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Title: Sengren Axe Revision?
Post by: Deklitch Hardin on 03 June 2010, 06:29:05
Hi there,

I was just reading through this entry of mine, and I saw something in it that I think I may have gotten wrong. In the entry, I described the two youngest brothers involved in the creation of the axe in the following way.

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The Sengren was designed and built by Sengren "Ren" Thromgolin, the second son of Cyroan Thromgolin and was named after its designer. The third son of Cyroan, Cyrobaltt "Cyro" Thromgolin, developed techniques when using the Sengren to make it effective against infantry and cavalry.

This doesn't quite match up with the information provided in the Kyranian men entry. The history table there gives a few thousand years between the time of Cyroan and the three brothers ... a bit long for fathers and sons, me thinks. :D

It also describes the three brothers as 'scions' of Cyroan.

So, I think an edit of the Sengren Axe entry is in order. What is the best way to do so? Redo the entire entry in here, just changing the mention of them being 'sons of Cyroan' to 'scions of Cyroan'? or would me just reporting it as a mistake in the Report Mistakes/Typos thread be sufficient/easiest?

Dek


Title: Re: Sengren Axe Revision?
Post by: Azhira Styralias on 03 June 2010, 07:22:17
Simply revise the existing thread here (http://www.santharia.com/dev/index.php/topic,13576.0.html) with your changes. Use the plus posticon for additional changes to entry. Arti will then pick them up and change it for next update.  :thumbup:


Title: Re: Sengren Axe Revision?
Post by: Deklitch Hardin on 03 June 2010, 08:25:12
Thanks Azhira.