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Author Topic: Phyth Glenfield, Centoraurian Mercenary  (Read 9948 times)
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« Reply #30 on: April 30, 2006, 09:19:23 AM »

I see absolutely nothing wrong with your CD. His strengths and weaknesses are close to being balanced yet with his age I do not see them as overly unequal. I shall give you your first approval, but I would ask for the next mod to look over the S&Ws and confirm or deny my thoughts. ~goes to put the +~

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« Reply #31 on: April 30, 2006, 11:37:23 AM »

I still do not think the character is balanced. most of his weaknesses revolve around him having a horse, and the horse is itself a strength. I think a little more severe weaknesses should be brought in before the character is titled. But that is just my opinion/



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Phyth Glenfield
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« Reply #32 on: April 30, 2006, 11:01:23 AM »

If you think my CD doesn't have enough strong weaknesses, I can add some more. While not having anything to do with his horse.

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Edited by: Phyth Glenfield  at: 4/30/06 3:02
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« Reply #33 on: April 30, 2006, 02:01:23 PM »

Then please do Phyth:)  

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« Reply #34 on: May 01, 2006, 05:24:23 AM »

I've put on a couple more weaknesses. If it's not enough I can think of a few more. Thanks.

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« Reply #35 on: May 01, 2006, 06:03:23 AM »

Your character is pretty close to balanced i would think, one more Weakness would do it. But make sure it is a weakness that can be roleplayed....something that would actually affect your playing.



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« Reply #36 on: May 01, 2006, 11:15:23 AM »

I have added another weakness. I hope it will work. If not, I can add another. Thanks for helping me.

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« Reply #37 on: May 01, 2006, 11:33:23 PM »

Actually - I would add a bit more about the bad hearing in the right ear. That can be a severe weakness, especially as a fighter. Expand on it just a little bit more.

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« Reply #38 on: May 02, 2006, 12:38:23 AM »

I have edited my CD. Thanks to all who helped.

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« Reply #39 on: May 09, 2007, 12:35:03 PM »

And done. I was going to just elaborate on the horse, but I figured it wouldn't be good if I described the horse more than Phyth, so I added a bit more to the appearance, clothes, and personality. Everything is good to go on my end.
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« Reply #40 on: May 09, 2007, 06:00:45 PM »

All right, I don't see anything wrong with what you've added and, concerning the rest of the CD, I'm assuming that the mods gave you a title for a reason when you first created this character, so I'll move you back to the archives :)
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