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Author Topic: Krinaia/Centoraurian - Arthyron/Gifted Enchantress  (Read 7660 times)
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« Reply #15 on: September 12, 2007, 06:59:47 PM »

Maybe a bit more detail on the familiar?  What type of horse, how old and where did she get him (unless thats in your history)?  Male or female?  What does it look like?
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« Reply #16 on: September 12, 2007, 09:10:58 PM »

Great! thanx for your help. i have added a bit more detail about Swift and even a picture. Hope thats enough.
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« Reply #17 on: September 12, 2007, 09:19:23 PM »

The picture and description are fab, just one slight worry.  You said Swift belonged to your father but he died when you were 20 (i.e. 10yrs ago edit, sorry meant 20 yrs ago) and she is only 7!
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« Reply #18 on: September 12, 2007, 09:48:20 PM »

Fixed! Thanx for pointing that out  :)
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« Reply #19 on: September 13, 2007, 03:33:53 AM »

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Occupation: She makes clothes to sell if she runs out of money when she is traveling.

Ok, generally when you make clothing, you need the funds for the material. I want to make a cloak for myself instead of buying one. Instead of costing me $130, it will cost me roughly about $80-85 to make. How can she make clothing when she has no money to purchase the materials?


First approval given as everything is generally in order...
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« Reply #20 on: September 13, 2007, 06:13:52 PM »

Hello Krinaia,

two small things before I give you your second approval:

- Could you quickly explain to us how your parents met?

- 24 years old is very old for a horse. A horse generally lives 25 to 30 years. Are you sure you want your horse to be that old? If so, could you add that to the description?
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« Reply #21 on: September 14, 2007, 03:47:09 AM »

@ Kalina
Thanx for the 1st approval. Thumb up  Also she makes clothes when she has little money but enough for the materials needed. I changed the occupation so it says that She makes clothes to sell when she is traveling. So its clear.

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I fixed Swifts age and modified the history to fit every thing in as well as the info about how her parents met. Hope its enough.

Thanx for the help! Hopefully the 2nd approval is on the way    grin
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« Reply #22 on: September 14, 2007, 04:56:11 AM »

All right! *hands out a second approval*

Enjoy roleplaying, dear!
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« Reply #23 on: September 14, 2007, 06:53:42 AM »

And titled! Go ahead and remove the correction colors from your CD then I will move it down to the archives!
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« Reply #24 on: September 15, 2007, 07:41:10 AM »

Removed the color myself.
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