We do not a pheasant developed yet however there have been a couple mentions of pheasants in some entries. So I think it is safe to say there are pheasants but we don't know much about them. However I think it is safe to say Centoraurians would know about them. It is harmless anyway and wont cause a problem if we just establish that fact.
Nice work Amabella. I like that you are giving a full entry to one of the grasses mentioned in the grasses overview. You incorporated what was given in that short description very well. I also like that you tied this to the Aurora plains. I don't think they specified in that entry which type of grass was growing there. This fits well to the description in the Aurora plains and maybe Artimidor can insert a mention of the Pheasant Grass there. Finally you seem to have picked up on the Santharia measurements and all.
I really don't have much to give by way of improvements. Your writing seems well done, I didn't catch spelling errors or grammar problems (not that this is my forte or anything) and I simply refuse to be picky or opinionated about grass. We can save that for more complex entries later on.
Welcome Aaronfoster. Great to have someone willing to help others. That is indeed the core of this website, dreamers helping each other and developing a world we can all enjoy. I hope you don't mind commenting on pictures too. I don't write much myself.
How's this Altario? It is longer and thicker at the handle, pommel, and guard. Is it enough? Or did you really just want the pommel part of the handle thickened and lengthened. The change took me less than 10 minutes so don't worry if you want it altered further.
BTW- keep in mind this is a hand-and-half weapon not a two-handed weapon.
It is not very often one comes across a true Odomon Sword. Even rarer to find one wrapped in the hide of a Berg Pony. I simply had to capture this on canvas. The owner asked me to not reveal his name. A number of would-be thieves have already tried to take it.