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Author Topic: Rhia of the R'unorian Isles/Blaar'kr/Troubadour  (Read 12709 times)
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Nox Echiiscuan
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« Reply #45 on: September 05, 2008, 02:38:16 AM »

I only have one nitpick for you on the history:

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She still makes these visits, though because she travels more widely now, (mostly out of R'unor) they are usually only once or twice a year.

That's all. ^_^

Once you make those changes that I pointed out here and previously, then I'd be happy to give you your first approval.

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« Reply #46 on: September 07, 2008, 12:59:19 PM »

Thanks, Miss Nox! heart

Titles- Thank you especially for all these wonderful suggestions! They each are a definite possibility.

Big legs- Oops... My apologies; I meant for "feet" to be where "legs" are. blush Must have been typing during a brain spasm... Sorry about that...

Hair length-
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It is normally the length of her elbow lying straight down against the side of her body.
I mean that when her elbow is lying straight down against her body, her hair can be compared to that length. Sorry, poor choice of words. Any suggestions or possible other length relations?

Once again, many, many thanks to you, Miss Nox. Note: would I put up the "First approval received" icon? I believe I am ready for more comments and suggestions.
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« Reply #47 on: September 07, 2008, 01:04:00 PM »

;)   I put up the First Approval icon when I give it to you, which will be right now. Also, your elbow usually comes down to your waistline when laying flat down against the body. So "waist length hair" would work. ^_^

And, by the way, here is your:

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« Reply #48 on: September 08, 2008, 09:04:58 AM »

Thank you, Miss Nox! (For both things..) heart
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« Reply #49 on: September 08, 2008, 10:09:28 AM »

Other than your lack of a title, everything looks good to me! grin

~Second Approval~
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« Reply #50 on: September 08, 2008, 10:23:06 AM »

YAY RHIA!!!  hug
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« Reply #51 on: September 08, 2008, 11:15:46 AM »

I just want to say congrats, Rhia! It took awhile, but you finally have a CD worthy of a title. Well done!  :D
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« Reply #52 on: September 09, 2008, 12:30:22 AM »

Thank you all! hug

I am inserting my newly-chosen title as of... in a few minutes.

Much gratitude, thanks, and warm feelings to you all!

(And this may not be my last post in Rhia's CD but I just wanted to go a bit dramatic right now. Those durn approvals have given me a heady feeling.)

EDIT: Okay. My title will arrive in a little while. Not in a few minutes.

SECOND EDIT: Done.
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« Reply #53 on: September 10, 2008, 04:36:18 PM »

Titled and Archived
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