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Author Topic: Toama Sor'inyt - Sand Sisters - Mercenary  (Read 7463 times)
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Azhira Styralias
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« Reply #15 on: March 26, 2008, 01:14:32 AM »

I like the connection with Azhira. Makes sense as a Sister giving birth to a baby boy would generally be something well remembered as rare as it is.
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« Reply #16 on: March 26, 2008, 05:13:09 AM »

Reapproved :)
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« Reply #17 on: January 27, 2012, 10:11:47 AM »

Brought up as requested. :)
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Toama SorInyt
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« Reply #18 on: January 28, 2012, 02:17:15 AM »

Ok! Took away her one leg shorter than the other weakness, since I don't actually play it. Might add another weakness later but I'd have to play her a little more first. Changed the fingers she lost to the ring and pinky, still of her left hand. Took away the reference to Azhira, who changed her whole CD anyway so she's not a sand sister anymore :)

Otherwise just some odds and ends, grammar stuff and so on.

Good to go or are there things that I still need to change?
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« Reply #19 on: January 29, 2012, 09:35:19 AM »

Good to go.  Dropping this back to the Abyss. :)
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