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Pip Blindeye
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« Reply #15 on: December 17, 2008, 03:06:58 AM »
Bump! Okay, I think everything is correct. I haven't worked on her in awhile, so I'm not 100% sure. Just lemme know if you see anything out of place or anything like that.
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Twén Aråerwén
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« Reply #16 on: December 19, 2008, 03:35:45 AM »
Hello Pip and welcome back! Glad to see you working on this again, although not much of that is needed from my viewpoint. I have only one concern after reading this and it seems quite 'small'.

1) If she has trouble with Tharian and does not know how to make her own poisons. I think acquiring new would be extremely difficult for one so tiny. Maybe a sentence or two noting this under that weakness would truly show how hindered this makes her during those times.
~Sincerely~
Cáo fá cár'tuulén:Twen Araerwen
P.S.: Once Rookie or Simone are OK with the Brownie aspects you have an approval from me.
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•º•The spell fell upon the crowd like a dragon, •º•
•º•ancient and full of death.•º•
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« Reply #17 on: December 19, 2008, 04:15:12 AM »
Thanks, Twen! It's good to be back. Alright. I'll add something about her being unable to get poison or something like that. ^^
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« Reply #18 on: December 19, 2008, 04:18:33 AM »
Just something on how difficult it would be for her would be great Pip. heart
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•º•The spell fell upon the crowd like a dragon, •º•
•º•ancient and full of death.•º•
_.·´¯) Twén Aråerwén's CD(¯`·._
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« Reply #19 on: December 19, 2008, 04:35:49 AM »
And done. Change in lime.
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« Reply #20 on: December 19, 2008, 04:49:56 AM »
Well I am good with this Pip. ~First approval~
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•º•The spell fell upon the crowd like a dragon, •º•
•º•ancient and full of death.•º•
_.·´¯) Twén Aråerwén's CD(¯`·._
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« Reply #21 on: December 19, 2008, 04:57:42 AM »
Yay! *does the first approval dance*
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« Reply #22 on: December 20, 2008, 11:05:27 AM »
And... I personally don't see anything wrong with it at all.

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« Reply #23 on: December 20, 2008, 11:11:41 AM »
~Titled and Archived~
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