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Author Topic: Azhira Styralias ~ Aellenrhim/Epheronian ~ Earth Mage-Healer  (Read 25310 times)
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« Reply #45 on: November 07, 2009, 12:46:20 AM »

Ok...now I think I am ready!

New additions in Lime Green.

More Magic section added for Josie.

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« Reply #46 on: November 07, 2009, 08:56:54 AM »

New magic stuff looks fine, Azhira.

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« Reply #47 on: November 07, 2009, 10:47:25 AM »

The rest of it looks fine to me as well, Azhira. 1st approval, unless you decide to add more things to it, of course :D
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« Reply #48 on: November 08, 2009, 12:02:26 PM »

The magic looks quite acceptable to me, so I have no problems with handing you a 2nd approval and a place back in the archives.

You know the drill about the color ^.~
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« Reply #49 on: November 08, 2009, 08:30:29 PM »

Thank you Miss Colorado! heart

Colors removed.
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« Reply #50 on: November 08, 2009, 11:19:13 PM »

And re-archived!
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« Reply #51 on: January 27, 2010, 12:20:42 PM »

Going up!!!
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« Reply #52 on: January 28, 2010, 06:25:09 AM »

Ok, all my tweaks are done. Colored Yellow.
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« Reply #53 on: January 30, 2010, 09:57:38 AM »

Hi Azhira,

Just two minor things I saw ...

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Age: 43 years (appears as a 27 year old human with knowledge and training of a 35 year old human)

When I just ran the calculator, I got the following result which was slightly different to the above ...

Your elf looks like a human about 27 years old, has the aproximate knowledge & training of a 34 year old human, and is 42 years old.

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Birth and Childhood

Born to an elven priestess of Nehtor, named Lafalia, and a handsome Erpheronian knight of Armeros, who was known as Elrosse the Whitebrand. Azhira Elrosse first experienced the world on a bright and sunny 6th day of Rising Sun, in the year 1621.


That first sentence doesn't seem to be complete yet. I think if you change that full stop/period after Whitebrand to a comma that will fiix that problem.

In any case, I don't see any issuing an approval for you. :)
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« Reply #54 on: January 30, 2010, 01:16:00 PM »

Strange that elven age calculator. I wrote exactly what it spit out to me. Oh well, I'll take your calculation.

I also tweaked that first sentence.
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« Reply #55 on: January 30, 2010, 01:24:01 PM »

And here's my approval for you!


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« Reply #56 on: January 31, 2010, 11:19:20 AM »

And Second Approval! You can go ahead and remove the colour. :) I found nothing further wrong with any of the changes you made.
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« Reply #57 on: January 31, 2010, 11:25:27 AM »

Thanks Syl.

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« Reply #58 on: January 31, 2010, 11:28:37 AM »

Okie Day - Rearchived!
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