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Author Topic: Seth Ghibta,Kasumarii/ Azhorhrian, Guide and Courier  (Read 6276 times)
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Nox Echiiscuan
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« Reply #15 on: July 29, 2008, 08:34:33 PM »

Hmm. I'm going to poke around in your CD, see if I can fix your coding for you.
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Mannix
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« Reply #16 on: July 29, 2008, 08:46:24 PM »

Err, Nox, I think some was meant to be green for the changes.
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Nox Echiiscuan
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« Reply #17 on: July 29, 2008, 08:52:39 PM »

Of that, I was completely aware, Mannix. But I my eyes simply weren't up for the task of picking through her entire CD for absolutely all stray bits of coding that she might have had. It's rough to do, you know. But, it's alright, because I'm certain she integrated all of my comments.

Anyway! Seth, I read and re-read and re-re-read your CD again. To me, everything looks to be in order. So, I'm pleased to give you a:

Pet First Approval Pet

Yay! This is actually the very first approval I've given at all since I've become a CDmod. How nifty is that? Your's and mine both. :P

Bobspeed,
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« Reply #18 on: July 29, 2008, 08:56:10 PM »

Oh, sorry Nox. And congrats Seth.
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Simonne Miller
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« Reply #19 on: July 29, 2008, 09:17:04 PM »

The explanations for your Strengths are a bit short, but then they kinda speak for themselves, so here's a second approval :)

(oh, just one small thing. It's spelled 'darkpriest', not 'darkpreist' :))
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seth ghibta
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« Reply #20 on: July 29, 2008, 09:57:41 PM »

thanks very very much everyone, youve all been really helpful! grin grin grin
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Twn Arerwn
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« Reply #21 on: July 30, 2008, 04:48:08 AM »

I would like to see the Strengths defined a bit more than they are now. They are numerous and the character is fairly young, so some clarification would really help for me to decide if this is ready for a title. You're getting close Seth! <3

This in noway removes your present approval's. Just a wee-bit of polishing before being titled. Nice work Seth.
~Sincerely~
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« Reply #22 on: July 31, 2008, 03:45:00 AM »

yeah sure, i can see it is a bit imbalanced. ive deleted one, and put restrictions on the others, i think it should now be fairly realistic, any input welcome.
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Elyr Fsamr
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« Reply #23 on: August 01, 2008, 01:14:12 AM »

I'm gonna put the second approval icon back up, as Twen didn't want this to cancel your approvals, just wrap something up before giving you a title. So now that you've fixed those things, we should call her back.
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« Reply #24 on: August 01, 2008, 02:07:28 AM »

Well after your clarifications of strengths my only recommendation is to age the character a bit. The strengths as defined are a bit much for someone of 22 years. I would ask that you strive for mid to late twenties, once that is addressed, I'll title and archive you. Beautiful work Seth! heart
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« Reply #25 on: August 01, 2008, 06:04:54 PM »

seth is now 27 years old :)
again, thank you everyone for your input, this is my 1st rpg character and youve made it very easy and fun to make. Thumb up
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« Reply #26 on: August 02, 2008, 06:39:37 AM »

You are approved and ready to play, once you have a title for your character I'll add it to your account and archive this. You must have a title before joining a story.
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seth ghibta
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« Reply #27 on: August 02, 2008, 11:48:50 PM »

god i'd completely forgotten about titles; what about "Erratic Itinerant"?
i quite like that one. cool
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