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Author Topic: Phlegah Sphirn / Volkek-Oshra / Apprentice Metal Crafter  (Read 9331 times)
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« Reply #45 on: December 29, 2011, 05:43:52 AM »

Brought up as requested, also changed the status to work in progress :)
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« Reply #46 on: December 29, 2011, 06:45:57 AM »

Thank you Irid

Ok then ... made the following changes ...

1) Upped her age to 21

2) Had her proficiency in the 2nd last level 1 spell, 'Glowing hands' increased, and had her (unhappily) learning 'Sparkling Stream'.

3) Added an extra paragraph to her history section, as she has taken to travelling around Santharia.

All changes in orange. The red that's in there is to help identify the spells.

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« Reply #47 on: December 31, 2011, 04:22:12 AM »

Looks good to me. I approve of the magic changes. This looks like it's ready to go back into the archives to me.
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« Reply #48 on: December 31, 2011, 05:13:51 AM »

Thank you Rayne. I've removed my editing colours
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