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Author Topic: Aster Goldsign// Kiingerim Dwarves// Musician  (Read 4601 times)
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Sylvia Palinor
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« Reply #15 on: July 14, 2010, 07:41:30 AM »

Hey there Aster! This looks pretty good. The only issue that I have to raise is your strengths and weaknesses section. After looking fairly close at them, I have come to the conclusion that you are a bit unbalanced. This has nothing to do with the amount of either strengths nor weaknesses, but the quality and potency of them. I would suggest either adding a minor weakness of your choosing, or removing one of your more minor strengths, though I would recommend adding a weakness as all of these strengths seem very sound and well-integrated. Once you have done this, I will come by again for a second approval. Thumb up grin
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« Reply #16 on: July 14, 2010, 03:53:04 PM »

So hows that??? I added a new weakness, I just couldn't get rid of any of my strengths :D
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« Reply #17 on: July 14, 2010, 10:32:20 PM »

Alright, I am satisfied that you are balanced, so......


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« Reply #18 on: July 15, 2010, 06:06:21 AM »

Congratulations Aster .... remove your editing colours so that Kalina or Altario can title you and move you to the archives :D
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« Reply #19 on: July 15, 2010, 03:37:52 PM »

And colour is gone
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« Reply #20 on: July 23, 2010, 03:36:20 PM »

"tiny bump" :)
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« Reply #21 on: July 23, 2010, 07:19:52 PM »

Titled.  Congrats. :)
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