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Author Topic: Glandiaer Silverwind/Elf Tethinrhim/Wild Boar Hunter  (Read 8006 times)
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« Reply #15 on: October 07, 2009, 05:49:50 PM »

I've returned it to the pencil for you, Glandiaer.
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« Reply #16 on: October 08, 2009, 12:06:39 PM »

Everyone who has been modifying my character i thank you today i had a little time but i only had a little so i got to the end of the stengths. grin Thanks again will try to be done by Sunday
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« Reply #17 on: October 08, 2009, 04:14:24 PM »

Hi Glandiaer

Was just looking through, the CD's and now i'm wondering, dont you have to colour the changes you made, just a thought. :D
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« Reply #18 on: October 08, 2009, 05:08:43 PM »

Julian makes a good point, Glandiaer. Please colour any further changes you make from this point onwards. You can choose whatever colour you want ... provided it isn't white. :D
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« Reply #19 on: October 09, 2009, 12:36:31 PM »

All people who have helped me. I am sorry i didn't highlight all that i changed. I didn't because i just finished what i did then looked through and noticed what you wrote sorry cry I did highlight a few things though. Sorry for making life hard on you.
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« Reply #20 on: October 09, 2009, 03:43:16 PM »

Its not a major problem, Glandiaer, just something to keep in mind and try to do from now on :)
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« Reply #21 on: October 10, 2009, 06:04:23 AM »

is this all that you wanted me to fix?  grin grin grin grin grin azn Huh? cool :D :P ;) :)
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« Reply #22 on: October 10, 2009, 06:39:55 AM »

You've messed up your tags in the CD it looks like (the bits in [square brackets]?) particularly the italics tag [with a/ before the I in it] and the two [messed up B tags] towards the beginning. Fix that up and I'll see what I can't do about eviscerating this.
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« Reply #23 on: October 10, 2009, 10:50:42 PM »

i don't know exactly what you are talking about but i think i do did i do what you wanted Huh?
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« Reply #24 on: October 10, 2009, 11:26:07 PM »

Just something quick while I have time. The Tethinrhim elves have specific hair and eye color trates. Hair color is a rich auburn(red) and eye color is hazel. I suppose green eyes would work, as it is closely related to hazel, but the blonde hair might not so much. Just a quick little bit.
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« Reply #25 on: October 10, 2009, 11:30:06 PM »

thanx i'll fix that
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« Reply #26 on: October 10, 2009, 11:32:06 PM »

is that better
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« Reply #27 on: October 11, 2009, 06:49:12 AM »

You might want to change that from Aururn to Auburn for starters. I promise you I'll give the CD a full look within today, so you can hold me to that if you want to. Just PM me if I forget.
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« Reply #28 on: October 11, 2009, 10:46:19 PM »

ok dane thanks for everything
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« Reply #29 on: October 11, 2009, 11:03:16 PM »

One thing I've seen is the following

FamiliarHis only familiar is his war horse whose name is Rochir. The horse is extremely large and fast. The horse is a dark black color and was given to him for being the general of his army.

You really need to go into a lot more detail than this about his warhorse.

Almost like a mini CD. Include details like:
Breed:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
History:

Also, the way I read your familiar section is that you are suggesting that you were given the horse because you are the general of the army. I think that 'General' would be included as a character with too much power/influence. So, please try to describe him in a different way to being General of the army. Maybe he performed a valued service for the General ... saved someone's life for example ... and out of gratitude he was given the warhorse. Just a thought for you to consider.
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