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« Reply #15 on: 19 May 2012, 23:22:22 »

Added the Overview section, where I discuss the state of current research!  thumbup

What do you think? It think it has shaped up quite nicely  cool
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« Reply #16 on: 20 May 2012, 15:37:44 »

In the first sentence there's something missing:

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Research on TRULTRUL, or Trollish, has led many researchers to dead ends in the past.

Also, the Overview usually contains the rough details of the entry to give the reader a good idea what we're talking about. While you mention the "primitive and animalistic quality" of the language, reading the Overview alone doesn't tell you much about the language, only that someone wrote a book on it, you know? So I'd suggest to add a few basic things still there, but other than that the entry looks pretty solid!  cool
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« Reply #17 on: 21 May 2012, 01:04:32 »

I can only add: I like this.
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« Reply #18 on: 21 May 2012, 03:36:13 »

Thanks Vesk! It's good to be working on Trolls again, isn't it? grin

Art, how's this?
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« Reply #19 on: 22 May 2012, 03:49:32 »

Better yup, though there could still be, say two or three more sentences in the Overview going into a few more details. Like mentioning growls, spits, slobber and hisses, a bit about syntax or non-verbal stuff. Because only the first sentence at the moment really tells you something about the actual language, so just a tad more is always helpful. :D
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« Reply #20 on: 24 May 2012, 02:27:58 »

I added a bit to the Overview section, don't know whether to be long or brief about it, being an overview. How's this? huh
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« Reply #21 on: 24 May 2012, 02:54:36 »

I'd say it's pitch-perfect now!  grin Another aura +1 for putting in all the effort, Ish, in order to satisfy a still whining webmaster! thumbup  grin
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