Title: New story in progress
Post by: Greybark on 29 May 2000, 23:32:00
Just finished the first draft. it is currently 4,300 words (9 pages in Word) long, an will get longer as I add better descriptions and conversations than it currently has. Basically it's Greybark's backstory, why he left the valley on an owl, etc.
It currently has no name and hasn't even been spellchecked yet.
Just wanted to let all of you know
Comments?
at: 5/29/00 7:55:30 am
It currently has no name and hasn't even been spellchecked yet.
Just wanted to let all of you know
Comments?
at: 5/29/00 7:55:30 amTitle: Re: New story in progress
Post by: Greybark on 18 June 2000, 05:59:00
Up to 6,000 words.
Beginning to be more far-reaching because of introduction-flashes for some of the more important Brownies of the clan.
Spoiler Alert.
One of the characters has firsthand info on what Santharia will become in five thousand years
Beginning to be more far-reaching because of introduction-flashes for some of the more important Brownies of the clan.
Spoiler Alert.
One of the characters has firsthand info on what Santharia will become in five thousand years
Title: Nice to hear
Post by: Artimidor Federkiel on 18 June 2000, 08:40:00
Nice to hear of your progress, Greybark But what the hell is this strange hint at the end? Will Santharians build the nuclear bomb in 5.000 years? Will they fly away on spaceships?? Does anyone still remember Artimidor at this time??? Is this character you speak of someone who went back in time, now turned to a brownie by some scientific device shrinking humans???? *haha*
But what the hell is this strange hint at the end? Will Santharians build the nuclear bomb in 5.000 years? Will they fly away on spaceships?? Does anyone still remember Artimidor at this time??? Is this character you speak of someone who went back in time, now turned to a brownie by some scientific device shrinking humans???? *haha* 
Title: Re: Nice to hear
Post by: Greybark on 18 June 2000, 09:00:00
No nuclear bombs.....that wouldn't fit a fantasy world very well. Lets just say that someone shows up (a Brownie) that everyone is afraid of, but claims to have knowlege of the distant future, and be working toward an unknown goal towards changing it......then again, so far she's a bit character....she could be lying, I guess....haven't gotten that far yet.
BTW, just about ready for you or a Beta reader to preview this, chapter 1, before putting it online :) at: 6/17/00 6:02:11 pm
BTW, just about ready for you or a Beta reader to preview this, chapter 1, before putting it online :)
at: 6/17/00 6:02:11 pmTitle: Waiting for Chapter 1
Post by: Artimidor Federkiel on 19 June 2000, 05:05:00
Ok, mail it over there, Grey Eventually I will give it to Thalydia after I had a first glance at it!
Eventually I will give it to Thalydia after I had a first glance at it!