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Author Topic: Brynjar Grau-eck-Shanno / Eanian / Warlord  (Read 10103 times)
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« Reply #15 on: February 01, 2013, 12:28:41 PM »

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She smacked him, claws snagging on the wool of his summer jerkin. Hot, her acrid breath was on his skin, around his gloves. Pressure on his scalp, but only hair trapped beneath his bulk. Her teeth snapped at his hands, at his neck and he cowered beneath her, praying to Necteref and Zundefor for a swift death with his javelin so far from his grasp. Blood sluiced around his fingers, and that's when he felt it. Something hard prodded his arm, and as the she bear stood on her haunches, he snatched it from under himself. It was a blade of white bone that had slipped from his boot when he fell.


Well done.  I'm content with this and will give my approval. :)
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« Reply #16 on: February 01, 2013, 11:54:26 PM »

Huzzah! One approval down, one to go.
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« Reply #17 on: February 13, 2013, 03:20:19 AM »

Good to read a CD that uses the word "ethnocentrism".  azn

I'm not sure of the rules of CD approval anymore - am I, as a 'greenie', allowed to approve? If so, I do! If not, I do so anyway. I read this in some detail on the Dev Board (where I'm Shabakuk - hi there, Brynjar!), and have read this version here, and think this character is balanced and playable. It's also extremely well-written.

It's time to approve this, I think. It's been languishing with 'one approval' for 10 days.

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« Reply #18 on: February 15, 2013, 05:42:17 AM »

Ethnocentrism is such an under-appreciated word, it needs more love.

This character description has been wallowing with a single approval for quite awhile now, time to go drop a note in the 'Character Descriptions in Waiting' thread.

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« Reply #19 on: February 16, 2013, 07:47:52 PM »

Titled and Archived.  Congrats.  :D
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