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[Shabakuk Zeborius Anfang]

Val, the quotes are really great! Your entry gains new harmonies and counterpoints with every edit. I'll drop by for a uri-check well before the next update, unless somebody else is quicker.

[Drasil Razorfang]

As female larvae, freshly hatched from its egg, this moth will leave its pebble-like shell behind to head for its last meal in the trees.

This sentence confuses me.

For the research section, I'm a bit confused.  Are you submitting the entry under the alter ego of the researcher listed?  If so could you make that clearer?  If not, could you please provide more information about the researcher and what he contributed to the study of these bugs.

Also, for future reference, it would be amazing if you would re-use this researcher or one that already exists.  We already have an abundance of once-mentioned researchers on site and it would be nice to re-use some of these rather than create more.  This isn't a critique of your entry by any means, but just a suggestion I'd like to make to you (and all other bestiary developers) for future submissions.

Overall, this entry is brilliant and I'm ready to blarrow it once you clarify the researcher and straighten out that sentence.  Well done Val!  I look forward to reading your next beast. 

[Val O´Neil]

Okays. I fixed the confusing sentence you pointed out and added another poem (yay?). ^_^ Blarrow away, if you like.

[Drasil Razorfang]

You didn't address my comment about the researcher Val.  Please look at my previous post again. 

[Altario Shialt-eck-Gorrin]

  Loved this, Val.  Was a wonderful read.  Unfortunately, I have no suggestions for improvement.  In my estimation, you have hit all the points.

[Val O´Neil]

Woops! I forgot to add in the bit of elaboration in the Researcher section, but that's rectified now. Thanks for the comment Drasil. I've used this researcher before, and I plan on using him plenty more for the butterflies to come.

Thank you, Altario!  ~

[Drasil Razorfang]

Good enough for me.

Congratz on a job well done.  I look forward to your next submission.

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