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Ergolach Flowerdew
Erratic Bard
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Re: Ergolach Flowerdew/Erpheronian/Bard
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Reply #45 on:
November 15, 2010, 08:21:15 AM »
Thanks. I've tried to improve everything you wanted me to... I'm not sure if it's clear enough but I hope so.
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Ergolach Flowerdew
['ɛɾɡolax 'flʌuəɾdjʉ]
Alexandre Scriabin
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Re: Ergolach Flowerdew/Erpheronian/Bard
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November 15, 2010, 08:28:08 AM »
While it wasn't apparent to me at first, I can see now that you meant that he was deceptively charming, in the changes you made according to these comments of mine:
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People mostly like him? He is courteous and charming? In the rest of your personality section, you describe him as irresponsible, carefree, lascivious, immodest, atheist, and as an alcoholic who randomly touches people, and that he follows momentary whims and absolutely hates being bored. So, as you can see, the part that I quoted just doesn't add up with the rest of it.
Also, I went over the rest of your editing work and am satisfied with it, so you now have my approval. Congratulations!
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Ergolach Flowerdew
Erratic Bard
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Re: Ergolach Flowerdew/Erpheronian/Bard
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November 15, 2010, 08:30:57 AM »
Thank you very much! It has made my day (although it's night over here
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Ergolach Flowerdew
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Malexia Vendu
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Re: Ergolach Flowerdew/Erpheronian/Bard
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November 15, 2010, 08:37:07 AM »
I am satisfied.
2nd Approval.
Please remove colors before titling!
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Ergolach Flowerdew
Erratic Bard
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Re: Ergolach Flowerdew/Erpheronian/Bard
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Reply #49 on:
November 15, 2010, 08:39:04 AM »
Yay! Thank you very much!
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Ergolach Flowerdew
['ɛɾɡolax 'flʌuəɾdjʉ]
Ergolach Flowerdew
Erratic Bard
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Re: Ergolach Flowerdew/Erpheronian/Bard
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November 15, 2010, 08:55:41 AM »
Colours are removed.
O frabjous day! Callooh! Calley!
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Re: Ergolach Flowerdew/Erpheronian/Bard
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November 15, 2010, 08:58:19 AM »
And titled! Congratulations
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