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« Reply #15 on: 22 February 2009, 19:18:06 »
Pull my bell when you're done researching for those pollinator insects/birds, i'll have some final comments then.
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« Reply #16 on: 24 February 2009, 21:03:55 »
*smiles as she cotimplates the many meanings of "Ringing His/Her Bell"*

Insects researched and added siting the Flitter-Twitch, the Malise, and the Orm as the main polinators.

Color removed.

And paragraphs broken into bite size chunks.
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« Reply #17 on: 29 April 2009, 21:15:08 »
Edited.  Decided I didn't like the orgins tale.
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« Reply #18 on: 30 April 2009, 22:16:38 »
Just a couple of things to look into from scanning the entry, Gwai:

- For some reason parts of the entry have a bunch of words sticking to each other like glued... See e.g. the Territory section where you have strange words like Varcopasthe, rangealong, Manthariaand...

- In Myth/Lore the Santharian Province of Manthria (note spelling!) turned into the "Mantharia Providence" ;)

- These lines of the poem also don't seem proper English to me:

You knot me with your fingers,
whenever they over my body lingers.  huh
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« Reply #19 on: 14 December 2009, 16:49:20 »
Edits made for Art's suggestions. Spelling and Capital Usage corrected. Removed reference to legends since it did not actually refer to anything. Approved & Blarrowed.
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