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Sela
Dark Seducer
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Elf, Coór'hém
Re: Sarya Ná'melór / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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Reply #15 on:
March 07, 2008, 10:35:22 PM »
Name change and several tweaks and edits...
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"Look into my eyes as the shadows devour your weak and pitiful soul..."
Sela
Argon Glasstar
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Re: Sarya Ná'melór / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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Reply #16 on:
March 08, 2008, 03:12:22 PM »
I definitely like the changes, looks very good to me. Should be interesting to see how Sarya handles her challenges in life now.
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"Don't laugh at me, Don't call me names, Don't get your pleasure from my pain, In God's eyes we're all the same, Someday we'll all have perfect wings, Don't laugh at me"
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Celebriän Véneanár
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Re: Sarya Ná'melór / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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Reply #17 on:
March 09, 2008, 11:48:56 AM »
Can we have her eye and hair color be put in.By her height and weight.
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iuá lythán iuá eophyrán.-
Celebriän Véneanár
Argon Glasstar
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Re: Sarya Ná'melór / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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Reply #18 on:
March 09, 2008, 12:58:46 PM »
Sarya included her eye and hair color in her well written description, so I don't see a need for the redundancy.
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"Don't laugh at me, Don't call me names, Don't get your pleasure from my pain, In God's eyes we're all the same, Someday we'll all have perfect wings, Don't laugh at me"
quote from:
Don't Laugh At Me~ Mark Wills
Sela
Dark Seducer
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Re: Sarya Ná'melór / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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Reply #19 on:
March 13, 2008, 12:12:20 AM »
Bumping since it has been 4 days since last comment. Thanks.
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Kalína Dalá'isyrás
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Re: Sarya Ná'melór / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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Reply #20 on:
March 14, 2008, 06:15:03 AM »
I really enjoyed the history. I have no immediate problems with the mushroom.
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Pikel Thunderstone
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Re: Sarya Ná'melór / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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Reply #21 on:
March 14, 2008, 06:27:32 AM »
One and only issue:
Please explain the difference between a standard, and a masterwork scimitar. I figure one is of better make, but i'd like you to elaborate on that a little bit.
Other than that....
Second Approval.
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Sela
Dark Seducer
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Re: Silarná Ná'melór / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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Reply #22 on:
March 14, 2008, 11:34:55 AM »
Ahh, thanks for the approvals! I look forward to playing with this naughty little lady...
You are correct, Pikel. A D&D term, masterwork is to mean that it is something of very fine, expert craftsmanship. I edited my description of the blade to reflect its special qualities. It is in no way magical, just very sharp, polished, nice work. As opposed to a standard scimitar for the run of the mill soldier - which is basically a sharpened steel blade on a crude handle. It is a special weapon for Silarna from the Bloodletter clan for her exceptional ruthlessness and cunning.
EDIT - A final name change. Her first name now means "moon" in Styrash. Her last means "shadow woman" or "she shadow".
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Kalína Dalá'isyrás
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Re: Silarná Ná'melór / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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Reply #23 on:
March 14, 2008, 01:31:29 PM »
And titled!
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Simonne Miller
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Re: Silarná Ná'melór / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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Reply #24 on:
April 23, 2008, 09:21:52 PM »
Brought up as requested! Just the name and the picture changing, so I'm not changing your message icon ^.^
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Valan Nonesuch
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Re: Selarná / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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February 26, 2010, 07:29:37 AM »
Moved up as per request.
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Sela
Dark Seducer
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Re: Selarná / Coór'hém / Dark Seducer
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May 04, 2010, 10:47:40 AM »
I've decided not to implement the changes I had in mind for Sela. With nothing changed, please bump her back down.
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