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« Reply #15 on: 20 June 2011, 21:11:49 »
Yeah, I'd be very grateful for your input Kalina, I'm aware that the entries I was working from are subject to change. I'm completely willing to change things to fit. oh, and thanks for that Drasil! I'll alter it directly.
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« Reply #16 on: 20 June 2011, 23:43:57 »
I forgot you hadn't commented yet, Kalina.  My apologies.

Your approval is of course required before this can be blarrowed. 
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« Reply #17 on: 03 July 2011, 22:30:54 »
bump

Just a reminder that you need to look this over when you get a chance Kalina.   :)
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« Reply #18 on: 30 December 2011, 04:53:40 »
Eeps! Time for me to get back into the groove!

I will have comments in the next week! Now that holidays and some things  are over, it I should be here much more than before.
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« Reply #19 on: 01 January 2012, 15:45:06 »
yay! thank you Kali! look forward to setting this entry straight.
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« Reply #20 on: 02 April 2012, 23:05:03 »
Soooo... What about this one? The entry says: « Last Edit: 20 June 2011, 19:13:10 by seth ghibta », the caption reads "1st draft" and Kalina promises on 30 December 2011 to have comments done in the next week... shocked

Looks like this one got stuck in the space/time continuum or something! We might try contacting Kalina once more, or we just get it up on site...
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« Reply #21 on: 06 April 2012, 18:05:20 »
If it helps, I'd be happy to change anything Kalina doesn't like at any point she wants to look through it, and have an altered version replace it on site?

I am still around, honest, it's just that I don't have much time for writing lots of new stuff or big long comments what with dissertation and looking for some means of not starving to death when uni finishes.
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« Reply #22 on: 11 April 2012, 18:04:58 »
Sorry about all that guys, life has been a whirlwind - literally.

I actually like it the way it is at this point. I don't see anything glaring that would create a problem down the road (but who can see that far, really ;))

A great creature, seth! :D
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« Reply #23 on: 11 April 2012, 19:32:11 »
Okeydokey, then we can mark this one for integration!  thumbup
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« Reply #24 on: 21 April 2012, 10:57:25 »
Question, Seth: The second paragraph in the Overview looks more like notes than the final text... Does this still need adjustment?
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« Reply #25 on: 22 April 2012, 00:59:29 »
Argh! wow, I have no idea how that slipped through. I've ironed it out into full sentences and highlighted it in pink, thanks for spotting that Arti!
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« Reply #26 on: 22 April 2012, 09:37:14 »
Many thanks, Seth!  thumbup
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