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Author Topic: Oliver Sail/Centoraurian/Pirate  (Read 9336 times)
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« Reply #30 on: September 02, 2013, 03:16:01 AM »
Ok thanks for allowing me to do Centoraurian! Ok so I described beard and hair style and color as well. Also, I fixed that part about Marty and made is past tense. Thank you so much for helping me! Let me know if you see any more errors but I've read through it multiple times and didn't see anything else (but then again I've probably read it so many times I probably missed some things).
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« Reply #31 on: September 02, 2013, 04:59:44 PM »
Oh, I wouldn't request a tribe change unless there was something VERY major. You were never in danger of being asked to change your tribe. :) It was a mere curiosity of mine; nothing more.

Everything checks out with me, though I would request that, in play, you separate speakers by paragraphs. I understand the desire for concision here, but in play, it may be confusing.  :)

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Hopefully Altario or Seh will be along soon do to the honors. I am actually a rather inept CD moderator, with no skills at moving things about, titling, etc.  buck  My apologies!
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« Reply #32 on: September 02, 2013, 11:40:59 PM »
Congrats Oliver! Titled and archived. ^_^
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« Reply #33 on: September 05, 2013, 08:31:50 PM »
Brought up as requested. ^_^
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