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Author Topic: Selarná / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer  (Read 9071 times)
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Sela
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« Reply #15 on: March 07, 2008, 10:35:22 PM »

Name change and several tweaks and edits... :P
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« Reply #16 on: March 08, 2008, 03:12:22 PM »

I definitely like the changes, looks very good to me. Should be interesting to see how Sarya handles her challenges in life now. :)
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« Reply #17 on: March 09, 2008, 11:48:56 AM »

Can we have her eye and hair color be put in.By her height and weight.
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« Reply #18 on: March 09, 2008, 12:58:46 PM »

Sarya included her eye and hair color in her well written description, so I don't see a need for the redundancy.
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« Reply #19 on: March 13, 2008, 12:12:20 AM »

Bumping since it has been 4 days since last comment. Thanks.  Thumb up
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Kalína Dalá'isyrás
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« Reply #20 on: March 14, 2008, 06:15:03 AM »

I really enjoyed the history. I have no immediate problems with the mushroom.

~First Approval~
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« Reply #21 on: March 14, 2008, 06:27:32 AM »

One and only issue:

Please explain the difference between a standard, and a masterwork scimitar. I figure one is of better make, but i'd like you to elaborate on that a little bit.

Other than that....

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« Reply #22 on: March 14, 2008, 11:34:55 AM »

Ahh, thanks for the approvals! I look forward to playing with this naughty little lady... devilish

You are correct, Pikel. A D&D term, masterwork is to mean that it is something of very fine, expert craftsmanship. I edited my description of the blade to reflect its special qualities. It is in no way magical, just very sharp, polished, nice work. As opposed to a standard scimitar for the run of the mill soldier - which is basically a sharpened steel blade on a crude handle. It is a special weapon for Silarna from the Bloodletter clan for her exceptional ruthlessness and cunning.

EDIT - A final name change. Her first name now means "moon" in Styrash. Her last means "shadow woman" or "she shadow".
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« Reply #23 on: March 14, 2008, 01:31:29 PM »

And titled!
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« Reply #24 on: April 23, 2008, 09:21:52 PM »

Brought up as requested! Just the name and the picture changing, so I'm not changing your message icon ^.^
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« Reply #25 on: February 26, 2010, 07:29:37 AM »

Moved up as per request.
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« Reply #26 on: May 04, 2010, 10:47:40 AM »

I've decided not to implement the changes I had in mind for Sela. With nothing changed, please bump her back down.  Thumb up
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