Title: Help Valan Write! Post by: Valan Nonesuch on 01 November 2010, 08:56:28 My NaNo Novel is going to be a Santharian one. Part of me is interested in the Year of Darkness and particularly in how people survived. So that's the subject.
However, I might need the help of you, the other compendiumists that give this world its diversity and flavour. At the moment, I'm throwing the characters together in a sort of roundabout way. I roll up a 3.5e Dungeons and Dragons NPC, and the convert it to an RP board style character sheet. So the question is this. You are one of about three dozen people living in a tiny village south of Astran. You wake up one morning (if it can be called that) to find that the sun hasn't risen. What is your reaction? Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Agran Velion on 01 November 2010, 10:01:42 Hmm, I would simply assume I had woken up early. Once I find out that it is indeed time for the sun to come up, I would be scared, it isn't natural. So...the end of days!
Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Cruciform on 01 November 2010, 15:43:16 "Oh, no sun. Hm... Well, back to sleep it is then."
The blinding rage and fear (and drinking) would come after waking the second time. Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr on 01 November 2010, 16:43:40 I would go back to sleep. Definitely. Or if I were rich, what the hell would I be doing getting up at all?
Otherwise, second time, I would assume a really bad night's sleep. When someone else came into my room shouting that the sun hasn't risen, I'd reply "No s*** Sherlock. It's about four am." Then when he told me it was four pm, I would go nuts. Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr on 01 November 2010, 16:54:10 PS: I would assume it was going to come up tomorrow, however.
Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Miraran Tehuriden on 01 November 2010, 19:42:20 End of days. Duh. Also; beginning of nights.
Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Perabium Pelatorium on 01 November 2010, 20:08:04 Ah, I am optimistic so I can see everything from a positive side, One day the sun will rise.... If not, well then night swimming on Croatian beaches, I will invite you all... :grin: :thumbup:
Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Valan Nonesuch on 02 November 2010, 01:05:03 Thanks folks.
Do we know what time of year the Year of Darkness began and ended during? It would dramatically affect how different things survived. I'm thinking mid-late fall for the start. Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Azhira Styralias on 02 November 2010, 01:31:07 For dramatic effect, I vote the Year of Darkness begins on a specific day of importance for Santharia. In essence, as if darkness covered the real world during Christmas Day. Now that would be scary!
Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Cruciform on 02 November 2010, 14:20:41 For dramatic effect, I vote the Year of Darkness begins on a specific day of importance for Santharia. In essence, as if darkness covered the real world during Christmas Day. Now that would be scary! No, no, my dear. The Zombie Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Valan Nonesuch on 03 November 2010, 04:19:34 Poll has changed. Kindly vote accordingly :grin:
Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Cruciform on 03 November 2010, 19:43:09 Winter is the most important day of the year! It's also the most important, and the most likely.
Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Bard Judith on 04 November 2010, 00:04:49 I think it would be particularly dramatic in the late winter, when one is already tired of the short days and long nights....
You are an Astran peasant farmer, a widower with some stock and a bit of land to tend. You fall into bed weary as Injera sets, blowing out the candle as the sweat still dampens your brow, knowing that you will be up again in the grey dawn as the taenish cock crows, ready to milk your two cows and take up your day's burdens once more... but the cock never crows. In the blackness you awake with a start. It is absolute darkness, as it usually is at three or four of the morning, but you are oddly wakeful. You fumble for your striker and light the bedside candle again. The hairs on the back of your neck prickle as you hear an odd sound...the lowing of a distressed cow? 'Sommat's at the stock', you mumble to yourself, pulling your boots on hastily and wrapping your coat around you. You seize the scythe leaning by the door - always sharp, and handy if any of those wildcats are after your chickens... The lanthorn by the door gets a coal from the nearly-dead fire...you built it up and banked it well for the night, though! It should still be glowing redly, smouldering to warm the cottage, at this hour... but you have no time to wonder about it now, as you stomp out the door towards the tiny barn. Nary a varmint in sight, around or in the barn. But Bassy and Nielly are lowing, their udders full and painful, as if you hadn't brought in the late milking that evening. The goats, too, are swollen with milk and their food troughs are empty. "Sommat strange,' you grunt again to yourself. But, like a good farmer, you see to your stock. 'Best check the taenish-coop, too,' you say, unhooking your lanthorn carefully. There as well, the hens are restless when their heads should all be under their wings, and the cock is fretting back and forth as if something ails his belly. Yet not hide nor hair of an egg-thief, a shir or wilderon or rat.... and no entrance for one either, as you keep your coop well-built and managed. You return to the house and build up the fire again. Sleeplessness has taken you, as surely as the stock, and you think you'll just sit and wait for the morn, for dawn must surely be soon. The time-candle on the mantle burns lower and lower... an hour, two, three... and just as slowly a sinking eats at your heart. Surely...surely... some greying on the horizon? A hint of pink at the edge of unrelenting black? Ah, if only this were a moon night, instead of clouded over; you could judge the time from his height in the dark sky! Yet slowly and surely the sick realization creeps over you: the dark is not rising. Noises in the distance penetrate your numb fear - more lowing of cows, a crackling of disturbed chickens, then screams....human screams...panicking women, or children? The village is roused, joined in common terror as the unnatural night continues. Someone has found a timepiece - the reeve's prized hobbit-made clock. You stumble out with your lanthorn, a bobbling little light to join the other little fearful lights, huddled in the village square. It is ten of the clock - in the morning - yet there is no morning.... and the breath of night's winter closes in... There will be no morning for a year. Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Shabakuk Zeborius Anfang on 04 November 2010, 03:56:43 Judy, it sounds like you should try and write a novel as well!
Regarding the survey: Winter, d'accord. Inspired by Judy's description, I remembered my experience of the full sun eclipse that was visible in parts of Europe about 10 years ago, and the accounts I read about it. It seems likely to me that if the sun was out of kilter, the first to notice would be the animals. In fact, they'd probably know that something's wrong hours before it occurs to the first human to wonder whether they'd woken up earlier than usual. Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr on 04 November 2010, 07:15:55 That is very atmospheric...
However, I cast my vote with a festival of Foiros, for the irony (and also because it could fit with my idea about where the sun went. But then Art dashed my hopes. I think.) But I think the idea that, instead of granting his blessing, Foiros instead curses the world is good. OR, how about a society having a yearly ritual...they make sacrifices and pray to Foiros for the sun to rise...and they do it...and wait...and wait...and...the sun doesn't rise. It's the kind of thing which topples empires. Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Valan Nonesuch on 04 November 2010, 07:32:05 Actually, the disappearance of the sun would have been a blessing at the time. The Dragonstorm was ravaging mid-Sarvonia. The sun disappearing effectively ended the Dragonstorm.
Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Bard Judith on 04 November 2010, 08:32:15 I suspect it would have been the kind of blessing that takes a while to sink in, though. Imagine the initial fear and panic when the SUN DOESN'T RISE, for pity's sake!
Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Valan Nonesuch on 04 November 2010, 08:35:54 I don't have to imagine it. I've been writing it. :buck:
Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Cruciform on 04 November 2010, 15:35:00 Actually, the disappearance of the sun would have been a blessing at the time. The Dragonstorm was ravaging mid-Sarvonia. The sun disappearing effectively ended the Dragonstorm. I don't have to imagine it. I've been writing it. :buck: Doesn't that technically mean you have been (No idea why I originally wrote 'writing'...) How is your story going? Have you reached any minor resolutions in the plot? Any major climaxes? Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr on 04 November 2010, 16:25:44 Actually, the disappearance of the sun would have been a blessing at the time. The Dragonstorm was ravaging mid-Sarvonia. The sun disappearing effectively ended the Dragonstorm. I suspect it would have been the kind of blessing that takes a while to sink in, though. Imagine the initial fear and panic when the SUN DOESN'T RISE, for pity's sake! Like the Great Fire of London. Ended the plague, so I hear, but I doubt that consoled anybody as they watched their houses burn. The relief comes later. And small villages may have escaped the notice of the dragons. Title: Re: Help Valan Write! Post by: Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels on 07 November 2010, 06:26:27 The date when the sun vanished is already fixed:
Quote 1649 b.S. The Vardưnnian Atonement It is said that the Burning God, Foiros, finally hears the bidings of the human priests begging for the help of the gods to finish the torment of the dragons: At the end of the Caelerethian year the burning orb of the sun descends below the world and returns not before one year has passed, so that a deadly coldness afflicts dragons and humans alike. Many dragons and humans fail to survive this so-called Vardưnnian Atonement in the Year of Darkness. So, I would say, it was Yearturn. |