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« Reply #15 on: March 12, 2010, 07:21:21 AM »

Ok, thank you all for the comments on the wealth issue. I'll try to change it into something else.
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« Reply #16 on: March 12, 2010, 07:41:00 AM »

Modifications complete. Changed wealth weakness to claustrophobia. Thanks!
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« Reply #17 on: March 14, 2010, 06:47:57 PM »

bumping, as I haven't gotten a reply in two days.
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« Reply #18 on: March 14, 2010, 07:14:16 PM »

The rules for the CD forum asks you to wait for three days before rebumping CDs, Klyff. Please be patient.

Thank you
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« Reply #19 on: March 15, 2010, 01:08:24 AM »

Actually, it looks pretty good to me. I believe he is balanced and has everything it needs.

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« Reply #20 on: March 15, 2010, 05:04:44 AM »

ah sweet! I didn't think it would be that fast, but ok, works for me!
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« Reply #21 on: March 15, 2010, 06:29:59 AM »

Hi Klyff!

Just a few minor things.

1. You say that you developed strength, but with a lack of food? If you were starving, you would grow the opposite. You'd be weaker, not stronger. If you are a hunter, you hunted for food, right?

2. One possible weakness is the inability to speak Tharian or even Kuglimz. You are from an elven tribe and would only speak Styrash (elven tongue). You would have to learn to speak the language of the humans such as Tharian or Kuglimz. As an elf, you wouldn't be able to speak to other humans right away. Maybe you speak bad Kuglimz instead?
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« Reply #22 on: March 15, 2010, 07:54:14 AM »

Thank you, Malexia. I added hunting to the description for food, and that would increase his strength as he searched and fought. I am not sure if I would like to add bad speechto one of his weaknesses, one for I think I have enough weaknessess to balance the strengths already, and two I don't think that is much of a real weakness, as the average elf peasant probably would not know how to speak those languages, just as an average human peasant wouldn't have the ability to speak styrash. Thank you!
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« Reply #23 on: March 15, 2010, 10:35:56 AM »

Consider that if you are planning to learn cards from a Kuglimz, you need to know how to speak to him. For you, unless you never stray away from your tribe, then not knowing other languages is a weakness. Unless you find a way to learn somehow. And you can never have enough weaknesses!
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« Reply #24 on: March 15, 2010, 11:01:14 AM »

Well then, I would prefer to have my character partially fluent in Kuglimz and/or Tharian. Would that be considered a strength? If so, then I shall have to put a weakness in lack of those languages. But, if it is not so, I think I have a balanced character already, so I don't need to, right?
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« Reply #25 on: March 15, 2010, 11:40:41 PM »

If you are fluent in human languages as an elf, it is considered a minor strength since most other elves in your tribe do not have the same skill. Your strengths are balanced enough to afford another weakness.
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« Reply #26 on: April 16, 2010, 10:30:33 AM »

Hey everybody, I'm still here. Im sorry for dropping out like I did, but apparently my internet bill hadn't been paid, so next thing I know, internet is completely shut down. Im gonna try and get to updating my CD soon, but I just wanted to let everybody know I didn't just get up and go. Talk to you all later.
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« Reply #27 on: April 18, 2010, 02:20:41 PM »

Malexia, as a quick question, I dont think I can afford putting a strength saying he is fluent in kuglimz. Could I possibly put in my history, as this merchant was a traveling one, probably in a caravan with a number of people, that he would be fluent in styrash or some other language that most elves know? Rather then Klyff being fluent in Kuglimz?

Just an idea, and, if nothing else, Im gonna have to put in another strength and find another weakness
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« Reply #28 on: April 18, 2010, 10:55:11 PM »

When it comes to languages, you don't have to be fluent in one or the other. It is ok to be average or to know a few phrases here and there to get by. That is considered more of a minor strength and does not count as a full blown fluency. Unless you grew up within another tribe or spent many years with them, you really wouldn't know their language well enough to converse easily. You could say that Klyff is fluent in a little bit of Kuglimz so that if he ever visited a Kuglimz town, he could speak basic phrases and questions but that's all.
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« Reply #29 on: April 19, 2010, 06:26:36 AM »

alright then, thanks, I guess Ill add then. Hoperfully that might get me approved!  :D
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