Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr/Remusian/Army Trainer(Ex-Soldier)

[Malexia Vendu]

First Approval!



If Mr. Altario would give a second approval, you'll be good to go. I'd rather him make the final pass on this one.

[Altario Shialt-eck-Gorrin]

Going out for a few hours.  Will look at the edits when I come back.

[Altario Shialt-eck-Gorrin]

I'll give a second approval, but I do have a caveat. 

You still have him described thus:

As mentioned, footwork was a large part of Athviaro's style, and his talent has slipped, although he is still recognised as one of the best in the city.

In a pure theoretical way, I can let this slip past.  He has the knowledge.  On the other hand, in a true fight, he would be at a severe disadvantage, even to a modest opponent.  He simply would not have the mobility needed.  This isn't a measure of skill, simply a fact of life.  So, if he were in a true fight, and not a spar with trainees who are not trying to take off his head, he'd be pooched.

[Sekros Degrivok]

Altario's right his adversary would simply need to walk around to his backside, and give him a good jab in the back.

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

I would say that he can still turn his body and I have changed the entry to show his disadvantage against groups of enemies. He would probably try to have his back to a wall, or pull his legs around to turn.

So, Altario, was that an 2nd Approval or not?

Athviaro

[Altario Shialt-eck-Gorrin]

Yup.

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

 

Thanks so much Altario and Malexia for the approvals, as well as Sekros and Kylff for commenting and helping me get this done as quickly as possible!

Here, have a bunny each:

Altario:
Malexia:
Sekros:
Kylff:

Athviaro

[Kalína Dalá'isyrás]

Please remove the colour and excess statements from your CD. Once that is done, I will hand out a title and send this to the archives to get you on your way.

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

It's done, Kalina

Here, have a bunny too:

 

Thanks again to everyone.

Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr

 

[Kalína Dalá'isyrás]

Titled and Archived! Best of luck

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