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Author Topic: Araevin Irindis ~ Sanhorrhim/Erpheronian ~ Fire Mage  (Read 12691 times)
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« Reply #15 on: April 25, 2008, 04:49:36 AM »

Ok..made some tweaks...

1.  I added a section at the end of his personality concerning his sexuality (yes, he likes women...alot.)

2. Added a small bit about his reverence for Etherus, the fire god of excess and desire.

3. ANOTHER name change.  ;)

Ready for comment/approval.
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« Reply #16 on: April 25, 2008, 05:13:24 AM »

Ok, One approval should be enough so I'm moving you back down :)
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« Reply #17 on: March 12, 2009, 02:09:36 PM »

I bumped Amahad for a minor revision to his spells. The CD was created before Fox developed the Firebolt spell, a smaller version of the fireball, and I changed the CD to reflect that. Amahad is capable of casting firebolts using his staff as a focus rather than the more complicated fireball. I feel it fits his skill level better.

Comments/re-approval is welcomed.  ;)
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« Reply #18 on: March 24, 2009, 03:45:33 AM »

Bump...

Any approvals my way? I just made a small change. Shouldn't be too hard.  grin
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« Reply #19 on: March 24, 2009, 05:39:11 AM »

Sorry, Amahad! For some reason I'd thought I'd looked at this already, but I think I mixed you up with Sammy! ;)

Read it again, and everything seems alright. Since the edits were minor I'll move you back down. heart
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« Reply #20 on: November 12, 2009, 03:37:32 AM »

Brought up as Requested.  :D
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« Reply #21 on: November 12, 2009, 10:44:54 PM »

All done. Made some small revisions colored YellowThumb up
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« Reply #22 on: November 13, 2009, 05:21:09 AM »

I've read through your changes, and don't see anything in them that raises a concern for me. I also skimmed through the previously approved information, and can't see anything there either. Here's my approval for you!
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« Reply #23 on: November 14, 2009, 05:24:51 AM »

Thanks Dek. I removed the coloring. Its ready to go back down if you please.  Thumb up
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« Reply #24 on: May 04, 2010, 11:51:09 AM »

Retrieved as requested
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« Reply #25 on: November 08, 2010, 08:43:10 AM »

Bumping this up. I forgot I had it up for edits.  buck
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« Reply #26 on: November 16, 2010, 09:42:51 AM »

Ok, edits are done and ready for comment. Colored Orange.

- Added some history concerning the Everbright cult.

- Revised Araevin's origins in that he is 1/4 elf instead of half (half-elves are very rare considering elves and humans do not interbreed often)

- Changed his mother's origin a cleric of Etherus

- Removed the orcen hatred, since that makes no sense being a part of the cult involves being around Volkek-Oshra

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« Reply #27 on: November 17, 2010, 11:16:57 AM »

The way I see it, your weaknesses aren't balanced with your strengths any more, now that you have removed his prejudice towards orcs.

The reason I see them as unbalanced is because your remaining weaknesses (which are minor weaknesses that only concern his abrasive personality and lack of maturity) don't stand up very well to the fact that he is a highly educated aristocrat, and a highly trained fire mage. This is all further augmented by the fact that he is rather good looking, which partially negates your two social weaknesses, so I would suggest that you think of something else for a weakness.
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« Reply #28 on: December 06, 2010, 04:48:30 AM »

Truth be told, it is hard to find adequate weaknesses to balance a mage. What I have done for Araevin is balance his magic, looks and intelligence with a host of personality weaknesses that outweigh whatever his looks and magic can gain him. He is a superficial, vain and flighty person who never achieves any emotional satisfaction from anything other than his magic. He is a power monger with enemies who would love to see him brought down. I added a weakness of fickleness, but I won't consider adding weaknesses just for the sake of it. What I have befits the concept. 
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« Reply #29 on: December 09, 2010, 05:47:24 AM »

For one, the fact that he has enemies isn't going to rear it's head very often. His good looks also detract from the initial affects of his abrasive personality, and even though you do have a concept going here, some other stipulation needs to be made for you to RP with this character.

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