Tharoc Wargrider/Ashz-oc Orcs/Adventurer

[Simonne Miller]

Yesh. If you ever wondered why I rarely develop entries... it's because I spend so much time in here. I have... oh, 14 character? I lost count somewhere around ten Now shoo, we're not supposed to chat in your CD. So go finish it so that we can comment!

[Tharoc Wargrider]

If someone could take a quick look at this and tell me if it's ok so far, I'd appreciate it.

I haven't yet filled in the history section as I want to create a story-like entry for this. Do I need to put anything in there just yet?

[Simonne Miller]

Like I said, high time for bed for me. Just one smallish thing that I can point out already: we ask that Strengths and Weaknesses are explained in two or three sentences, how much of a strength/weakness they are and exactly how the help or hinder him, that kind of thing

[Garret Arroway]

Hey Tharoc,
     Glad to see you finally made your way over to this side of things. I give a helpin’ hand in the familiar area as I can on this side. Now (workin’ on a vacation geessh) I’m gonna tear your familiar section apart … I mean help you build up your familiar section, *takes a look at Tharoc’s familiar section* even though its not much of a familiar section yet. Opps, I shouldn’t have said that. Anyways, here are my comments.

     - Alright, first off you need to tell us more about Valkree. How tall is your warg at the shoulder? How long from tip of nose to tip of tail? About how much does it weight? What does it look like? It is lean? Muscular? Overly so *for either*? What color is it? (Just addin’ that question in.) How does it behave? Does it live up to the image people create? It is hostile toward others or friendly? Or is it reserved, waitin’ for its owners judgment? All there things and more develop your familiar and the size of your animal and temperament of the creature helps in role playing it. The fact that you have a ‘dangerous animal’ as a familiar makes this section all the more important.

     - I know that your history is still in the works, but I figured I’d mention it so you don’t leave it out. You should explain how you acquired your warg, at about what age you got it, how you trained it and other information you might deem relevant. You might also want to mention how it is a descendant of Vakra the Black, how you know, and why any of its ‘spawn’ was allowed to live if it terrorized the people.

     - Finally I’d like to mention that havin’ a warg mount should be considered a strength. If the warg prevents you from doing certain things or there is a down side to havin’ it as a companion, that might count as a weakness. Even though this doesn’t fall under ‘familiar section’ I just thought I’d point this out. We ask that you explain your strengths and weaknesses in a couple sentences. For your strengths, explain how they help your character. For your weaknesses, explain how they hinder your. *Grumbles cause I spent ten mintues thinking how to word the last part of this point to find its always been mentioned ... Geessh Garret read!*

     Anyways, that’s all I’ve got for now, thought I’ll probably be back to tear it apart ... I mean help you out again later. Any if you hadn’t already figured it out, Garret is still Garret on this side of things. Wish you good luck with your character and familiar. Enjoy your stay on this end.

Garret

[Kelodin the Outcast]

Tharoc, mate! It's Nsiki, over from the Dev board! We need to adventure soon, either with Kelodin or Nsiki, Kelodin just needs to get approved first

[Tharoc Wargrider]

Yo, Nsiki, how's it hanging, dude!

I set off with great gusto with my CD for Tharoc, but a sick supervisor at work means I've had to take on his work as well as my own, and things have got a little delayed, I'm afraid.

I just need to create a history for him, which is swirling very loosely around in my head, but it's got a little longer than I'd expected and I don't know when I'll have time to write it out properly.

I've got several projects on the go over on the dev side that really do need my attention first, but then I'll be back to finish Tharoc off.

[Tharoc Wargrider]

Just bumping this in preparation for me finishing it!

Whaddyamean, at last?

Also, it'll be easier for Garrett to find when she comes to rip it to pieces.

[Kalína Dalá'isyrás]

Good to see you poking your head back here! Hopefully Garret, Azzy, and Altario can keep you coming back to this corner of the world enough.

[Azhira Styralias]

Woo! Glad to see you back, old buddy. I would  if you finished this CD.

[Altario Shialt-eck-Gorrin]

We could use nets to trap him here.  and maybe a stick or two...

[Tharoc Wargrider]

Ahhh, the old net and stick ploy, eh?

Personally, I prefer the traumatic amputation of both lower extremities with a large sword method. Has em rooted to the spot every time!

Ha, ha....rooted to th.......he, he........oh, suit yerselves.

[Tharoc Wargrider]

Right, I've made a start on re-vamping Tharoc. I haven't included his history yet, but it will definately be in there within the next two or three days.

However, please feel free to give comments/suggestions on what you see so far.

And you'd better start drawing straws to see who gets to take me on my first adventure...................

[Miraran Tehuriden]

Oh you bloody Orc!

Now i feel compelled to finish up my Miraran makeover as well! (Did you know i started out as a Helcrani fire mage, on both sides of the Disk?) (Yes, RPG-side is the Netherworld, i am certain of it!)

[Tharoc Wargrider]

From Helcrani fire mage, through Vikh trouble-maker, and now Dwarven whatever Darbul is.......what are you playing at?

[Miraran Tehuriden]

Darbul is a Trumarim rune-mage

I'm going for intangibility Tharrie dear, you cant catch someone if you dont know what they will look like... or what height their head will be at

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