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Author Topic: Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr/Remusian/Army Trainer(Ex-Soldier)  (Read 5672 times)
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Malexia Vendu
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« Reply #15 on: March 18, 2010, 01:22:40 AM »

First Approval!

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If Mr. Altario would give a second approval, you'll be good to go. I'd rather him make the final pass on this one.
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« Reply #16 on: March 18, 2010, 02:33:28 AM »

Going out for a few hours.  Will look at the edits when I come back. :)
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« Reply #17 on: March 18, 2010, 04:56:05 PM »

I'll give a second approval, but I do have a caveat. 

You still have him described thus:
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As mentioned, footwork was a large part of Athviaro's style, and his talent has slipped, although he is still recognised as one of the best in the city.

In a pure theoretical way, I can let this slip past.  He has the knowledge.  On the other hand, in a true fight, he would be at a severe disadvantage, even to a modest opponent.  He simply would not have the mobility needed.  This isn't a measure of skill, simply a fact of life.  So, if he were in a true fight, and not a spar with trainees who are not trying to take off his head, he'd be pooched.
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« Reply #18 on: March 18, 2010, 05:42:13 PM »

Altario's right his adversary would simply need to walk around to his backside, and give him a good jab in the back.
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Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr
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« Reply #19 on: March 18, 2010, 08:01:09 PM »

I would say that he can still turn his body and I have changed the entry to show his disadvantage against groups of enemies. He would probably try to have his back to a wall, or pull his legs around to turn.

So, Altario, was that an 2nd Approval or not?

Athviaro
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« Reply #20 on: March 18, 2010, 11:59:03 PM »

Yup. :)
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« Reply #21 on: March 19, 2010, 01:17:53 AM »

 Thanks! Thanks! Thanks! Big Grin Number 1

Thanks so much Altario and Malexia for the approvals, as well as Sekros and Kylff for commenting and helping me get this done as quickly as possible!

Here, have a bunny each:

Altario: Pet
Malexia: Pet
Sekros: Pet
Kylff: Pet

Athviaro
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« Reply #22 on: March 19, 2010, 01:52:01 AM »

Please remove the colour and excess statements from your CD. Once that is done, I will hand out a title and send this to the archives to get you on your way.
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« Reply #23 on: March 19, 2010, 02:44:16 AM »

It's done, Kalina

Here, have a bunny too:

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Thanks again to everyone.

Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr

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« Reply #24 on: March 19, 2010, 03:14:56 AM »

Titled and Archived! Best of luck :D
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