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Cherri Rowandyn
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« Reply #15 on: January 03, 2006, 06:20:23 PM »

Thanks, that seems to clear things up for me.  I missed that quote, :guilty  , or else would have kept my mouth shut  :biggrin .  One more (of many to come I am sure) question tho.  What does this section mean in regards to The City of Elving:  "The city, despite many human myths, is a place of calm, renweal and healing. It is where the Quaelhoirhim come to recover their cr'll, and to find direction and purpose if they lack it, for indeed it is home to many who are wise."

I know I probably get on everyone's nerves with all these quotes, but why do the Quaelhoirhim have to recover their cr'll?  Just asking.  Thanks everyone for being patient with me and not scaring me off.  Hopefully my CD is getting closer to being titled.  I re-edited it so it needs another looking over please.  

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« Reply #16 on: January 03, 2006, 08:15:23 PM »

Hey, did I hear... Never mind :)  

Anyway, just ignore the quote. Magic used to work a bit different and that's where it came from. Just sleeping and resting will recover your spellcasting abilities.

Oh, and don't feel guilty for asking those question. Currently the only way to learn to understand magic is the hard way.

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« Reply #17 on: January 04, 2006, 01:59:23 AM »

So what I have in my CD as far as magic is good to go?


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« Reply #18 on: January 04, 2006, 03:05:23 AM »

Well, some suggestions:
* give your magic section the title magic (easier to find)
* state what spells she uses most and why

Although you can't do anything wrong with just listing all spells (normally you're going to know even more of them) you aren't going to use all of them all the time. The ones you use most you will be better at.

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« Reply #19 on: January 04, 2006, 06:23:23 AM »

Done as you suggested.  I hope I didn't list too many spells that she has taken an extra interest in.  Let me know if I did.  Oh and does anyone know right off if I can post a link in my sig to my personal page since it has nothing to do with Santharian?  It's nothing spectacular, just mostly some pics I like and an intro to my original character.  I can't remember what I read about links to other sites.  I will take it out for now, so if I shouldn't have had it in the first place, I apoligize now.


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« Reply #20 on: January 04, 2006, 08:57:23 AM »

I think it's fine as long as you don't link to other similar sites. I don't think there's anything against a personal page.

The picture in your sig is probably too big though.

*looks it up*

Ah, maximum resolution is 350 x 70, so yours is too high.

Edit:

As for your spells, I don't think that will be a problem, but maybe take a new paragraph for each one? It's easier to have an overview that way instead of such a huge chuck of text.

Also, you can use your spells outside battles as well (although people will look funny at you and possibly avoid you if you do it in non-magically inclined cities). Like one of the most used spells of my firemage is one to heat up his tub of water :p  

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« Reply #21 on: January 05, 2006, 05:38:23 AM »

Okay fixed sig and as far as my CD is concerned I broke the large chunk into smaller paragraphs.  Formatting can always be changed, I was more worried about context, but I would like it easy to read and scan through.  Anything else needing some changes or editing?  I know she can use her spells outside of fighting, but right now I just want her to be using her magic in school and not freaking people out.

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« Reply #22 on: January 05, 2006, 07:18:23 AM »

I should have posted the complete rules for sigs:
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Maximum size: 350 x 70
Maximum file size: 30 KB
No animated GIFs!
Maximum of 4 text lines (including empty lines)!


Schools generally will go towards the more peaceful applications of magic (but you can still learn the more battle orientated ones). Mostly since their isn't really a need for battle mages. Santharia has been peaceful for many years now.

Anyway, magic looks fine now.

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« Reply #23 on: January 05, 2006, 09:12:23 AM »

Fixed, umm now who needs to look over my CD and what do I need to do?  Just wait?

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« Reply #24 on: January 08, 2006, 05:49:23 PM »

A magic expert will have to check your magic, but the rest of the CD is fine. You have your first approval.;)  

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Over rock and under tree,
By caves where never sun has shone,
By streams that never find the sea.

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« Reply #25 on: January 08, 2006, 11:27:23 PM »

Quote:
Anyway, magic looks fine now.

Two posts above you Erian ;)


Unless she changed something, her magic is ok.

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« Reply #26 on: January 09, 2006, 03:28:23 AM »

Are you kidding, change something???  I have had a hard enough time and took up enough of your time to do that.  Yay, my first approval!!!!  Okay, who is second??!!!

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« Reply #27 on: January 10, 2006, 09:18:23 AM »

Hello Cherri, welcome to Santharia! I see you are on the verge of your title so I shall not comment on this CD as it seems only a mod can give the yay or nay here. But I do have one minor suggestion before you become titled. You may wish to change the title of the thread back to just the characters name. The mods know by the icon that you only need one more approval. So if it goes into the approved character section it will be listed under your charcters name only ..... without the -awaiting mod approval attachment.

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« Reply #28 on: January 10, 2006, 09:26:23 AM »

Thanks for the suggestion.  Fixed it.  What do you see wrong with my CD?  I thought I had gotten all the bugs worked out, but if there is something wrong pls let me know.  I am anxious to begin to rp, but I want it to be right.  I can't really change anything anyways since I have already had a mod approve it.  To change it afterwards would be wrong I think.

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« Reply #29 on: January 10, 2006, 09:51:23 AM »

I saw nothing wrong with your CD Cherri, plus I know Erian and Marv. They would not give approvals without things being done properly. So goodluck with your title and I hope to see you on the RP boards in the near future.

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