compliments the brown patch on his chin that is surrounded by stubble. His eyes are a light brown color that tell his every secret when gazed into. His eyes tell a story of him being a good, honest and caring person.

Erik’s appearance is one that would be considered rugged and possibly handsome. He appears quite non-threatening partly due to his height but also he just has that look which says I want to be your friend. It is obvious that he prefers the outdoors, but this does not mean that he lacks in the hygiene department. In a normal situation Erik keeps him self very clean, well groomed and he bathes him self in whatever manner he can when he can.

   Clothing: Erik’s clothing is normally kept quite clean and even though he has only one set of clothing he has no problem with stripping naked and washing them right in front of anyone. He wears is(remove is) a brown pair of plain pants which lead to a pair of black died(dyed) leather boots. On his top half he wears a white under shirt that is partly covered by a reddish brown leather armor that provides minimal protection. Across his back he adorns a quiver of arrows which he obviously uses to fire forth from his bow. His hands are protected by a pair of brown leather gloves that come up to just below his elbow.

Personality: Erik is a very noble and righteous person who would stand up for someone in need to the death. He believes very strongly that everyone needs to follow the same moral code as he does and he is far from afraid to tell you what he thinks about your actions. If someone is in danger, or if someone was to harm nature or the creatures in it, he would stand up for them no matter what. Having said that Erik does believe that there is a balance to things, for instance if you must kill to survive then its ok in his eyes. To kill an animal to eat or to kill someone who threatens your well being, is ok(it would sound better if you would write 'fine' instead of 'ok'. :P ) to Erik.

Erik is very loyal to his friends and when you are his friend you can count that he wel(will)l be there for you every single time. He would gladly die for a stranger in need just imagine what he would do for a friend. He expects a lot out of someone he counts as a friend, as he gives much he expects much in return. Erik is quite outgoing with people and always tells them the truth and what he is thinking. He is never intentionally mean, but is not greatly concerned about offending another person with his words.

Erik is a calm person though he is easily excitable about some things. He is not prone to violence but when needed he well(will) call on his bear to thwart a fight from ever happening, as you would have to be a fool to fight a bear double his size.

Love is something that Erik has never had in his life and he currently is seeking it. It is not something that he seeks around every corner but it is something that he is always keeping his eye open for. He has a great respect for women and treats them all in a proper manner as he believes all women should be treated. He is not a pretty boy, but a woman who would fall for Erik would be a woman who enjoys a man in the wilderness, who treats a woman right, stands up for what he believes in and is ruggedly handsome.(And loves being naked. Gwahaha joke! LOL )
(I love the way you described him to us, very detailed indeed!)

Strengths:
- He is an excellent tracker and can track in just about any environment. When in the wilderness he is an expert tracker that no one can hide from.
- Excellent with a bow, as in he can hit just about anything he wants with it from great distances.
- His friend Boris, the bear, is extremely strong and when willing is quite the ally to have in battle.
- His loyalty and righteousness are aspects which allow him the benefit of keeping many friends and helps him with first impressions.
- Women have a tendency to adore Erik because of his rugged looks and how he treats them with the utmost respect.
- Erik has the ability to understand and speak with a large amount(remove 'large amount', put in 'many') of animals due to learning with his father and many years of practice.

Weaknesses:
- Erik has very little defense against any attacker which would chose to come with in melee distance.
- Boris is some times quite lazy and unwilling to do what is commanded or asked of him which leaves Erik quite defenseless in lots of situations.
- Boris also has a tendency to do exactly what he wants when he wants despite what Erik or anyone else would wish of him. Meaning if he wants your food, he is getting your food and there is not much you can do about it.
- Erik is very uncomfortable with any kind of city situation and in most situations would just soon stay away from any city. Therefore, this limits where Erik’s willing to go and the recourses he has available to him.
-  With Boris around, others have a tendency to react harshly, fearfully and/or refuse to be around at all. This obviously hurts Erik’s social standing and capability of dealing with others.
- Erik feels most comfortable while naked and has absolutely no problem with stripping all of his clothing of at any moment. This is a problem for others who might not agree with his nudist ways and also this keeps him uncomfortable when conforming to the ways of city dwellers.(Hmm.. He's willing to skip around in a city naked?)
- His righteousness can cause some people to become cross with him and seek to defy him at every turn.

History: Vezash is a city just south of Santhala and the home of the Throik family. This was where Erik was born, raised and learned most of his training as a Eyelian Beast Master. As does with any warm blooded creature such as Erik, his story started with his parents. His father, Ferlo, was an old fashioned Eyelian Beast Master of the Eagle Clan.  Erik’s mother, Clair, was also an old fashioned Eyelian Beast Master of the Eagle Clan. Their meeting was simple enough, they had know each other all their lives and grew up together before they both were invited to be()no space heren come Beast Masters. This was a tradition in the Throik family line and most of the Throik family line had at one point been a Beast Master. Ferlo was a very respected man among his tribe and clan and he was very skilled in many different aspects. He was an excellent negotiator, a pro with the bow and had learned in his long life how to speak with many different kinds of animals. His respect among those of his tribe and clan was also shared with the animals he dealt with, giving him a great deal of persuasion power over all he came in contact with.

Clair had also been asked to join as a Beast Master though her stay was well over thirty years shorter than her husband’s. When she became married and pregnant she removed her self from such an Order and began her life taking care of her first born son. She also gave birth to two other boys and two girls; the second born was around five years after Erik had been born. Clair was a very intelligent lady who spent all of her post child life taking care of, teaching and instilling morals on her five children. She was a very attentive mother and her children, when not angry with her, would have called her the best mother that anyone could have.

Erik’s father, like all others in his tribe, spent a full day in the Lodge of Purification to figure out what his newly born son’s name would be. The spirits spoke the name Erik to him and that was a decision made in the true Eyelian way. This is exactly how Erik was raised, everything he had ever known was the Eyelian way in all its purity. He was taught from a very young age that his job in life was to protect those who need protection, including nature and those of all races. He took part in this from a very young age even in the most simplest way. It was not an uncommon thing to see Erik saving a wounded animal or wandering around policing the wilderness and his home town.

Erik greeted his entrance into manhood with great passion and excitement as this meant freedom and responsibility to him. This was something which he welcomed with open arms. The thought of having the power and freedom to help those who needed it was a great thing to him. He followed tradition to its fullest extent staying in the Lodge of Purification for five days with no meat to eat and only very minuscule amounts of water to sip upon. The dreams during this time where different than he had, ever had and he was sure that they had be altered by the spirits. For three days Erik wandered through the wilderness, that he loved so, with nothing more than a knife for protection and hunting. He slept curled up on the ground and ate what ever he managed to kill or find. Hunger ate at his mind, begging him to return home to disgrace him self, but his will was to(too) strong. The third morning in the wilderness Erik awoke to a sight which excited and relieved him of his burden. As the light broke through the tree tops a shadowy figure, almost appearing to be made of smoke, stood before Erik, tall and muscular, it was a massive bear, his spirit guide. The sight of this magnificent spirit in the form of a bear was the greatest thing Erik had ever seen in his short life. The spirit sat before Erik in the awkward way that bears do and did not move or make any sound but just sat there. Erik acted in the same way watching for any sign as what he was meant to do as he sat and watched the spirit. Throughout most of the morning all they did was sit, but slowly Erik began to understand, what he was understanding and how was beyond him, but he slowly began to comprehend everything this spirit meant for him to. The language of the bear started to become clear to him and he had found, for life, his spirit guide, making him a man.

Before becoming a man Erik spent most of his time with his father learning all that he knew but after becoming a man it became his full time job to learn all his father knew. He began hunting for food with his father, learned to shoot a bow, watched and learned while his father spoke to many different animals and learned the way of tracking. Erik and his father spent most all of their time in the wilderness for one reason or another, but Erik spent all of it learning. As the years went by Erik became exceedingly talented in his father’s ways and he was soon extended an invitation to become a Beast Master as his father and his grandfather before him had. Ferlo had a great deal of pride because of his son and all his accomplishments.

When Erik had reached the age of twenty five he had decided to him(no space here) self that he not only had learned all he could in the way of tracking and archery, but that he had no way of learning more animal languages from his current place of living. He desired so greatly to roam the world and protect nature and those others in need and with this desire accompanied with his thoughts of learning to speak to animals his father had never seen, Erik left his homeland to find adventure. His father, filled with pride and admiration for his son, gave his son his blessing to seek the knowledge that he desired, and even though his mother was less willing to give her blessing she also ended up agreeing with his choice in the end.

For a year Erik traveled and helped those that he could though he found his limited ability of fighting only with a bow quite a handicap when dealing with those who would wish to cause him harm. He found him self disliking the city but having no choice but to enter it from time to time for work and supplies and even though he was more than capable of surviving in the wild with out any help from a city dweller it was still quite convenient and more comfortable to purchase some things from these city dwellers(How did he earn the coins required to buy things?). He quickly found his comfort zone to be in the wild and when he found his new companion Boris this became even more true.

During Erik’s travels in the northern regions he managed to come across a very deadly sight. There was a Cartashian Bear standing on his hind legs and he was in the beginning stages of getting ready to kill a group of three men. It was not out of anger or hunger or because of his territory but rather the bear was going to kill them out of sorrow. Erik quickly responded to the scene he approached and he ran up to the bear, speaking in its native tongue he ordered the bear to stop. The bear stopped but only for a moment as he was caught off guard by something much smaller and weaker than him knowing how to speak his language. The bear slowly turned to see Erik and with this movement the three men ran for their lives. The bear turned quickly and dropped to all fours readying to chase after the three and again Erik yelled at the bear in its own tongue telling him to wait and talk to him. Confused and angered the bear turned to Erik and asked him what it was he wanted before he died by the bears strength(died by the bears strength?). Erik simply told the bear that he was a protector of nature and all others and that he could not have allowed this bear to come to harm or harm others. The bear, who Erik found to be named Boris, fell to the ground and after hours of talk Erik found him self a new friend. Boris had a mate who he had been with only a single year and he had already lost her. He had come back to his cave after a search for his favorite food, honey, to find a bloody mess where he had left his mate. He knew not what had done such a thing but he did smell the distinct smell of human. Erik offered for Boris to come with him and if they were to ever find that smell again they would bring the killer to justice, but every moment before that he had to help Erik on his quest to help those who needed it.
The history is nearly perfect. Just correct the errors and your on your way to adventure!

Weapons:
      Long Bow: Erik is very proficient with the long bow and can hit just about anything he wants at great distances with it.
      Dagger: Used mainly for cutting up food and prey he had hunted.

Belongings:  Other than clothing and weapons Erik has nothing other than a small pouch for coins that is nearly empty.

Familiars: Boris is a Cartashian Bear that has become fully grown, at the age of five, at three and a half peds tall. He is in general quite lazy and troublesome to Erik. At times he well do what is requested of him, the other times he wont do anything at all. He has a very strong weakness for honey and would do anything to eat any honey he ever smelled or found. He is very loyal to Erik and trusts him more than anything else, but still has a very strong will of his own. Erik does not own or command him, he is his own bear and does what he wants when he wants and some times he well take Erik’s opinion and react accordingly. Boris gets his feelings hurt quite easily and must be dealt with accordantly. He also has a very short temper and does not like to be picked on or messed with.

And there you go. Excellent! It seems that you have done your reading. Correct the errors and I'm sure you'll get both approvals.

Have a nice day.
« Last Edit: July 27, 2007, 02:09:22 PM by Thorgas Ironforge » Logged

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« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2007, 11:09:54 PM »

The Height and Weight I decided to leave out due to them not being required and I said his Height in physical description.

"(Hmm.. He's willing to skip around in a city naked?)" Yes he is willing but thats why I said that its a weakness as he is most comfortable when naked but he feels forced to conform to the city dweller way and wear clothing.

Everything else has been fixed, thank you so much Thorgas for looking at my character and giving me such helpfull comments.
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« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2007, 11:16:22 PM »

1. It will help those who you RP with if you would list down your height and weight. It prevents them from reading long sentences in order to accurately imagine what your character looks like. It would be better if you would list it down.

2. Yes, well that is a question and you answered it, so no problem.

3. Ok good. unfortunately, all of our CD mods and one of our admin are either in vacation or having RL problems. That leaves me and another admin. I can't give out approvals and our remaining admin is quite busy with a few things, so expect your titlement to be a bit slow. Don't worry though, you're ready for both approvals. All you have to do is wait patiently.
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« Reply #4 on: July 28, 2007, 06:03:13 PM »

Hey Erik, just thought I'd mention that your height is required in the first appearance section, even though you might have said it in the Physical Appearance section. Only the weight is optional. Personally, I don't know why they make one optional and one compulsory when it would be easier to make both optional or both compulsory. But hey. :)
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« Reply #5 on: July 28, 2007, 10:07:16 PM »

Eh, alrighty then I'll edit it then to fix that.
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« Reply #6 on: July 28, 2007, 11:36:19 PM »

Hey Thorgas! I am around, incase you hadn't noticed!

I love this character, and he isn't overpowered! I love it.

I would only suggest you run through with a spell check, as I noticed a few words here and there, but you are definitely close to your first approval!
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« Reply #7 on: July 28, 2007, 11:40:37 PM »

Oh! I thought you were having RL problems. Anyway, I hope you are feeling better. buck

I told you that you'll be getting both approvals soon enough. I'm pretty good when it comes to detecting CDs ready for titlement. grin
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« Reply #8 on: July 28, 2007, 11:49:06 PM »

Yeah, I am. But I have found that Santharia has been a good escape, more than I expected it to be. :D


Oh! and Erik, did you draw that fab picture?
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« Reply #9 on: July 29, 2007, 12:03:47 AM »

This is Erik, My internet is running to slow to justify logging out then in.

No I didn't draw that picture, I wish.

As for using a spell checker lol I have. I used a spell checker and I had two people go through and look for grammer and spelling issues for me, among other things. I have also gone though it a couple of times, so I bow my head in shame but thats the best I can do. Sorry.

Yes Thorgas you are very good at predicting approvals, but I have to say I seem to have a nack for making characters that are either ready or near ready for approval.

Edit: Also thank you for the complements and I tried so hard to keep him from being over powered, thank you.
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« Reply #10 on: July 29, 2007, 12:09:44 AM »

Well then Roland, very good ^.^
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« Reply #11 on: July 29, 2007, 12:20:02 AM »

I swear I am not trying to be pushy but does that mean I am ready for approval or is there something I need to do still?
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« Reply #12 on: July 29, 2007, 12:24:15 AM »

First approval given ^^
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« Reply #13 on: July 29, 2007, 12:26:12 AM »

Thank you, though I feel bad as I didn't mean to force the issue, just wanted to do what was needed.
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« Reply #14 on: July 29, 2007, 12:29:44 AM »

You didn't. I had meant to mark the CD for first approval but it didn't go through the first time.
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