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Author Topic: Kyrridhil Culná mo / Aellenhrim Elf / Hapless Romantic  (Read 16041 times)
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« Reply #15 on: August 30, 2007, 11:41:20 PM »
To work out if something is a strength or weakness you need to compare yourself to the average peasent.  The average peasent can't use a shortbow so therefore its a strength (if not a major one)  :)
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« Reply #16 on: August 31, 2007, 12:02:19 AM »
He is now 65% Aellenhrim and 35% Eophyrhim.
Have added 2-3 paragraphs to history and intend to do an overview of his travels.
Could people point out if i have left Arthyron in there as opposed to Eophyrhim?
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« Reply #17 on: August 31, 2007, 12:05:25 AM »
Thats a good point. Will need to add another weakness.
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« Reply #18 on: August 31, 2007, 12:12:40 AM »
You must be a fan of mine... since you've chosen the avatar of another one of my characters. I promise you that I don't have all the avatars claimed, you just keep choosing the ones I do use. Maybe this site will help you to find a unique avatar, it's got plenty of em.
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« Reply #19 on: August 31, 2007, 12:20:30 AM »
Added more and changing avatar now. Gotta go for today. will do more tommorow
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« Reply #20 on: August 31, 2007, 04:38:26 AM »
bump
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« Reply #21 on: August 31, 2007, 05:53:15 AM »
One quick thing, could you put spaces between the paragraphs in your history? Makes it easier to read that way. ^.^
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« Reply #22 on: August 31, 2007, 11:37:34 PM »
np, will fix straight away.

After this session. Won't be able to get back on probably until monday. So if it seems im ignoring advice. Im not :P
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« Reply #23 on: August 31, 2007, 11:46:53 PM »
Height: 2 Ped, 1 Palmspan - 6'10"

Weight: 1 pygge, 5 Hebs, 9 muts - about 150lbs

You are a stick at this height and weight! You know those boys in school that are 6ft4in and as skinny as can be? They are about 150-170 in weight. (Some of them stepped on a scale in math class once, that is how I know ^.~) For your height, I would suggest something a bit heavier so you are not so skinny, as you do mention that his is a "giant" and "muscular".
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« Reply #24 on: September 01, 2007, 12:15:47 AM »
Im short so dont know how heavy he would be at this height :P Will fix it though. Thanksfor the insight. I assume you mean bumping the weight up. Not the height though

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Woops! only just noticed i only put 1 pygee :P

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When you say 150 - 170 do you mean kilo or pounds?
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« Reply #25 on: September 01, 2007, 12:31:27 AM »
Have fixed all the mistakes pointed out (I think) Could a mod have a look through it now and point out any that they notice?
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« Reply #26 on: September 01, 2007, 12:35:23 AM »
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When you say 150 - 170 do you mean kilo or pounds?

pounds
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« Reply #27 on: September 01, 2007, 03:25:23 AM »
Fixed the weight issue. (not that hes obese. More Anorexic :P) Mods comments gratefully received
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« Reply #28 on: September 01, 2007, 03:33:55 AM »
lol, It looks good, but ive only just joined so i dunno
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« Reply #29 on: September 03, 2007, 11:40:49 PM »
Bump.

Perilously close to the second page :o
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