Nice work Amabella.    I like that you are giving a full entry to one of the grasses mentioned in the grasses overview.   You incorporated what was given in that short description very well.  I also like that you tied this to the Aurora plains.  I don't think they specified in that entry which type of grass was growing there.  This fits well to the description in the Aurora plains and maybe  Artimidor can insert a mention of the Pheasant Grass there.  Finally you seem to have picked up on the Santharia measurements and all.

I really don't have much to give by way of improvements.  Your writing seems well done, I didn't catch spelling errors or grammar problems (not that this is my forte or anything) and I simply refuse to be picky or opinionated about grass.  We can save that for more complex entries later on.

Welcome back Nsiki.   

Nice work Judy.  I particularly like the jewels on the belt. 

I got the same message.

Welcome Aaronfoster.  Great to have someone willing to help others.  That is indeed the core of this website, dreamers helping each other and developing a world we can all enjoy.  I hope you don't mind commenting on pictures too.  I don't write much myself.

Great to have you.

Welcome Amabella. Great to see some new folks around here.  Indeed things have been slow lately but that can change in a blink of an eye in my experience here.

I should be able to complete a few pics for Shoals this next week.  Then hopefully get to some other general pics that I can post for comments. 

In the meantime are there entries that anybody would like comments on?  Anybody there?

Yeah I figured you would think you hurt my feelings or something.   

okey dokey. sorry this took so long to get done.  The change wasn't difficult so no problem at all.  Do you think this takes care of the problem?

Another Aura + for Art for taking time during his vacation to work on this.  I am so grateful for his support.  I never meant for this game to be such a big undertaking.

How's this Altario?  It is longer and thicker at the handle, pommel, and guard.  Is it enough?  Or did you really just want the pommel part of the handle thickened and lengthened.  The change took me less than 10 minutes so don't worry if you want it altered further.

BTW- keep in mind this is a hand-and-half weapon not a two-handed weapon. 

Altario

That will take less time to fix than the time it is taking me to write this. So no problem at all. I will wait to see if there are any more comments before presenting the new version.

Thanks for popping in to comment.   

It is not very often one comes across a true Odomon Sword.  Even rarer to find one wrapped in the hide of a Berg Pony. I simply had to capture this on canvas.  The owner asked me to not reveal his name. A number of would-be thieves have already tried to take it.  

Comments Welcome

I am sorry Talia but it is too late.  My fragile artistic ego is damaged beyond repair.   However if you were to mail me some homemade cookies or something that might help.  

Seeker sneaks away before Talia can see the mischievous grin creeping on his face.

Welcome Seagazer!

I am but a lowly artist/mage trying to make his way in Santharia.    Good to see we may have someone here who can help Art and Grinch on the back-end.  While Art has done a stupendous job with what he has, I think a fresh look is always welcome.  I really hope you find a home here and enjoy the site.  We could always use a person with your talents.