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« on: 20 November 2009, 06:15:16 »

i made up a thing called a birchegg for the mosoly entry, and decided i liked the idea enough not to ignore it. so here it is, a wasp that makes edible galls (it's advised you remove the grub first.)

 Wopse, Iknuin
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Though often maligned for its ability (at least among the males) to deliver a painful sting, the Wopse (known as Iknuin in Nybelmar) is remarkable, for an insect, in the devoted care and attention it shows to its offspring, who might be described as the most closeted and pampered young creatures in all Santharia. A by-product of this curious life-cycle is also coveted by sentient races – the nursery-gall which Wopses build for their young is edible, and a precious delicacy to many, under the slightly romanticised name of “Birchegg”. The connection between the strange growths which appear in birch trees, offering welcome treats to those who find them, and the tiny, fragile insects which create them, has been made only recently. Many people would tuck into their meal of fried Birchegg with a good deal less relish if they knew it as the creation of insects, and the home of a small grub.

   Appearance
The fly itself is easy to ignore, at only a couple of nailsbreadths long, and so fragile and slender that it seems to be made of glass- indeed, it is largely transparent. Catching one and holding it up to the light reveals the innards to an astonishing degree. In shape it is obviously more like a malise or groshmite than a typical fly – the abdomen is separated from the thorax by a very long, narrow waist, and the whole shape of the fly is excessively graceful and slim, never exceeding a couple of grains in girth.

The fly is, in fact, heaviest at the head, which is taken up by a pair of oversized, near globular eyes in a delicate shade of pinkish gold. The antennae are long and delicate; males have feathered antennae similar to those sported by some moths, whilst females have simple stalk-shaped antennae. Aside from the eyes, close examination also reveals that the head of the female is adorned with a formidable pair of mandibles, for digging out nest holes in birch bark. Males have useless stubs in place of the thick, barbed apparatus of the female.

In general, males are considerably smaller than females, although they have longer, broader wings to aid their travels in search of mates. Females are comparatively clumsy fliers with smaller, though still functional wings. The wings of both genders are transparent, glassy structures fairly typical of most flies. The Wopse has very long legs, which it waves blindly when it flies, as if trying to slow itself down. Perhaps this is an attempt to protect its fragile body, and, in the case of the female, the long ovipositor, often mistaken for a fearsome stinger. The female’s ovipositor is about half as long again as her body, and quite brittle, so she must take great care in flying. The male Wopse does have a stinger, a fairly potent one, but it’s very small and tricky to notice, so it’s no surprise that the female’s menacing looking ovipositor is often mistaken for a weapon.

The larvae of the Wopse are very rarely seen alive, as they spend their entire lives before pupating secluded inside the birchegg-galls that serve as nurseries. They are nothing much to look at – fat little grubs, growing up to five nailsbreadths long (much larger than their parents, like many such insects), with pulpy white flesh, and large mandibles capable of giving a sharp nip. The eyes are the only feature they share in common with their parents – bulbous and goldish-pink. What these grubs might use their eyes for is a mystery, as they spend this early part of their lives in complete darkness.
        
   Special Abilities
Male Wopses have an extraordinary sense of smell- using their long, feathered antennae they can follow the scent of a female for nearly a stral. They also seem to be sensitive to colour, and use the colour of the trees around them, and of other Wopses they meet, to navigate and distinguish between denizens of different birch species. They also have small, needle sharp stings, loaded with a mild venom which causes a painful swelling and inflammation. These effects can remain for over an hour, though it rarely has more severe effects than this. In some individuals, the sting appears to cause a more severe effect: prolonged pain and stiffness. Anything more serious than this is extremely rare. The Wopse can sting many times without sustaining harm, though they cannot produce very much venom at a time, so often the potency of stings will be lessened if an individual has had to fend off many intruders recently.

The male’s sting is nearly invisible to the naked eye, and thus in the popular imagination it is often confused with the ovipositor (egg-laying-tube) of the females, which resembles a very threatening stinger, half as long again as her body. This tube is used to deposit her eggs deep inside the bark of a birch tree, once she has used her strong mandibles to gnaw a hole therein.

Perhaps the most mysterious and weird of the Wopse’s abilities, however, is their strange talent of secreting something into the wood of a living birch tree which causes it to grow into the soft, nutritious flesh of a birchapple, providing food and shelter for a growing grub. How they do this is a great mystery, though prominent alchemists have suggested that they somehow inject or secrete a chymical that changes the growth pattern of the tree, though some traditional hobbit explanations tend to talk of the Wopse taking advantage of growths which the tree produces anyway, like fruit.

   Territory
Wopses are found throughout the forested areas of Santharia and Nybelmar – they rely on healthy birch trees, but need little else, so they are found almost anywhere such trees will grow. It seems that there are slight differences between Wopses that use different species of birch. Those that feed on red birch, for instance, have a distinctive ruddy blush to their glass-like bodies and wings. Whether this helps the insects camouflage, or makes it easier for them to choose mates that subsist on the same kind of tree as themselves, is unknown, but it does make for a beautiful array of colourings among Wopses. Among the greatest strongholds of the insect are the moon hills in the Ehebion Peninsula, Nybelmar, where they are known as Iknuin by the Murmillions, and the Thaelon Forest of Northern Santharia.
    
   Habitat/Behavior
Wopses rarely venture below the canopy level of the trees in which they make their homes, and indeed only the males travel around with any regularity. Life for an adult Wospe revolves entirely around caring for their young – they have a very short adult life; only around a couple of months, and so they tend to spend this time in frantic activity. When the larvae pupate, and haul themselves out of their birchegg cocoons, they can pause only to let their new-grown wings uncurl and dry in the open air, before they must begin the task of preparing for parenthood. Adult Wopses do not feed – they will have spent their larval lives fattening on the rich flesh of their birchegg, and the jaws which adorn the female will be used strictly for excavation. Males have no jaws to speak of at all.

   Diet
As mentioned above, adult Wopses cannot eat; they subsist entirely on the reserves they build up as larvae. Wopse grubs, on the other hand, do very little besides eating. They chew the oily, nutritious flesh of the birchegg, eating at such a rate that after a few months the tree cannot replenish the flesh as quickly as it is eaten, and the grub will hollow out its birchegg entirely. It is now that it will pupate, having exhausted its food supply.

   Mating
Females, on hatching, will begin looking for a suitable nest site, usually by walking along the branches, but they will fly to other trees if they can’t find suitable nest sites on foot. When they find a good spot – usually the fork of a strong branch, where the bark is thick and smooth, and there is no trace of rot or scarring to the tree – she will begin chewing through the bark. She uses her large jaws to work through the tough outer layer of the bark, until she has broken through into the softer under layers.

Males take to the air as soon as their wings are ready for flying, following the scent released by a female who has already settled on a good nest site. Often all the bircheggs for strals about will hatch in a short time, so hundreds of Wopses will seem to appear from nowhere.

When the males find a female, they land and inspect her carefully, brushing her all over to ensure that she is definitely receptive, female, and alive. Once this is ensured, the pair will mate, and the female will lay eggs in the hole she has made, using the full length of her ovipositor to secure the eggs right under the bark. Once eggs are laid, both male and female will begin working carefully to build the nest. The male obsessively cleans away every speck of dirt, moss or debris from the area, whilst the female begins trimming through the bark in a wide circle all around the nest-hole. She bites down through the bark, but leaves it intact, separated from the rest of the bark. Any twigs growing in this area will be bitten off as low as possible. After this, the female’s job is done. With nothing more to achieve in her adult life, and no means of feeding herself (her jaws may be impressive, but there is little in the way of gut to back it up), most of her body is given over to energy storage and egg production. She will soon die.

The male, however, still has work to do. He will guard the nest with his stinger as the section marked off by the female swells and thickens, eventually growing into a large, melderapple-sized protuberance, with smooth, glossy bark and a slightly spongy texture. Somewhere inside, the grub will grow, feeding on the flesh of his cocoon, whilst its father protects it, slowly starving as the birchegg grows. By the time the birchegg is fully developed, with bark hard enough to defend the grub against most attacks, the adult male will have starved to death.
  
 Usages
The obvious aforementioned use of Wopses is in harvesting the galls in which they raise their grubs – known as bircheggs. The birchegg, if cut when fairly young, will have a great deal of soft, oily, and pleasantly sweet flesh, and only an egg or a tiny grub that needs removing – on balance, a great deal less trouble than the various seeds and pips that fill so many real fruits. Of course, the bark must be removed, as it is too leathery and woody to be edible. The flesh that remains is delicious raw, if fresh, but generally is cooked to make the best of the delicacy, or to allow it to keep for longer. Fried in milchbutter, sliced thin, a birchegg is a meal that few would refuse, even if they might usually disdain to eat the nursery intended for a fat little Wopse grub. Otherwise it can be dried, baked into little cakes, or even mixed and heated with milch, sweetbean extract and liquor to make a popular winter drink known among hobbits as Wopsegrog.

The birchegg remains edible as long as the grub lives inside it, but for obvious reasons, the longer the grub lives, the less flesh and the more bug there will be available. Seasoned birchegg harvesters generally learn to tap the gall lightly, and to listen to the sound it makes – a certain hollowness is discernible as the grub gets bigger. If the gall is really far gone, of course, it’ll be squidgy to the touch, and this kind is never picked. A birchegg clearly guarded by a male Wopse will be prized, as it will almost certainly be young enough to be worthwhile. Whether the birchegg is worth a sting or two is debatable.

Due to the Wopses’ extraordinary synchronicity in hatching out, there are generally too many galls in one place at a time for them all to be harvested, ensuring that enough Wopses survive each generation to breed the next. That said, in areas where trees are scarce, or the insects are persecuted for their stings or the belief that they spoil the galls, they often decline dramatically.
  
 Myth/Lore/Origin
Wopses have had an understandably mixed reputation amongst the sentient races – on the one hand, they are undeniably pretty, in a fragile way, and provide the delicious birchegg galls to eat. On the other, they sting, and, according to most traditional views, lay their eggs in young birchegg galls, so that a fat grub spoils the potential meal. It must be admitted that there’s something unpleasant in the idea of eating “fruit” that has housed, and likely will still house, a Wopse grub.

In fact general consensus is largely still of the opinion that bircheggs are a natural “fruit” of birch trees, and the presence of Wopse grubs doesn’t come until after the gall has grown. Though various accounts have disproved this idea, it is still popular, for understandable reasons: who wants to eat something, however delicious, that has grown from the secretions of an insect? The Wopse doesn’t even have the popular association with industriousness and productiveness that the malise enjoys: honey may be the made from regurgitated nectar, but at least you rarely find a fat grub sitting in the middle of a jar.

Sadly, this means that Wopses are often killed on sight, with the aim of protecting the very harvest that they provide. In areas where this takes place regularly, people will often find the insects so reduced that there are no galls to harvest.
It’s partly because of this that the places where the Wopses seem to flourish best are those where people generally understand and accept that they are the originators of bircheggs.

The Helmondshire Halflings are the main benefactors of the flourishing Wopse territory in Thaelon forest. Among Halflings they are unique in accepting enthusiastically the Wopse as a valued food producer. Indeed, they are believed to be the first people to use bircheggs as food, and even the word “Wopse” is reputed to be a Halfling invention. There are stories among the Helmondshire people that the Wopse fell in love with the birchtree long ago, and that, once in a thousand thousand years, a birchegg will grow on an especially besotted birchtree, and hundreds of Wopses will labour to let it grow enormous, the size of a child, until eventually a baby pendrowe hatches from the great gall. Of course, most people nowadays have heard a little about real pendrowe, and so the story has lost a lot of its credence.

In the Ehebion peninsula of Nybelmar, a story with some notable similarities is told; there is a folk tale, popular among the shepherds and woodsmen who scratch a living in the moon hills, that goes thus:

Once, long ago, when the tallest of these trees was a sapling at the feet of its parent, there was a girl called Iknuin, who lived in these very woods. She was a beautiful creature, slender as a birch tree and so pale in skin and hair that the light shone straight through her. She wandered in the woods for many a year, and saw no-one, so nobody asked her where she’d come from, and nobody asked her where she was going. And she was happy as dreaming.

Then one day a young lord came by her, warg hunting in the woods and having no luck. He saw a girl as bright as glass, flickering through the trees, and he, being a cruel man and callous as they come, said to himself “well, there’s a pretty quarry, far prettier than any warg I’ve ever seen, why don’t we just have her?” and he chuckled to himself, and he chased her down, and he took her back to his big cliff top Drak, and made her his wife.

Iknuin was unhappy in the cliffs, away from her trees and dappled shade and soft leaf litter. She was scared of her new husband and miserable to think that the child she carried would have to live its whole life in such poor company. So she waited until a moonless night, and she slipped out, and nobody saw because she was so pale as to be invisible, in the solemn darkness which Mari wrapped round her. She ran and ran, and cut her feet on the rock, and she ran some more, and skidded on scree and loose earth, and then the sun came up, and she still ran, and she could hear they had missed her and were coming to catch her once more. So she ran harder. She darted between the trees, and the leaf litter of needles and birch leaves gloved her tiny glass feet, and muffled their sound, and soothed their cuts and bruises. But she couldn’t slow down, for she could hear them coming with horses and dogs. Her husband was keen to keep his prized glass girl.

She ran until she was near to dead, and had reached an ancient part of the forest, where the trees were strange and everything seemed slower, wiser. She crashed down onto the ground, then, and yellow birch-leaves fountained up all around. She could feel herself falling into Mari’s long arms, and all she could do was to look up into the crooked boughs of the great old birch tree above her, and beg it to take her baby and hide it. She barely knew if she said it out loud or in her dream. The huntsmen arrived soon after, and picked up Iknuin and took her back to the cliff top Drak, and her husband, who was angry as ever he had been. He ordered that her feet be cut off, so she couldn’t run away again. And they were.

So Iknuin sat in her rooms with her legs swinging above the floor, and she prayed to Mari, with her blood and tears and her bitter, glassy-sharp rage. And she told Mari all the suffering she had endured, and of her hope placed in the great birch tree so far away, and of her burning desire for revenge. And maybe Mari listened, and maybe she didn’t.

Back in the forest, the great old birch tree was swelling like a pregnant woman. A lump grew on its trunk, the size of a clenched fist. Weeks passed, and it grew to the size of a man’s head. Months passed, and it grew to the size of a child. Years passed, and it grew bigger and longer, until eleven years had gone by. The birchegg lump was the size of a girl, and the bark on the gall was stretched tight as a drum.

On that morning, eleven years to the day since she’d run away and been dragged back, Iknuin asked her husband if she might have some breadcrumbs. Seeing no way that she could try to kill him or escape with those tools, he consented. Iknuin thanked him graciously, and took the breadcrumbs out to the little window, high in the cliffs, and scattered them on the sill, and waited. By and by, a corbie came to dine on the breadcrumbs. When it had finished its meal, Iknuin said, “Don’t go just yet, sir! Could I ask you a favour?” The corbie saw no great reason to say no, and he thought Iknuin very pretty in a sad kind of way, so he said, “Go on, then.”

“In an old, older than ancient part of the forest“—she pointed out the window, where trees stretched into the distance— “there is a birch tree with a girl growing inside, ready to hatch out. If you were to fly there and peck her free, and lead her back here, you can have carrion enough to feed you and any of your friends all autumn.”

And the corbie thought this a very good bargain, so he flew off with nary another word.
By and by, he came to the great old birch as he’d been directed, and he pecked and pecked at the great swelling until it split, and a slender foot poked out. He looked at the foot, with taloned toes as sharp and bright as glass, and he thought, “Strange”, and he kept on pecking. A slender hand burst out, and began to tear the bark away, and he looked at the silvery skin and needly pointed fingers, and he thought to himself, “Strange indeed”, and he carried on pecking. Finally between them, they ripped the gall open, and a girl fell out, though a far from normal creature she was. Her skin was silver glass, and inside you could see her heart beating, red as heartbreak. Her fingers and toes were sharp as shards of shattered glass, and in one hand she held a long rapier, which dripped with a slow venom, smelling sweet as pinesap. Her eyes were like mirrors, and her hair was pinkish gold. She pushed herself to her feet and spat leaf-mould on the floor, and the corbie saw her teeth were barbed like thorn-bushes. [color=yellow“Well”,[/color] he said to himself, “There’s strange indeed and stranger still.” And then he shrugged to himself and puffed up his glossy black feathers, and said to her this: “Greetings, child, and welcome to the world. I bring word from your mother, who is trapped far off from here; she wants me to bring you back to her.” She looked at him with her mirror eyes, reflecting his beady black stare back on himself, and nodded. So he began the long flight back to the cliffs, and she followed, swinging her poisoned rapier like a child strolling in the forest. Which she was.

By and by, they came back to the cliff top Drak, and Iknuin’s child looked up at it and [/color]asked, “Does[/color] my mother live there, then?”

The corbie perched on a rock, and shrugged his black wings, and said, “Yes and no; she’s housed there, as you’d maybe house a goat or a pig, but I wouldn’t call it living, not really.” Iknuin’s child looked puzzled at this, and asked, “Doesn’t she like it?”

The corbie replied, “I doubt very much she likes it. Nor would you, I’ll hazard, if you were caught against your will by some cruel young lord, and made his bride, and kept locked up, far away from your home. That’s why she had you, I’ll warrant.”

“What d’you mean by that?”

The corbie laughed the short, hard laugh of carrion-eaters, who always get to laugh last. “Don’t you see? You’re not a normal little girl – look at that poisoned blade! Look at those claws! You’re a creature made for hurting people – a vengeance child. Unless I’m very much mistaken, your mother has asked you here solely so that you can run through her husband with that blade of yours.”

And that is what she did. And then she walked away, swinging her sword, and she never even said thank you to her mother who’d worked so hard to make her what she was.

The corbie and his friends feasted on the corpse of the cruel young lord, and were very pleased with the deal they’d made.

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« Reply #1 on: 20 November 2009, 12:08:30 »

*As is her custom, Azhira looks to see if any new development is included in the North....*  thumbup

*sees Nybelmar*  rolleyes

*comes away disappointed*  :(

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« Reply #2 on: 20 November 2009, 20:37:34 »

notes that wopses would need to be different to survive in the north...
bigger, for a start...
with communal galls?
that take up whole trees?
hmmm... a santharian name for hornets, anyone?
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« Reply #3 on: 21 November 2009, 02:22:58 »

Seth seth seth I love it I love it! As ever, it's imaginative and wonderfully written! The story at the end though... once more you perfectly evoke all the old stories of the world with restrained writing and your own wonderful imagination! Aura 1+!

I think wopses (or hornets ;) ) would fit in excellently in the north. They could be bigger and hardier and scarier overall, perhaps with a much stronger venom. Though I suppose they're too small for the venom to be harvested. Oh, could the galls be used for temporary decoration or paper lanterns or such? As terran galls can be quite beautiful, in their way.
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« Reply #4 on: 21 November 2009, 02:35:47 »

seth,

I have a bad habit of trying to steal everything for the North. I am shameless, actually.  :P If you don't (or can't) have wopse in the North, its ok. I give everyone trouble and most time am only teasing. It just seems that there is this invisible development line dividing North and South where concepts are one or the other but not both. Granted, I don't do much cross-developing into the South only because I don't know much about the South...

So please do not feel obligated to include the North. Its not required at all.
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« Reply #5 on: 21 November 2009, 04:54:11 »

Azhira, don't worry about it! it's given me an idea for a related bug - a hornet equivalent, santhed - that'd probly be a seaparate entry, as it gets more different from the wopse every time i think bout it. and i don't do enough in the north, i agree - i've not really done anything much since all the way back to the selkie.  want to make a giant snow hornet, with (love the idea, jenna) very pretty galls that all gell together to completely swamp trees, and some extremely interesting venom effects. evil
oh. i see a hiveling myth. >runs off to cackle and scheme...<
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« Reply #6 on: 11 December 2009, 22:01:41 »

Wopse, Iknuin
Categorization: bestiary>animals, smaller> insects> Iknuin

Though often maligned for its ability (at least among the males) to deliver a painful sting, the Wopse (known as Iknuin in Nybelmar) is remarkable in the devoted care and attention it shows to its offspring, who might be described as the most closeted and pampered young creatures in all Santharia. A by-product of this curious life-cycle is also coveted by sentient races – the nursery-gall which Wopses build for their young is edible, and a precious delicacy to many, under the slightly romanticised name of “Birchegg”. The connection between the strange growths which appear in birch trees, offering welcome treats to those who find them, and the tiny, fragile insects which create them, has been made only recently. Many people would tuck into their meal of fried Birchegg with a good deal less relish if they knew it as the creation of insects, and the home of a small grub.

Good overview, Great premise!

   Appearance
The fly itself is easy to ignore – only a couple of nailsbreadths long, and so fragile and slender that it seems to be made of glass- indeed, it is largely transparent. Catching one and holding it up to the light reveals the innards to an astonishing degree. In shape it is obviously more like a malise or groshmite than a typical fly – the abdomen is separated from the thorax by a very long, narrow waist, and the whole shape of the fly is excessively graceful and slim, never exceeding a couple of grains in girth.

The fly is, in fact, heaviest at the head, which is taken up by a pair of oversized near globular eyes in an astonishing shade of pinkish gold. The antennae are long and delicate – males have feathered antennae similar to those sported by some moths, whilst females have simple stalk-shaped antennae. Aside from the eyes, close examination also reveals that the head of the female is adorned with a formidable pair of mandibles, for use in excavating birch bark nest holes for egg-laying. Males have useless stubs in place of the thick, barbed apparatus of the female.

Males are generally considerably smaller than females, although they have longer, broader wings to aid their travels in search of mates. Females are comparatively clumsy fliers with smaller, though still functional wings. The wings of both genders are transparent, glassy structures fairly typical of most flies. The Wopse has very long legs, which it waves blindly when it flies, as if trying to slow itself down. Perhaps this is an attempt to protect its fragile body, and, in the case of the female, the long ovipositor, often mistaken for a fearsome stinger. The female’s ovipositor is about half as long again as her body, and quite brittle, so she must take great care in flying. The male Wopse does have a stinger, a fairly potent one, but it’s very small and tricky to notice, so it’s no surprise that the female’s menacing looking ovipositor is often mistaken for a weapon.

The larvae of the Wopse are very rarely seen alive, as they spend their entire lives before pupating secluded inside the birchegg-galls that serve as nurseries for them. In appearance they are nothing much to look at – fat little grubs, growing up to five nailsbreadths long (much larger than their parents) (Are most pupae larger than their adult/matured forms?), with pulpy white flesh, and large mandibles capable of giving a sharp nip. The eyes are the only feature they share in common with their parents – bulbous and goldish-pink in colour. What these grubs might use their eyes for is a mystery, as they spend this early part of their lives in complete darkness.
       
  Special Abilities
Male Wopses have an extraordinary sense of smell- using their long, feathered antennae they can follow the scent of a female for nearly a stral. They also seem to be sensitive to colour, and use the colour of the trees around them, and of other Wopses they meet, to navigate and distinguish between denizens of different birch species. They also have small, needle sharp stings, loaded with a mild venom which causes a painful swelling and inflammation, which can remain for over an hour, though it rarely has more severe effects than this.

The male’s sting is nearly invisible to the naked eye, and thus in the popular imagination it is often confused with the ovipositor (egg-laying-tube) of the females, which resembles a very threatening stinger, half as long again as her body. This tube is used to deposit her eggs deep inside the bark of a birch tree, once she has used her strong mandibles to gnaw a hole therein.

Perhaps the most mysterious and weird of the Wopse’s abilities, however, is their strange talent of secreting something into the wood of a living birch tree which causes it to grow into the soft, nutritious flesh of a birchapple, providing food and shelter for a growing grub. How they do this is a great mystery – the most likely explanation is that ,though prominent alchemists have suggested they somehow inject or secrete a chymical that changes the growth pattern of the tree, though some traditional hobbit explanations tend to talk of the Wopse taking advantage of growths which the tree produces anyway, like fruit.

   Territory
Wopses are found throughout the forested areas of Santharia and Nybelmar – they rely on healthy birch trees, but need little else, so they are found almost anywhere such trees will grow. It seems that there are slight differences between Wopses which use different species of birch. Those that feed on red birch, for instance, have a distinctive ruddy blush to their glass-like bodies and wings. Whether this helps the insects camouflage, or makes it easier for them to choose mates that subsist on the same kind of tree as themselves, is unknown, but it does make for a beautiful array of colourings among Wopses. Among the greatest strongholds of the insect are the moon hills in the Ehebion Peninsula, Nybelmar, where they are known as Iknuin by the Murmillions, and the Thaelon Forest of Northern Santharia.
   
   Habitat/ behaviour
Wopses rarely venture below the canopy level of the trees in which they make their homes, and indeed only the males travel around with any regularity. Life for an adult Wospe revolves entirely around caring for their young – they have a very short adult life; only around a couple of months, and so they tend to spend this time in frantic activity. When the larvae pupate, and haul themselves out of their birchegg cocoons, they can pause only to let their new-grown wings uncurl and dry in the open air, before they must begin the task of preparing for parenthood. Adult Wopses do not feed – they will have spent their larval lives fattening on the rich flesh of their birchegg, and the jaws which adorn the female will be used strictly for excavation. Males have no jaws to speak of at all.

   Diet
As mentioned above, adult Wopses cannot eat – they subsist entirely on the reserves they build up as larvae. Wopse grubs, on the other hand, do very little besides eating – they chew the oily, nutritious flesh of the birchegg, eating at such a rate that after a few months the tree cannot replenish the flesh as quickly as it is eaten, and the grub will hollow out its birchegg entirely. It is now that it will pupate, having exhausted its food supply.

   Mating
Females, on hatching, will begin looking for a suitable nest site, usually by walking along the branches, but they will fly to other trees if they can’t find suitable nest sites on foot. When they find a good spot – usually the fork of a strong branch, where the bark is thick and smooth, and there is no trace of rot or scarring to the tree – she will begin chewing through the bark. She uses her large jaws to work through the tough outer layer of the bark, until she has broken through into the softer under layers.

Males take to the wing as soon as their wings are ready for flying, following the scent released by a female who has already settled on a good nest site. Often all the bircheggs for strals about will hatch in a short time, so hundreds of Wopses will seem to appear from nowhere.

When the males find a female, they land and inspect her carefully, brushing her all over to ensure that she is definitely receptive, female, and alive. Once this is ensured, the pair will mate, and the female will lay eggs in the hole she has made, using the full length of her ovipositor to secure the eggs right under the bark. Once eggs are laid, both male and female will begin working carefully to build the nest. The male obsessively cleans away every speck of dirt, moss or debris from the area, whilst the female begins trimming through the bark in a wide circle all around the nest-hole. She bites down through the bark, but leaves it intact, separated from the rest of the bark. Any twigs growing in this area will be bitten off as low as possible. After this, the female’s job is done – with nothing more to achieve in her adult life, and no means of feeding herself (her jaws may be impressive, but there is little in the way of gut to back it up – most of her body is given over to energy storage and egg production) she will soon die.

The male, however, has yet work to do. He will guard the nest with his stinger as the section marked off by the female swells and thickens, eventually growing into a large, melderapple-sized protuberance, with smooth, glossy bark and a slightly spongy texture. Somewhere inside, the grub will grow, feeding on the flesh of his cocoon, whilst its father protects it, slowly starving as the birchegg grows. By the time the birchegg is fully developed, with bark hard enough to defend the grub against most attacks, the adult male will have starved to death.

   Myth/Lore/Origin
Wopses have had an understandably mixed reputation amongst the sentient races – on the one hand, they are undeniably pretty, in a fragile way, and provide the delicious birchegg galls to eat. On the other, they sting, and, according to most traditional views, lay their eggs in young birchegg galls, so that a fat grub spoils the potential meal. It must be admitted that there’s something unpleasant in the idea of eating something that has housed, and likely will still house, a Wopse grub.

In fact general consensus is largely still of the opinion that bircheggs are a natural “fruit” of birch trees, and the presence of Wopse grubs doesn’t come until after the gall has grown. Though various accounts have disproved this idea, it is still popular, for understandable reasons – who wants to eat something, however delicious, that has grown from the secretions of an insect? (What about honey???? grin) Sadly, this means that Wopses are often killed on sight, with the aim of protecting the very harvest that they provide. In areas where this takes place regularly, people will often find the insects so reduced that there are no galls to harvest.
It’s partly because of this that the places where the Wopses seem to flourish best are those where people generally understand and accept that they are the originators of bircheggs.

The Helmondshire Halflings are the main benefactors of the flourishing Wopse territory in Thaelon forest. Among Halflings they are unique in accepting enthusiastically the Wopse as a valued food producer. Indeed, they are believed to be the first people to use bircheggs as food, and even the word “Wopse” is reputed to be a Halfling invention. There are stories among the Helmondshire people that the Wopse fell in love with the birchtree long ago, and that, once in a thousand thousand years, a birchegg will grow on an especially besotted birchtree, and hundreds of Wopses will labour to let it grow enormous, the size of a child, until eventually a baby pendrowe hatches from the great gall. Of course, most people nowadays have heard a little about real pendrowe, from the elves of the Thaelon forest, and so the story has lost a lot of its credence.

In the Ehebion peninsula of Nybelmar, a story with some notable similarities is told; there is a folk tale, popular among the shepherds and woodsmen who scratch a living in the moon hills, that goes thus:

Once, long ago, when the tallest of these trees was a sapling at the feet of its parent, there was a girl called Iknuin, who lived in these very woods. She was a beautiful creature, slender as glass and so pale in skin and hair that the light shone straight through her. She wandered in the woods for many a year, and saw no-one, so nobody asked her where she’d come from, and nobody asked her where she was going. And she was happy as dreaming.
Then one day a young lord came by her, warg hunting in the woods and having no luck. He saw a girl as bright as glass flickering through the trees, and he, being a cruel man and callous as they come, said to himself “well, there’s a pretty quarry, far prettier than any warg I’ve ever seen, why don’t we just have her?” and he chuckled to himself, and he chased her down, and he took her back to his big cliff top Drak, and made her his wife.

Iknuin was unhappy in the cliffs, away from her trees and dappled shade and soft leaf litter. She was scared of her new husband and miserable to think that the child she carried would have to live its whole life in such poor company. So she waited until a moonless night, and she slipped out, and nobody saw because she was so pale as to be invisible, in the solemn darkness which Mari wrapped round her. She ran and ran, and cut her feet on the rock, and she ran some more, and skidded on scree and loose earth, and then the sun came up, and she still ran, and she could hear they had missed her and were coming to catch her once more. So she ran harder. She darted between the trees, and the leaf litter of needles and birch leaves gloved her tiny glass feet, and muffled their sound, and soothed their cuts and bruises. But she couldn’t slow down, for she could hear them coming with horses and dogs. Her husband was keen to keep his prized glass girl.

She ran until she was near to dead, and had reached an ancient part of the forest, where the trees were a little more than trees are usually. She crashed down onto the ground, then, and yellow birch-leaves fountained up all around. She could feel herself falling into Mari’s long arms, and all she could do was to look up into the crooked boughs of the great old birch tree above her, and beg it to take her baby and hide it. She barely knew if she said it out loud or in her dream. The huntsmen arrived soon after, and picked up Iknuin and took her back to the cliff top Drak, and her husband, who was angry as aver he had been. He ordered that her feet be cut off, so she couldn’t run away again. And they were.

So Iknuin sat in her rooms with her legs swinging above the floor, and she prayed to Mari, with her blood and tears and her bitter, glassy-sharp rage. And she told Mari all the suffering she had endured, and of her hope placed in the great birch tree so far away, and of her burning desire for revenge. And maybe Mari listened, and maybe she didn’t.

Back in the forest, the great old birch tree was swelling like a pregnant woman. A lump grew on its trunk, the size of a clenched fist. Weeks passed, and t grew to the size of a man’s head. Months passed, and it grew to the size of a child. Years passed, and it grew bigger and longer, until eleven years had gone by. The birchegg lump was the size of a girl, and the bark on the gall was stretched tight as a drum.

On that morning, eleven years to the day since she’d run away and been dragged back, Iknuin asked her husband if she might have some breadcrumbs. Seeing no way that she could try to kill him or escape with those tools, he consented. Iknuin thanked him graciously, and took the breadcrumbs out to the little window, high in the cliffs, and scattered them on the sill, and waited. By and by, a corbie came to dine on the breadcrumbs. When it had finished its meal, Iknuin said “don’t go just yet, sir! Could I ask you a favour?” the corbie saw no great reason to say no, and he thought Iknuin very pretty in a sad kind of way, so he said “go on, then.”

“In an old, older than ancient part of the forest-“she pointed out the window, where trees stretched into the distance- “there is a birch tree with a girl growing inside, ready to hatch out. If you were to fly there and peck her free, and lead her back here, you can have carrion enough to feed you and any of your friends all autumn.”

And the corbie thought this a very good bargain, so he flew off with nary another word.
By and by, he came to the great old birch as he’d been directed, and he pecked and pecked at the great swelling until it split, and a slender foot poked out. He looked at the foot, with taloned toes as sharp and bright as glass, and he thought “strange”, and he kept on pecking. A slender hand burst out, and began to tear the bark away, and he looked at the silvery skin and needly pointed fingers, and he thought to himself “strange indeed”, and he carried on pecking. Finally between them, they ripped the gall open, and a girl fell out, though a far from normal creature she was. Her skin was silver glass, and inside you could see her heart beating, red as heartbreak. Her fingers and toes were sharp as shards of shattered glass, and in one hand she held a long rapier, which dripped with a slow venom, smelling sweet as pinesap. Her eyes were like mirrors, and her hair was pinkish gold. She pushed herself to her feet and spat leaf-mould on the floor, and the corbie saw her teeth were barbed like thorn-bushes. “well”, he said to himself, “there’s strange indeed and stranger still.” And then he shrugged to himself and puffed up his glossy black feathers, and said to her this: “greetings, child, and welcome to the world. I bring word from your mother, who is trapped far off from here; she wants me to bring you back to her.” She looked at him with her mirror eyes, reflecting his beady black stare back on himself, and nodded. So he began the long flight back to the cliffs, and she followed, swinging her poisoned rapier like a child strolling in the forest. Which she was.

By and by, they came back to the cliff top Drak, and Iknuin’s child looked up at it and asked “does my mother live there, then?”

The corbie perched on a rock, and shrugged his black wings, and said “yes and no; she’s housed there, as you’d maybe house a goat or a pig, but I wouldn’t call it living, not really.” Iknuin’s child looked puzzled at this, and asked “doesn’t she like it?”

The corbie replied “I doubt very much she likes it. nor would you, I’ll hazard, if you were caught against your will by some cruel young lord, and made his bride, and kept locked up, far away from your home. That’s why she had you, I’ll warrant.”

“What d’you mean by that?”

The corbie laughed the short, hard laugh of carrion-eaters, who always get to laugh last. “Don’t you see? You’re not a normal little girl – look at that poisoned blade! Look at those claws! You’re a creature made for hurting people – a vengeance child. Unless I’m very much mistaken, your mother has asked you here solely so that you can run through her husband with that blade of yours.”

And that is what she did. And then she walked away, swinging her sword, and she never even said thank you to her mother who’d worked so hard to make her what she was.

The corbie and his friends feasted on the corpse of the cruel young lord, and were very pleased with the deal they’d made.

I really like this myth!


   Usages
The obvious aforementioned use of Wopses is in harvesting the galls in which they raise their grubs – known as bircheggs. The birchegg, if cut when fairly young, will have a great deal of soft, oily, and pleasantly sweet flesh, and only an egg or a tiny grub that needs removing – on balance, a great deal less trouble than the various seeds and pips that fill so many real fruits. Of course, the bark must be removed, as it is too leathery and woody to be edible. The flesh that remains is delicious raw, if fresh, but generally is cooked to make the best of the delicacy, or to allow it to keep for longer. Fried in milchbutter, sliced thin, a birchegg is a meal that few would refuse, even if they might usually disdain to eat the nursery intended for a fat little Wopse grub. Otherwise it can be dried, baked into little cakes, or even mixed and heated with milch, sweetbean extract and liquor to make a popular winter drink known among hobbits as Wopsegrog.

The birchegg remains edible as long as the grub lives inside it, but for obvious reasons, the longer the grub lives, the less flesh and the more bug there will be available. Seasoned birchegg harvesters generally learn to tap the gall lightly, and to listen to the sound it makes – a certain hollowness is discernable as the grub gets bigger. If the gall is really far gone, of course, it’ll be squidgy to the touch, and this kind is never picked. A birchegg clearly guarded by a male Wopse will be prized, as it will almost certainly be young enough to be worthwhile. Whether the birchegg is worth a sting or two is debatable.

Due to the Wopses’ extraordinary synchronicity in hatching out, there are generally too many galls in one place at a time for them all to be harvested, ensuring that enough Wopses survive each generation to breed the next. That said, in areas where trees are scarce, or the insects are persecuted for their stings or the belief that they spoil the galls, they often decline dramatically.



I like this too Seth!

A well-formed and well-executed idea.

All I really picked up was grammar, so fix these up and I'll blarrow this for you.

Well Done,

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« Reply #7 on: 12 December 2009, 01:18:13 »

brilliant, thanks Deci! i'll get straight on that. can't quite beleive i forgot about honey... buck
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« Reply #8 on: 12 December 2009, 06:43:50 »

So...About this venom. Could the whole stinger be harvested, including the venom sack, Do they lose their stingers like bees or are they able to perform multiple stings like a wasp? Can the venom be concentrated to make it deadlier? Could people have an allergy that makes a sting fatal? Am I ghoulishly obsessed with poisons toxins and venom's? Yes...yes I am. But aside from that... evil
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« Reply #9 on: 12 December 2009, 22:01:07 »

wopse venom is probably harvestable, if you caught one and removed the venom-sac, but not sure if it'd be worth it, as they don't produce much per wopse, and it's annoying and painful but you'd need tonnes to cause any real damage. allergies sounds plausible, but then why not just catch a wopse and let it sting them? if you want i'll drop a note into the usages, but it seems a lot of effort when there are other venoms available that'd work better.
all this said, i'm working on the northern version of the wopse, which is much bigger and and nastier. i was actually gonna give you a bell to ask if there's anything notably absent from Santharian venoms that you'd like to be evident in the "Vubuaz"?
so drop me a pm on that if you want. ;)
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Wopse, Iknuin
Categorization: bestiary>animals, smaller> insects> Iknuin

 Though often maligned for its ability (at least among the males) to deliver a painful sting, the Wopse (known as Iknuin in Nybelmar) is remarkable in the devoted care and attention it shows to its offspring, who might be described as the most closeted and pampered young creatures in all Santharia. A by-product of this curious life-cycle is also coveted by sentient races – the nursery-gall which Wopses build for their young is edible, and a precious delicacy to many, under the slightly romanticised name of “Birchegg”. The connection between the strange growths which appear in birch trees, offering welcome treats to those who find them, and the tiny, fragile insects [This is the first time you mention that this creature is an insect! Can you mention this in your firest sentence?] which create them, has been made only recently. Many people would tuck into their meal of fried Birchegg with a good deal less relish if they knew it as the creation of insects, and the home of a small grub.

   Appearance
The fly itself is easy to ignore – only a couple of nailsbreadths long, and so fragile and slender that it seems to be made of glass--indeed, it is largely transparent. [This is a run-on sentence! You have two independent clauses here, separated by a clause parsed off in dashes!] Catching one and holding it up to the light reveals the innards to an astonishing degree. In shape it is obviously more like a malise or groshmite than a typical fly – the abdomen is separated from the thorax by a very long, narrow waist, and the whole shape of the fly is excessively graceful and slim, never exceeding a couple of grains in girth.

The fly is, in fact, heaviest at the head, which is taken up by a pair of oversized, near globular eyes in an astonishing [You used this word in the last paragraph. Not everything can be astonishing! Perhaps there is another word you could use?] shade of pinkish gold. The antennae are long and delicate: males have feathered antennae similar to those sported by some moths, whilst females have simple stalk-shaped antennae. [I have changed the dash here to a colon. Dashes generally act like commas in that they indicate a break of some sort, but generally this break is not so severe as to justify a completely new sentence!] Aside from the eyes, close examination also reveals that the head of the female is adorned with a formidable pair of mandibles, for use in excavating birch bark nest holes [This is a "noun compound," and it's a little heavy. Can you break it up? "for digging out nest holes in birch bark" or something along those lines?] for egg-laying. Males have useless stubs in place of the thick, barbed apparatus of the female.

In general, males are generally considerably smaller than females, although they have longer, broader wings to aid their travels in search of mates. Females are comparatively clumsy fliers with smaller, though still functional wings. The wings of both genders are transparent, glassy structures fairly typical of most flies. The Wopse has very long legs, which it waves blindly when it flies, as if trying to slow itself down. Perhaps this is an attempt to protect its fragile body, and, in the case of the female, the long ovipositor, often mistaken for a fearsome stinger. The female’s ovipositor is about half as long again as her body, and quite brittle, so she must take great care in flying. The male Wopse does have a stinger, a fairly potent one, but it’s very small and tricky to notice, so it’s no surprise that the female’s menacing looking ovipositor is often mistaken for a weapon.

The larvae of the Wopse are very rarely seen alive, as they spend their entire lives before pupating secluded inside the birchegg-galls that serve as nurseries for them. In appearance [Because you have "look at," this phrase isn't needed. If you like it, you can probably get rid of "to look at."]they are nothing much to look at – fat little grubs, growing up to five nailsbreadths long (much larger than their parents, like many such insects), with pulpy white flesh, and large mandibles capable of giving a sharp nip. The eyes are the only feature they share in common with their parents – bulbous and goldish-pink in colour. [Goldish-pink is always a color!] What these grubs might use their eyes for is a mystery, as they spend this early part of their lives in complete darkness.
         
   Special Abilities
Male Wopses have an extraordinary sense of smell--using their long, feathered antennae they can follow the scent of a female for nearly a stral. They also seem to be sensitive to colour, and use the colour of the trees around them, and of other Wopses they meet, to navigate and distinguish between denizens of different birch species. They also have small, needle sharp stings, loaded with a mild venom which causes a painful swelling and inflammation. These effects can persist for over an hour, though it rarely has more severe effects than this. [You used the subordinating conjunction "which" twice in the sentence, so I turned one of your dependent clauses into it's own sentence in order to break it up a little.] In some individuals, the sting appears to cause a more severe effect: prolonged pain and stiffness. [You used "cause" (in two forms) twice in this sentence, and it seemed a little repetitious. I have tried to arrange the sentence to get rid of the repetition.[  Anything more serious than this is extremely rare. The Wopse can sting many times without sustaining harm, though they cannot produce very much venom at a time, so often the potency of stings will be lessened if an individual has had to fend off many intruders recently.

The male’s sting is nearly invisible to the naked eye, and thus in the popular imagination it is often confused with the ovipositor (egg-laying-tube) of the females, which resembles a very threatening stinger, half as long again as her body. This tube is used to deposit her eggs deep inside the bark of a birch tree, once she has used her strong mandibles to gnaw a hole therein.

Perhaps the most mysterious and weird of the Wopse’s abilities, however, is their strange talent of secreting something into the wood of a living birch tree which causes it to grow into the soft, nutritious flesh of a birchapple, providing food and shelter for a growing grub. How they do this is a great mystery, though prominent alchemists have suggested that they somehow inject or secrete a chymical that changes the growth pattern of the tree, though some traditional hobbit explanations tend to talk of the Wopse taking advantage of growths which the tree produces anyway, like fruit.

   Territory
Wopses are found throughout the forested areas of Santharia and Nybelmar – they rely on healthy birch trees, but need little else, so they are found almost anywhere such trees will grow. It seems that there are slight differences between Wopses which that use different species of birch. Those that feed on red birch, for instance, have a distinctive ruddy blush to their glass-like bodies and wings. Whether this helps the insects camouflage, or makes it easier for them to choose mates that subsist on the same kind of tree as themselves, is unknown, but it does make for a beautiful array of colourings among Wopses. Among the greatest strongholds of the insect are the moon hills in the Ehebion Peninsula, Nybelmar, where they are known as Iknuin by the Murmillions, and the Thaelon Forest of Northern Santharia.
   
   Habitat/Behavior
Wopses rarely venture below the canopy level of the trees in which they make their homes, and indeed only the males travel around with any regularity. Life for an adult Wospe revolves entirely around caring for their young – they have a very short adult life; only around a couple of months, and so they tend to spend this time in frantic activity. When the larvae pupate, and haul themselves out of their birchegg cocoons, they can pause only to let their new-grown wings uncurl and dry in the open air, before they must begin the task of preparing for parenthood. [This is a lovely image!] Adult Wopses do not feed – they will have spent their larval lives fattening on the rich flesh of their birchegg, and the jaws which adorn the female will be used strictly for excavation. Males have no jaws to speak of at all.

   Diet
As mentioned above, adult Wopses cannot eat; they subsist entirely on the reserves they build up as larvae. [Colon or semi-colon or period. Your choice entirely!] Wopse grubs, on the other hand, do very little besides eating. They chew the oily, nutritious flesh of the birchegg, eating at such a rate that after a few months the tree cannot replenish the flesh as quickly as it is eaten, and the grub will hollow out its birchegg entirely. [Because this sentence is so long, I'd recommend a period!] It is now that it will pupate, having exhausted its food supply.

   Mating
Females, on hatching, will begin looking for a suitable nest site, usually by walking along the branches, but they will fly to other trees if they can’t find suitable nest sites on foot. When they find a good spot – usually the fork of a strong branch, where the bark is thick and smooth, and there is no trace of rot or scarring to the tree – she will begin chewing through the bark. She uses her large jaws to work through the tough outer layer of the bark, until she has broken through into the softer under layers.

Males take to the wing as soon as their wings are ready for flying, [You use "wing" twice in this phrase! Maybe "take the to the skies"? Or something similar?] following the scent released by a female who has already settled on a good nest site. Often all the bircheggs for strals about will hatch in a short time, so hundreds of Wopses will seem to appear from nowhere.

When the males find a female, they land and inspect her carefully, brushing her all over to ensure that she is definitely receptive, female, and alive. [Teehee!] Once this is ensured, the pair will mate, and the female will lay eggs in the hole she has made, using the full length of her ovipositor to secure the eggs right under the bark. Once eggs are laid, both male and female will begin working carefully to build the nest. The male obsessively cleans away every speck of dirt, moss or debris from the area, whilst the female begins trimming through the bark in a wide circle all around the nest-hole. She bites down through the bark, but leaves it intact, separated from the rest of the bark. Any twigs growing in this area will be bitten off as low as possible. After this, the female’s job is done. With nothing more to achieve in her adult life, and no means of feeding herself (her jaws may be impressive, but there is little in the way of gut to back it up), most of her body is given over to energy storage and egg production. She will soon die. [You had three independent clauses in one sentence! I have tried to locate them and their associated modifiers and parsed them off to make it a bit easier to read.]

The male, however, has yet work to do. ["still has work to do"? I don't understand this use of "yet"!] He will guard the nest with his stinger as the section marked off by the female swells and thickens, eventually growing into a large, melderapple-sized protuberance, with smooth, glossy bark and a slightly spongy texture. Somewhere inside, the grub will grow, feeding on the flesh of his cocoon, whilst its father protects it, slowly starving as the birchegg grows. By the time the birchegg is fully developed, with bark hard enough to defend the grub against most attacks, the adult male will have starved to death.

   Myth/Lore/Origin
Wopses have had an understandably mixed reputation amongst the sentient races – on the one hand, they are undeniably pretty, in a fragile way, and provide the delicious birchegg galls to eat. On the other, they sting, and, according to most traditional views, lay their eggs in young birchegg galls, so that a fat grub spoils the potential meal. It must be admitted that there’s something unpleasant in the idea of eating something that has housed, and likely will still house, a Wopse grub. ["Something" is used twice in this sentence! Is there a way to be more specific here in order to eliminate one?]

In fact general consensus is largely still of the opinion that bircheggs are a natural “fruit” of birch trees, and the presence of Wopse grubs doesn’t come until after the gall has grown. Though various accounts have disproved this idea, it is still popular, for understandable reasons: who wants to eat something, however delicious, that has grown from the secretions of an insect? The Wopse doesn’t even have the popular association with industriousness and productiveness that the malise enjoys: honey may be the made from regurgitated nectar, but at least you rarely find a fat grub sitting in the middle of a jar.

Sadly, this means that Wopses are often killed on sight, with the aim of protecting the very harvest that they provide. In areas where this takes place regularly, people will often find the insects so reduced that there are no galls to harvest.

It’s partly because of this that the places where the Wopses seem to flourish best are those where people generally understand and accept that they are the originators of bircheggs.

The Helmondshire Halflings are the main benefactors of the flourishing Wopse territory in Thaelon forest. Among Halflings they are unique in accepting enthusiastically the Wopse as a valued food producer. Indeed, they are believed to be the first people to use bircheggs as food, and even the word “Wopse” is reputed to be a Halfling invention. There are stories among the Helmondshire people that the Wopse fell in love with the birchtree long ago, and that, once in a thousand thousand years, a birchegg will grow on an especially besotted birchtree, and hundreds of Wopses will labour to let it grow enormous, the size of a child, until eventually a baby pendrowe hatches from the great gall. Of course, most people nowadays have heard a little about real pendrowe, from the elves of the Thaelon forest [The elves of Thaelon are the Astyrhim, light elves--and are myth! They cannot tell the story if they are myth.], and so the story has lost a lot of its credence.

In the Ehebion peninsula of Nybelmar, a story with some notable similarities is told; there is a folk tale, popular among the shepherds and woodsmen who scratch a living in the moon hills, that goes thus:

Once, long ago, when the tallest of these trees was a sapling at the feet of its parent, there was a girl called Iknuin, who lived in these very woods. She was a beautiful creature, slender as glass [I don't think glass is traditionally slender. Maybe "fragile"?] and so pale in skin and hair that the light shone straight through her. She wandered in the woods for many a year, and saw no-one, so nobody asked her where she’d come from, and nobody asked her where she was going. And she was happy as dreaming. [I'm not sure if this last sentence is completely clear--but it is ever-so-lovely! I would not change it!]

Then one day a young lord came by her, warg hunting in the woods and having no luck. He saw a girl as bright as glass flickering through the trees, [Does glass usually flicker?] and he, being a cruel man and callous as they come, said to himself, “Well, there’s a pretty quarry, far prettier than any warg I’ve ever seen, why don’t we just have her?” and he chuckled to himself, and he chased her down, and he took her back to his big cliff top Drak, and made her his wife.

Iknuin was unhappy in the cliffs, away from her trees and dappled shade and soft leaf litter. [This is a beautiful line!] She was scared of her new husband and miserable to think that the child she carried would have to live its whole life in such poor company. So she waited until a moonless night, and she slipped out, and nobody saw because she was so pale as to be invisible, in the solemn darkness which Mari wrapped round her. She ran and ran, and cut her feet on the rock, and she ran some more, and skidded on scree and loose earth, and then the sun came up, and she still ran, and she could hear they had missed her and were coming to catch her once more. So she ran harder. She darted between the trees, and the leaf litter of needles and birch leaves gloved her tiny glass feet, and muffled their sound, and soothed their cuts and bruises. But she couldn’t slow down, for she could hear them coming with horses and dogs. Her husband was keen to keep his prized glass girl. [Perfect use of polysyndeton in this paragraph!]

She ran until she was near to dead, and had reached an ancient part of the forest, where the trees were a little more than trees are usually. [I don't understand this part! "Little more than trees are usually"?] She crashed down onto the ground, then, and yellow birch-leaves fountained up all around. She could feel herself falling into Mari’s long arms, and all she could do was to look up into the crooked boughs of the great old birch tree above her, and beg it to take her baby and hide it. She barely knew if she said it out loud or in her dream. The huntsmen arrived soon after, and picked up Iknuin and took her back to the cliff top Drak, and her husband, who was angry as ever he had been. He ordered that her feet be cut off, so she couldn’t run away again. And they were. [Very Titus Andronicus. So sad!]

So Iknuin sat in her rooms with her legs swinging above the floor, and she prayed to Mari, with her blood and tears and her bitter, glassy-sharp rage. And she told Mari all the suffering she had endured, and of her hope placed in the great birch tree so far away, and of her burning desire for revenge. And maybe Mari listened, and maybe she didn’t.

Back in the forest, the great old birch tree was swelling like a pregnant woman. A lump grew on its trunk, the size of a clenched fist. Weeks passed, and it grew to the size of a man’s head. Months passed, and it grew to the size of a child. Years passed, and it grew bigger and longer, until eleven years had gone by. The birchegg lump was the size of a girl, and the bark on the gall was stretched tight as a drum.

On that morning, eleven years to the day since she’d run away and been dragged back, Iknuin asked her husband if she might have some breadcrumbs. Seeing no way that she could try to kill him or escape with those tools, he consented. Iknuin thanked him graciously, and took the breadcrumbs out to the little window, high in the cliffs, and scattered them on the sill, and waited. By and by, a corbie came to dine on the breadcrumbs. When it had finished its meal, Iknuin said, “Don’t go just yet, sir! Could I ask you a favour?” The corbie saw no great reason to say no, and he thought Iknuin very pretty in a sad kind of way, so he said, “Go on, then.”

“In an old, older than ancient part of the forest" --she pointed out the window, where trees stretched into the distance-- “there is a birch tree with a girl growing inside, ready to hatch out. If you were to fly there and peck her free, and lead her back here, you can have carrion enough to feed you and any of your friends all autumn.”

And the corbie thought this a very good bargain, so he flew off with nary another word.
By and by, he came to the great old birch as he’d been directed, and he pecked and pecked at the great swelling until it split, and a slender foot poked out. He looked at the foot, with taloned toes as sharp and bright as glass, and he thought, “Strange", and he kept on pecking. A slender hand burst out, and began to tear the bark away, and he looked at the silvery skin and needly pointed fingers, and he thought to himself, “Strange indeed”, and he carried on pecking. Finally between them, they ripped the gall open, and a girl fell out, though a far from normal creature she was. Her skin was silver glass, and inside you could see her heart beating, red as heartbreak. Her fingers and toes were sharp as shards of shattered glass, and in one hand she held a long rapier, which dripped with a slow venom, smelling sweet as pinesap. Her eyes were like mirrors, and her hair was pinkish gold. She pushed herself to her feet and spat leaf-mould on the floor, and the corbie saw her teeth were barbed like thorn-bushes. “Well”, he said to himself, “There’s strange indeed and stranger still.” And then he shrugged to himself and puffed up his glossy black feathers, and said to her this: “Greetings, child, and welcome to the world. I bring word from your mother, who is trapped far off from here; she wants me to bring you back to her.” She looked at him with her mirror eyes, reflecting his beady black stare back on himself, and nodded. So he began the long flight back to the cliffs, and she followed, swinging her poisoned rapier like a child strolling in the forest. Which she was.

By and by, they came back to the cliff top Drak, and Iknuin’s child looked up at it and asked, “Does my mother live there, then?”

The corbie perched on a rock, and shrugged his black wings, and said, “Yes and no; she’s housed there, as you’d maybe house a goat or a pig, but I wouldn’t call it living, not really.” Iknuin’s child looked puzzled at this, and asked, “Doesn’t she like it?”

The corbie replied, “I doubt very much she likes it. Nor would you, I’ll hazard, if you were caught against your will by some cruel young lord, and made his bride, and kept locked up, far away from your home. That’s why she had you, I’ll warrant.”

“What d’you mean by that?”

The corbie laughed the short, hard laugh of carrion-eaters, who always get to laugh last. “Don’t you see? You’re not a normal little girl – look at that poisoned blade! Look at those claws! You’re a creature made for hurting people – a vengeance child. Unless I’m very much mistaken, your mother has asked you here solely so that you can run through her husband with that blade of yours.”

And that is what she did. And then she walked away, swinging her sword, and she never even said thank you to her mother who’d worked so hard to make her what she was.

The corbie and his friends feasted on the corpse of the cruel young lord, and were very pleased with the deal they’d made.

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The obvious aforementioned use of Wopses is in harvesting the galls in which they raise their grubs – known as bircheggs. The birchegg, if cut when fairly young, will have a great deal of soft, oily, and pleasantly sweet flesh, and only an egg or a tiny grub that needs removing – on balance, a great deal less trouble than the various seeds and pips that fill so many real fruits. Of course, the bark must be removed, as it is too leathery and woody to be edible. The flesh that remains is delicious raw, if fresh, but generally is cooked to make the best of the delicacy, or to allow it to keep for longer. Fried in milchbutter, sliced thin, a birchegg is a meal that few would refuse, even if they might usually disdain to eat the nursery intended for a fat little Wopse grub. Otherwise it can be dried, baked into little cakes, or even mixed and heated with milch, sweetbean extract and liquor to make a popular winter drink known among hobbits as Wopsegrog. [Sounds delicious!]

The birchegg remains edible as long as the grub lives inside it, but for obvious reasons, the longer the grub lives, the less flesh and the more bug there will be available. Seasoned birchegg harvesters generally learn to tap the gall lightly, and to listen to the sound it makes – a certain hollowness is discernible as the grub gets bigger. If the gall is really far gone, of course, it’ll be squidgy to the touch, and this kind is never picked. A birchegg clearly guarded by a male Wopse will be prized, as it will almost certainly be young enough to be worthwhile. Whether the birchegg is worth a sting or two is debatable.

Due to the Wopses’ extraordinary synchronicity in hatching out, there are generally too many galls in one place at a time for them all to be harvested, ensuring that enough Wopses survive each generation to breed the next. That said, in areas where trees are scarce, or the insects are persecuted for their stings or the belief that they spoil the galls, they often decline dramatically.
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« Reply #11 on: 13 December 2009, 05:50:29 »

wow, thanks for that comprehensive check, Rayne - looks like you could give my creative writing seminar tutor a run for his money! i'll get on them, but might not have that sorted for a bit - there's kinda an essay hanging about that i should probably do something about. undecided
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« Reply #12 on: 13 December 2009, 05:54:33 »

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[This is the first time you mention that this creature is an insect! Can you mention this in your firest sentence?]

Rayne, look at the categorisation: Categorization: bestiary>animals, smaller> insects> Iknuin

At any rate, the creature will be listed under insects on the site so I don't see how someone could miss that. Even if they came upon it through a random search, they would only have to wait two sentences before they find out that it is an insect. ;)
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« Reply #13 on: 13 December 2009, 06:02:12 »

At any rate, the creature will be listed under insects on the site so I don't see how someone could miss that. Even if they came upon it through a random search, they would only have to wait two sentences before they find out that it is an insect. ;)

I often find that I search for creatures via the search engine. Think about how a lot of us who do place entries, for example, might look for the the creatures and plants who inhabit an area: we don't go through the entire list of animals one by one, but do a search for "Santharia," "Nybelmar," or more specific terms. Perhaps I am the only one who goes about finding creatures in this manner?
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« Reply #14 on: 13 December 2009, 06:05:52 »

That's what I meant by people stumbling across it through a 'random search' - I should have been clearer: I meant the search function. But still - it's only in the third sentence. If seth can push it up to the first, fine - but if not, nothing to lose sleep over imo

Btw, I think I am developing a habit for going through your comments - your observations on style/grammar are always educational :D
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