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« Reply #75 on: August 13, 2009, 04:12:31 PM »

Thankyou! :)
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« Reply #76 on: August 13, 2009, 04:31:15 PM »

All unwanted color gone, I think.
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« Reply #77 on: August 13, 2009, 11:55:08 PM »

Alrighty! Congratulations dear! Titled and Archived.
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« Reply #78 on: August 29, 2009, 10:36:41 AM »

Brought Up as Requested.
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« Reply #79 on: August 29, 2009, 10:53:33 AM »

Ok, that didn't take long. I gave it a quick once-over, and fixed some tiney, tiney grammatical and spelling errors. I also changed my title, if that's ok, and put the proper name for my horse, as Alt (thankyou) so kindly pointed out. So if you please, take a quick look, and let's get this CD rearchived!
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« Reply #80 on: August 29, 2009, 06:22:01 PM »

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Opinions of religion: Sylvia was brought up to believe that all religion is rubbish, odd for one who was brought up with an elven background. She has formed her own ideals that the world just simply is, some things go beyond out understanding, and one should not question these things. She does not take too kindly to anyone trying to force their religion on her and will promptly walk away, or tune them out.
Why has she abandoned the faith of her heritage? You say she has, but not why.

Opinions of music: Sylvia enjoys stopping at numerous taverns to listen to music. Her favorite genre of music is classical, because of the flowing nature of it and how it represents life to her. Life continues to flow on and on, awing many with its numerous changes and beauties before it comes to either a gentle, or a loud, spectacular end, just like a classical song. She will gladly pay any bard a fair price to play a classical tune.
Santharia doesn't exactly have "genres" of music yet, so perhaps explain "classical" without the term, as this can also be a broad term.

Opinions of magic: Sylvia has always been interested in magic, but has never been given the opportunity to learn it. She finds it very fascinating and understands its potential to be used for good. She plans to eventually attend the academy at Ximax one day to quench her curiosity, and to decide if she will pursue a path of magic before resuming her job as a bounty hunter.
I don't understand the last part of the last sentence.


Even if you are doing grammar cleanups, colouring any major changes is appreciated.
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« Reply #81 on: August 30, 2009, 10:03:51 AM »

Ok thankie for the comments Kali, and I have finished intergrating them. Now, any more comments, suggestions from anyone? Feel free! If not...activate rearchivization mode. grin
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« Reply #82 on: September 05, 2009, 08:15:57 AM »

Sylvia, I've just got three small comments for you prior to me giving you an approval ...

1/ Opinions of religion: Sylvia was brought up to believe that all religion is rubbish, odd for one who was brought up with an elven background. The reason for this, is that, after her father's death, her mother lost faith in all of the gods.

Why did her father's death result in her mother losing faith in all of the gods? I think that needs to be explained further ... at the moment it just reads as though its been tacked in ... and I know you can do better than that, Sylvia. :D

2/ Opinions of magic: Sylvia has always been interested in magic, but has never been given the opportunity to learn it. She finds it very fascinating and understands its potential to be used for good. She plans to eventually attend the academy at Ximax one day to quench her curiosity. If she did this, and she found a way to make a living with this talent, she would abandon her job as a bounty hunter and pursue a career that allows her to express her true nature.

I would just like to suggest a slight rewording in that last sentence for you to consider ... instead of 'If she did this ...' consider 'If she studied magic ...'

3/ You've mentioned under the 'Opinions of music' that she 'enjoys stopping at numerous taverns to listen to music.' Yet, I note that there is no mention of this in the history section ... as it is something that she enjoys doing, I'd like you to describe at least one instance of this happening in her history ... it doesn't need to be long ... just a short paragraph would be sufficient. :D

Attend to those, and I'll give you an approval ... I'll just go in and change your icon to the !.
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« Reply #83 on: September 05, 2009, 09:01:59 AM »

There we go! All finished. I hope all is satisfactory! :) Opened to approvals and comments! Thumb up :P
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« Reply #84 on: September 05, 2009, 10:49:15 AM »

Thanks for attending to those things, Sylvia, it all looks fine to me, so I'll give you a First Approval!
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« Reply #85 on: September 05, 2009, 10:54:13 AM »

Yay! Thanks! It goes a lot faster once you've been through it before. :D
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« Reply #86 on: September 09, 2009, 12:24:26 PM »

Go ahead and remove the colour. We can get ya in and out here.

Everything seems to be in order Second Approval
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« Reply #87 on: September 12, 2009, 06:30:04 AM »

All done! grin I think I got all of the nasty evil color out of my CD that was barring it from the most esteemed archives.  ;) There you go. Feel free to send it off whenever!
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« Reply #88 on: September 16, 2009, 10:00:17 PM »

Retitled and Archived
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