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« Reply #15 on: 12 January 2012, 07:58:01 »
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I don't see how Northern Sarvonia is too far from Southern Sarvonia for the fish to have an extended range. There are many fish who have ranges following the coasts of a continent from the tropics to the far north. Hell, there are some fish who have a range from the abyssal zone to the mesopelagic.
That's true, but what you wrote for this entry doesn't sound like the same thing.  I got the impression that there's one population in central/southern Santharia, and another one in the Sea of Tears, and nothing in between.  I'm not an expert on such things, but such a distribution seems a little strange to me. 
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« Reply #16 on: 14 January 2012, 03:44:28 »
Oh, I see. I understand what you meant Mina, and after re-reading it, I can see that it doesn't imply the existance of two species. It all but states it. So, I made a few changes to the the entry, hopefully clearing that little burp up.
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« Reply #17 on: 14 January 2012, 06:12:41 »
That does look better.  However, the locations you mentioned are actually on the western side of Sarvonia, not the east. 
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« Reply #18 on: 16 January 2012, 06:52:09 »
Well now I just feel silly... Fixed that burp too, anyway.
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« Reply #19 on: 19 January 2012, 22:45:57 »
Okeydokey, Tagaloa... Looks like this one's ready to go up as far as I can see, eh? :) If so, I'd be happy to include it in this weekend's site update - you really did exceptionally well for a first contribution! Looking forward to more!
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