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Author Topic: Elise / Aeolrhan / Aspiring Scholar  (Read 4906 times)
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« Reply #15 on: September 26, 2008, 09:14:50 PM »

Thanks - the age thing was confusing me a little! I've gone for a little under 28 in terms of experience. I've made the other changes you suggested as well.

So .... 5th time lucky?  Rolling
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Kalína Dalá'isyrás
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« Reply #16 on: October 03, 2008, 10:35:44 PM »

Alrighty, first things first. You are not balanced. You have strong strengths and wobbly weaknesses. Give us a couple of good weaknesses to really balance her out.
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« Reply #17 on: October 04, 2008, 03:18:42 AM »

It's a fair cop, guv!  LOL

I've removed the agility and artistry strengths, and added what I consider to be quite a big (but fun to RP, hopefully!) weakness, in green for your reading pleasure.  :)

Hopefully that evens things out some.
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« Reply #18 on: October 04, 2008, 04:28:23 AM »

You didn't have to remove anything, just add more to help balance them out, hun :p
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« Reply #19 on: October 04, 2008, 09:25:20 AM »

Ah, well... I think I kind of like her better now, to be honest. So now I'm ready for more feedback!  azn
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« Reply #20 on: October 05, 2008, 09:49:36 PM »

I'll tell the mods to check this CD for possible approval. :)
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« Reply #21 on: October 06, 2008, 05:28:19 AM »

I would agree that this CD is ready for an approval. Some of the sections are a bit shorter than I would prefer...but overall, it is a worthy first CD. I do like the Religion section. Those are rare nowadays and I think should be seen more.  ;)

Nod First Approval! Nod
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« Reply #22 on: October 06, 2008, 05:31:15 AM »

I see nothing wrong so I'll give it a Second Approval. Remove the coloring please for the admins once they come along. Good luck in stories.  grin

(*@ Azhira - So says the cosmo/religion person on the other side of things :P*)
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« Reply #23 on: October 06, 2008, 06:21:00 AM »

Yay! Thanks, guys. I've removed the colouring for you.
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« Reply #24 on: October 06, 2008, 01:58:32 PM »

And titled. Moving this to the archives.
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